Alright, being on a DBZ kick, I had also be playing around with this wall paper for a few days. I liked the SSJ Vegeta pose and have had "You Will Leave a Mark" (A Silent Film) stuck in my head. Also, I felt the lyrics really do work with Vegeta and all the emotional strife and turmoil that he has going on inside, despite his stoic demeanor.
I spent a lot of time working with the bg, as I wasn't quite sure how to give this Vegeta pose a bg. Finally I came up with a action line/explosion/intensifying of his power concept. Feeling that was still too plan, I added some slight grunge textures to the bg and worked on incorporating a blurred effect emanating form Vegeta.
Obviously, the crux of this wall for me is the lyrics. I have a burning desire to incorporate these lyrics, but obviously the way they are now don't mesh well with the wall. I am looking for suggestions.
If I have to, I can omit the text, but that leaves a lot of blank space on the left...unless that looks alright. I would really appreciate suggestions on how I could incorporate the lyrics into the wall, so that the main focus is still Vegeta.
Thanks.
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2 years, 2 months ago
maybe you can put the lyrics in the BG? it doesn't have to be fully seen but just spread it in the BG each line with different size and different opacity? if you want to incorporate all the text than I think there's no other way than doing it like the current one...you should just focus on part of the lyric that you REALLY want people to see :)
2 years, 2 months ago
Yeah...do something with the text instead of just pasting them there. Even personalizing the text might help as well.
2 years, 2 months ago
definitely needs a background, whether it's abstract or scene. text can be fun to incorporate into a design, with the scan of Vegeta if it's a full shot and not just partial as shown, I'd move him more to the middle for focus.
PM me for any idea,tips etc
2 years, 2 months ago
I wasn't going to give me thoughts on this wall because of the lyrics. I personally don't like them but besides that it easy enough to incorrperate the words or list of lyrics you want to use.
Since, you are using a 'lined' power background. Just run your words within the lines. Granted they wont be as big but as suggested before just use your optic to have what you want to really show.
Personally I think some other lyrics would work better but thats just me and my not liking the ones you've got but its not my wall.
Also, when putting the text/lyrics in you can break it up as if it were though. Instead of one fluent run of words. Like putting "I'm so Ashamed...Trouble I have caused...All these Un-Opened Doors... What Have I Become?!..." You get the idea. Just a way of taking it apart and making it a little more edgy for our Vegeta here.
But really... I do wish you'd find some other lyrics... but once again that's just me... I had to put that in there again. smiles
Hope it helped anyways; ::Angel::
2 years, 2 months ago
Thanks again for the comments. I will see what I can do.
2 years, 2 months ago
I really can't give you that much advise but if you want to put the lyrics in the wall I agree with ashuraeffect that you should use different size and different opacity. If you want an example of text used well in a BG in my mind look at some of Mendy-chan's(jigoku-nin) walls.
2 years, 2 months ago
I'm afraid the BG and texts don't match in some ways. Maybe you can work more how to creatively suit the BG with your typo. Good luck. :)