Wallpapers and Walling

It's got potential! I like the composition, and the text is good ^-^ The scan edges look pretty clean, too - nice job with that.

It could use more contrast, definitely. Right now it's very gray, which is easy on the eyes but not very exciting D: Even Ryuk's eyes look like they've got a cloudy gray layer over them. Brighten up the whites and darken the blacks. Also, a little bit of color besides Ryuk's eyes might add some visual interest. Maybe colorizing everyone's eyes?

The background bricks are a little too stock-photo. I can see what you were trying to do, but as they stand right now they don't blend nicely with the scans. Also, the scans shouldn't be so transparent unless you wanted them to look like they were painted on the wall (in which case they're too dark)

What if you were to put Misa with her Death Note on the other side of Ryuk instead of another Light? Or maybe L. I think that would make the symbolism of the text much more powerful.

Good Job, bro. Maybe adding text "Death Note" on top center should be good, I think the little text on the bottom center doesn't suit wallpaper, in my opinion. Also, why only "Ryuk" eyes are red? Or you want it to be outstanding point? Maybe adding others color would be good.

i agree with ~Kerodohi . And you should change the placing of the typo and make the typo bigger.and it will be really cool if all eyes in this wall will be colored! and maybe in different colors for each character >.< good luck with this wall and i can't wait to see it in the gallery! ;)

I like the idea and the composition of your wall, however the text is too small and its placement makes it looks like credits instead of the main text of the wall.