ok, i've done this poem months ago ( around january ).:)finally, i decide to post it here after correcting it again and again <img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/blink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='blink.gif' /> :)hope to hear about what you guys think about it since my english is not that good...anyway, comments are welcome!!! thanks! lol<img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='laugh.gif' /> :):)<b><u>Fallen Angel</u></b>:)Waking up,:)in the world of darkness,:)emptiness,:)filled upon your soul,:)alone,:)in the dark fortress,:)with hate and fear:)beyond the oracle utterances.:):)Reaching hopelessly,:)to the stars above,:)that seems to be:)far beyond your reach,:)dreams shattered,:)like broken glasses,:)tears:)filling up your ice blue eyes.:):)fallen angel,:)your heart is bleeding:)with grief and pain,:)your wings are broken:)like shattered dreams,:):)How I long to:)wipe away the memories:)of your haunting past:)or:)heal your wound that once filled with rage:)and emptiness.:):)Free your soul,:)away from your wildest dreams,:)away from your emptiness,:)far,far away.:)fallen angel,:)rest your soul...
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8 years, 1 month ago
This is a sad poem.:)Wish I can see the wallpaper of that fallen angel ..........why don't you try making a wallpaper regarding this poem.Don't you think it will make the poem more ' beautiful '? <img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tongue.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tongue.gif' />:)Anyway, I think your poem is quite okay but I myself is not that pro. in this field..........better hear the comments from others!:):)Work harder!
8 years, 1 month ago
i think it's a really nice poem too XD:)nice job reesha, yeah with ur poem u could make a wall:)and actually feel the emotion of ur poem while making it:)most of my walls are based on the feeling the characters is:)giving off XD
8 years, 1 month ago
your english is fine reesha, like tate mentioned the important part is the emotional charge you get. beautiful job.
8 years, 1 month ago
thanks for the comments...i'll try to write more poems when i have the mood and post them here..
<img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' />:)anyway, i'll try the team of this poem and make it into a wall after i improve my walling skills....thanks again...lol<img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='laugh.gif' />
8 years, 1 month ago
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(reesha @ Apr 11 2005, 12:11 PM)</div>filling up your ice blue eyes.:) :):)Isn't it supposed to be icy blue eyes? I'll leave it up to you to correct it, but I dunno if it is correct:)Three things to say about this poem: Short, Simple but Emotional. Did you go through a course that teaches literature? I tried writing some poems but they were alll *bah*. Great poem! As everyone mentioned, a wallpaper will build up the emotion...
8 years, 1 month ago
well,pokemaniacY2K, i didn't go through literature courses and just attend english classes in school
<img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /> :)anyway, we only learn a little about english literature and i write this poem just according to my mood.plus, i write down what i think before adding up all of my ideas into a poem...it came out good just because of my luck...i guess <img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/huh.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='huh.gif' /> :)thanks again... lol<img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='laugh.gif' />
8 years, 1 month ago
What i do when i write a poem: a story by pokemaniacY2K:)first, he types out anything he can think of related to the title he's working on.:)secondly,he deletes away words which he thinks is exaggerated.:)third, he looks for the words which rhyms (<-- dunno spelling lol..) and puts then in the end of each stenza... (<-- again, dunno the spelling XD):)and he adds rubbish words in the beginning of each stenza (...) to the rhyming (...........) words:)The final results is ... rubbish poems XD:)The ENd.
8 years, 1 month ago
Nice Job reesha besides wat pokemaniacY2K was saying :)ur peom is soft and sweet :D<img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /> I think u hit a soft spot *starts :)to cry* for your information these r tears of joy!