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~gabi-chan

5 years, 4 months ago

 

I think it's quite plain, but I kind of like it... I've just started making wallpapers, this is my second one. I have no experience at all, so help me out here ^^ Any suggestions??

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6508/peachcpia4nq.jpg

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~lazaruda

5 years, 4 months ago

 

It's not plain, your wallpaper is ok, try to understand that its your first time you make your wallpaper.........ok..........

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~SpiritedCetra

5 years, 4 months ago

 

Well I'm not a huge fan of momo in color (i usually don't like the way the artist colors her) but I rally like the picture you chose. I think the outline of the scan needs to be evened out, perhaps a thicker line around the whole outside. The white seems kind of plain, although plain is good as well.

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~gabi-chan

5 years, 4 months ago

 

here it is: http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7875/peachcpia25vy.jpg

I evened out the outlines... but when I tried to do it with their hair... it turned out kind of weird... so I left it just like before.... Is the BG too boring??

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*zazou8888

5 years, 4 months ago

 

The ticker version of the outlines is pretty good especially for a beginner! ;) But you still need to make them a bit smoother now. And about the background... Well it's fine but can't you add something like texture or an huge scan of her fainted away in the background...

Cause right now it's pretty plain and also those horizontal lines give me headache after a while watching them... You need to remember that a wall is something you'll have on your computer screen... ;)

The writing is fine and the scan pretty good quality. It's a nice start for a second wall! ;)

Keep up the good work ^_^ But avoid too simple effects and background for a start... A simple wall is something REALLY hard to do when you want it to be accepted here ;)

Good luck!

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~gabi-chan

5 years, 4 months ago

 

thanks, zazou8888... I really am trying to do my best... but sometimes my best isn't good enough T_T well... anyway... I tried to do what you told me and here it is...

In this one I added the scan fainted away on the back and kept the horizontal lines to see how it came out:http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/9286/peachgdli6ia.jpgAnd in this one I took off the horizontal lines:http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e292/Hiei_Master/Gabi-chan/peach2.jpg

I think it really looks much better XD Thanks ^^ But... which one?? Do you think now it's good enough to submit to AP?