okay, so with the return of otakugaijin (take this positively!!!) to my walling critiquing aid, my bad habit of walling two pieces at the same time (which i acquired since Day 1 of my brief walling career) has come back as well. again, this is positive, because this bad habit had once before allowed me to produce my best wall to date.
so i was fooling around with this comic scan on Newtype maganize and tada. a wallpaper. why did i even bother making it? because it's cute!...well, chibis are cute. so here is yet another citrus-related piece from me, kind of like a combination of my second (Lemonade Anyone?) and third (Don't mess with me--I've got...a pot of paint!) walls. =]
i think with some polishing it can make it to the galleries (i see a couple of extraction issues that i failed to notice and fix during my vectoring, for example...going to fix that, sorry). do you beg to differ? if so, tell me. i want to hear all about it.
edit: and yeah, i realize i forgot my sig too. >_<
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6 years, 6 months ago
That is definitely orange juice. Lol. I don't see anything wrong with the wallpaper at all, really.
6 years, 6 months ago
It looks fine to me nothing wrong with it except for as above the lemonade is orange juice.
6 years, 6 months ago
okay okay, i forgot about that detail that i thought i would change about the scan. ;P XD sorry. i'll definitely go make it yellow so that it looks like lemonade. you say the rest is fine? well, i'm glad. but i'm going to wait the full 24-hours recommended for SZ posts anyway before i try submitting this one. it's cute and simple, guess i'm going back to that style again. lol complex and detailed didn't quite get me anywhere.
6 years, 6 months ago
Actually looking it again, there seems to be a slight white on Shinn's hair. Indicated here. Maybe it's just me. =[ I suck at vectoring, so don't take me too serious. Lol.
6 years, 6 months ago
it's not you, teresevo. i mentioned that error in my first post, if you look back and read it ;] it's the technical error i have to fix and i noticed it right after i used the wall to see how it looks. but thanks for pointing it out anyway.
6 years, 6 months ago
I like it! nothing wrong that I dont see, vector is good and perfect! Maybe the orange bar behind the text "the it thing" should go, and maybe put it closer to the main text but overrall nothing wrong with it, lemony goodness all the way!
6 years, 6 months ago
oh this is definitely a pleasing wallpaper XD! the vector is perfect .. i think it's ready to submit =P i dont think there are some big problems .. really .. wow i love your wp XD
6 years, 6 months ago
okay, so i'll go back on my word of waiting for 24 hours. not going to have much time to hang around AP and wait for more replies. and i think it's okay to go, and i've had some agreement from you guys. so i touched up the small technical error with shin's hair, added my sig and moved the small text line. i opted to keep the bar though (at a lower opacity) because i had one in my first lemonade wall. so thanks for the round of thumbs up and wish me some luck (though some of you might say i don't really need it.) ^^
6 years, 6 months ago
Even though you don't need it ;D Luck is wished.
6 years, 6 months ago
I don't want to turn this from a thread about walling into a thread about our conversation, but deku-fairy, thanks ;] i'm going to go submit it now that i'm done replying to PMs.