Wallpapers and Walling

I really like your wall. In my opinion, the colors and the font are great. I also like the texture/brush you use behind Shirohige very much. But there are a few things that I would change. First I would not put the character on the midle of the wall: I would drag everything (the character and the text) to the right so that it would stay more and less the same empty space of each side of the composition. Second, your signature: the white color you use protrudes on the wall (it was your sig the first thing I notice when I saw your wall). Try to reduce the contrast: use a thinner font or use the same color gradient of the text above. You can also play with the collors to highlight the more important words (Eg: Link1, Link2)

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Um... sorry to say, but this one looks very simple. it seems like you used few brushes, standard font on the BG and putted character on the top. Under character there are some water splashes -- clean them, they are absolutely out of place. Also try to clean the whole wallie, because now it looks like a mess. You blurred and mixed edges of character with character. Also you should zoom him, but be careful: he is already really jagged. It hurt eyes. Colors are bright, but because the character is mostly white|light it really doesn't work in a good way. Try to look through galleries here on AP and work harder, ppl here gives good advices listen to them. Gambatte kudasai!

Hey,

If it's possible I would make the main character larger...try to have him take up more of the composition from top to bottom. I would also move him over (in the first/rainbow wall) to the right as a fellow commenter has suggested.

I do like the color schemes and brushes used for both, but to make your character the real focal point, I would increase his size.

Good luck.

Well, well, well----I must say that I very much love your second version. It's simple, nice, and bad-ass. The black aura that's being released from below him is really cool. \m/

Oh, the 2nd one is really better! I'd like to agree that you should zoom character a lil'. Also cracks are good, but change lil' their perspective.

the second one is cool that's for sure but the character itself is too small you should make him a little bigger :)

I love the feeling you tried to prescribe to the wall. It really matches the navy logo. But having shirohige standing on those black mist makes it seem like he's drowning in kurohige's ability. Unless that is of course your intentions then theres nothing wrong. but it's just food for thought;d