Flying free Wings flapping in the cold breeze Thinking everythings alright Until theres no light...
Seeing the darkness for the first time Makes me scared and I can't fly anymore Looking around as the wind hums a rhyme Hoping I would soar...
I don't want to be in the darkness It feels like someone is watching me I want to fly free once more But there is no more light you see...
Its all a dark world With shadows lurking from the trees The clouds never die away So the sun can't shine in...
Why can't I fly away? Why can't I see the sun through the thick clouds?
All By Me =]
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5 years, 11 months ago
For some reason I could see this being a song.
5 years, 10 months ago
I agree wiv u misake-san. It's a really tuneful poem but the endin doesnt seem right for me...maybe u shuld add sum more about the darkness consumin u or summin, or maybe include the punchline where light does come..but from within urself and ur need to fly. But the poem is just fine as it is...so whether u wanna tweak it up or not is up to you.