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Fairy Tales

RED as BLACK

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~Criob

1 year, 2 months ago

 

Military man, James Benet, is on leave from the army because his daughter was dianosed with cancer. Willing to to anything for his daughter, he used his savings to pay for her treatments ,but they had no effect. After walking out of the hospital his daughter was in he saw a red light coming from an ally way. He went to check it out and a man, with a black suit, was standing there, and the light shinied behind him. The said he had a deal for James, but James would not listen and turned to leave. Only he could not, for the ally was gone, no, the entire hospital was gone. It was pure darkness, except the red light and the man in the black suit. The man then said he could save James's daughter. Feeling desperate he rush to the man and said if he could save his daughter he would do anything. The man smiled a sly smile, and then said lets shake on it. James took the man's hand and felt a sharp prick, that felt as if his hand would explode. James cried out and when the pain past he was back in the ally way. He looked at the palm of his hand and tatooed in red ink was the word "BLAK"

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~Criob

1 year, 2 months ago

 

Tell me what you think of this storyline.

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~panda2011

1 year, 2 months ago

 

Story is good so far. What is the deal that was going to be made?

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~Criob

1 year, 2 months ago

 

That was to be told in the next writing

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~Criob

1 year, 2 months ago

 

Do you think i should continue the story

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~panda2011

1 year, 1 month ago

 

yes i really do! the story is great! i would really like to hear some more!

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~panda2011

1 year, 1 month ago

 

I would like to post a story i have been working on to get opions on it but i do not see where I can post a new Topic. would you help me out?

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~Criob

1 year, 1 month ago

 

Alrite i set up a blog for anyone, type up what you have and i'll tell you what i think. And thanks about the story i'll keep it going

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