Wallpapers and Walling

Beautifully executed! But the colors hurt my eyes a little. It may be a little to bright or something, but that may just be me. I love the way you did the trees too!

Whoahohoo! Nice job man. This really is a good job for your first wallpaper. If it's vectored I think you should make a 1600x1200 version(just an opinion), I think your colors are sort of overly biright and should be turned down a little it though.And also nice job with the white leaves they really add a nice touch.

Good luck

Hmmm, personally the Bleach title is a turn off. Maybe take it off? It sort've looks odd just there in the corner, and it conflicts with the purple; it distracts alot. The main text also looks weird...Maybe its the way its warped. Other than that, the colors are ok, a little bright, but good. The background is perfect; Byakuya's hair however looks a smidge choppy.

8/10 ^_^ Good job!

the bleach logo is bit fuzzy and the text has to pop-out more

I actually think this version looks alot better. It's alot easier on the eyes. Now that that's fixed maybe yu should try decreasing the opacity on your text, it looks a little to solid and takes away too much attention from the rest of the wall.

Keep working on it Good luck

Waa, fancy and sparkly text *_* The first thing that I didn't like much about this wall is that the colors are a bit too saturated (not sure if that's the word) You should remove the bleach logo or tone it so that it blends better with the wall because it stands out too much too. I'm still not sure about the sparkly text, but the rest seems to be coming along quite well. ^^

Yayness text was anihilated *grin* I like it now. Other things I found: - You're using the same sparkly brush, you should try to use different brushes and combinations. - The background is kinda blurry, I don't know if it's ok or if it's too blurry, you should ask someone else.

Hey it looks alot better without the text in my opinion. Your BG is kind of blurry but it's not so blurry that it's a really big problem, the blur on the grass actually looks better than the sakura trees though. If you can find any way to make your BG look sharper, I would recommend it. But if not, I think this make for a nice first paper for you.

I really like this version! Good job making the changes. :)