Wallpapers and Walling

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~josephine12cute

1 year, 6 months ago

 

I made a new Saiyuki wallpaper and I tried to focus on typography. I'm planning to join in a school vs. school contest so I made some experiments on this wallpaper.

Also, I'm not satisfied with how I made the title. Please help me, AP experts!!!

Here the image:http://media-wallpapers.theotaku.com/1600-by-1200-770839-20101123091045.jpg

Here's the wallpapers details (though, they're not that important):http://www.theotaku.com/wallpapers/view/209408/i_am_who_i_am

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°PaoPorsche

1 year, 6 months ago

 

There's something wrong with the grammar, "Can a thing NOT visible be believed?" I think you should rephrase that.

You could try "Seeing the Unseen" since your talking about Goku being able to see the void.

Hope that helps. Again, if you're going for typography, JD's the man... Hehe. Good luck in your contest

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~josephine12cute

1 year, 6 months ago

 

I think the grammar is wrong too... (76 kya ako sa english...)

though I want it to be a quote... not just "seeing the unseen" but I think it will fit, I just want it to be in a quote-style

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`srsng

1 year, 6 months ago

 

How about "Seeing the void" as the typo... also don't use black, as you can see, the typo became the center of focus when you view the wall, we don't really want that now do we?

The typo in his hair is kinda bit messy, it's like you placed the typo randomly. you can make the shapes in his hair typo over all. that's some suggestion though

hope it helps

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~josephine12cute

1 year, 6 months ago

 

I'll be fixing the typo effect.. I haven't seem to get it right...

although, I'm actually not sure what color should I place in the title

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`Xyrick

1 year, 6 months ago

 

i did the same thing..

http://yfrog.com/j0hatjj

first i think, you should research more words, cause i can see some of the words being repeated in the wall...

try using different fonts, if your having problem finding fonts, go to dafont.com...

and i think you should change the background to a more lighter color for the fonts to be more noticeable...

on the other hand.. you could use different colors for each words in order to give an overall awesome look to your wall..

hope i helped you, of you have anymore question, just pm me.. goodluck!

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~karenpai

1 year, 2 months ago

 

The wall looks good but i understand what you mean by not satisfied, i think it's because there's a random space on the right hand side and the words didn't really stand out at first glance. it may be as simple as lowering it a couple of notches.

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