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~Huuste1

3 years, 1 month ago

 

This is something I started working on last night and got finished earlier today, so I decided to give it a go and post it here.

I started working with the BG on this one and after I thought that looked decent enough, I decided what to do with it. I'm pretty much happy with everything else except the clouds. I'm not sure what it is, but there's just something bugging me about them, so I thought maybe you guys can give me some pointers on where to go from here.

Anyways, here it is.

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`Tens

3 years, 1 month ago

 

Well then... lets started. D:

I'll list it so it's easier to see.

Clouds: - Really good cloud render in terms of shape and shadowing it... better than what I can do! - It's a bit grainy, smooth it out - There's a hard black edge at the bottom of it, from copy and paste from filtering it on another canvas? - Relight clouds from the left - Yellow clouds? - Transparent clouds over the moon make it color and texture the moon and merge them together instead of overlaying the moon... just make the clouds solid for now

Moon: - Realistic moon does not really belong to the wallpaper... maybe make your own? - Move it to the left since the character is lighted from the left

Grass: - Nice shape but hard vectors don't fit in this wallpaper - Make it glow from the top and have it cast a front shadow - My grass I traced using yours is far from perfect but it's a general idea... my grass is a bit too vibrant for the wallpaper so probably use duller colors - There's more than 1 way to do grass, try out different lighting and methods!

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~gawgeng747

3 years, 1 month ago

 

Nice...(XD)Nice...

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~Huuste1

3 years, 1 month ago

 

Thanks Tens! I looked at the list you put there and really started to see the incompleteness of my first version. I fixed a few things here and there, mostly the clouds and the grass. The clouds still look a bit grainy, but at least they look like clouds now. And the grass, well I can't say that I'm totally happy on how that turned out, because I love how you made it look and since I'm novice making wallpapers, I can't say I fully understand everything you said.

But yeah, here's what I got so far.