hi^^ I tried something new because my first wall was no god^^ Thanks for any advice. Did some changes. Added a little text. Kanade is now i the center and the piano is in the right corner with a sakura tree. The lines have a little blure looks smother :)
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/5083/angelbeatskanade2.jpg
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1 year, 11 months ago
Top left corner feels little empty. It could be filled with a fuzzy cloud or some distant birds. I think that the piano in background steals too much attention from everything else so I suggest switching sides with the Kanade in front and having it closer the edge of wall. Ornament lines are little too sharp for my eyes so i'd blur them a bit. I like light colors and the piano in background fits the image very well. This will be a great wall when it is finished.
1 year, 11 months ago
Looks very nice. Gentle, soothing colors and the wavy lines behind her are a nice touch.
1 year, 11 months ago
I think it's very nice. Maybe you can tone down the colors of the lines behind her. Also I recently used those sakura petal brushes and had the same problem with the transparency of them. You should go back and repaint them so they arent so transparent. Goodluck! .(n_n).
1 year, 11 months ago
thanks for all the advice it is now in the Gallery^^ Im happy it got acceptet.