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$Foxrain

6 years, 3 months ago

 

I'm not sure wich one I should go with: This one F. Y. I. "Mangetsu", literally means "full moon" in Japanese.

Or, this one:

Any suggestions, or help would be much appreciated! ^_^

Thank you so much, Foxrain

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`asa01

6 years, 3 months ago

 

i'd go with "mangetsu" but in the lower left corner. that's a combination of the two. actually, it doesn't quite matter whether you put "full moon" or "mangetsu", but just keep in on one line and in the lower left part of the wall.

your scan looks horizontally stretched. =/ if i'm right about that, then please keep in mind never to stretch your scans. it just ends up look odd. this looks a bit odd but isn't too bad. if i'm wrong about it, well, then ignore this part.

as well, are you going to add anything more to this? because I think a black bg+scan+glowy spots+moon+text is a bit lacking in the creativity department. you could have a larger moon, a navy blue sky so that some parts light up by the moon can show up as blue, some stars, maybe some clouds, and the glow spots could be turned into fireflies... just some random suggestions. =] think in that direction.

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~wax-butterfly

6 years, 3 months ago

 

Hiya!! I'm agree with asa01. I prefer "mangetsu" than "full moon". The bg seems to be too simple. You should put something else such as moon or sky. Try to use brushes. About the text, maybe it will be nicer if it you put it on lower part of the wall. One more thing, try not to stretch the scan. It looks weird. Fix it. By the way it still a nice work and I'm sure it'll be one of my fave after you've improve it. Good Luck then.

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~lightgiffaree

6 years, 3 months ago

 

Err..., I'm a newbie and I don't really think my comments will help you, but I think rather than "Full Moon" or "Mangetsu", you should put kanji writings of "Mangetsu" there... it'll make the text look more Japanese-styled... But if you'll go on with the romaji writings, that's up to you... I think your wallpaper and your concept are cool, but I agree that it's weird that the scan's stretched. Just improve it. I think ~asa01's suggestions are enough to make your wallpaper looks great, but I think it's better if you have your own concept. It's original! Good work!

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$Foxrain

6 months, 1 week ago

 

Thank you very much for your help!

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