New to AnimePaper? Join our community today!
1 year, 10 months ago
Hey guys! I'm making this new wall... But it seems a little boring. I really need feedback on this! (For any Beelze fans that are a little confused on who this is, it's from the newest(3rd) ending scene).
I feel like that massive gap should have something in it. u_u
and for reference, yes you can still have them after you fall pregnant, but they are generally lighter than usual and last for less time. But then stress can do that too.
sorry, mecha...i haven't come across that :( maybe u can google...it helps at times
Saving…
1 year, 10 months ago
The idea rocks, the softness of the edges of the flame type thing is a little off, did you use posterize?
You have a huge gap on the right hand side, you might start feeling a lot happier about it if you added some text along the eyeline on the right hand side (this is what I used to do a lot).
1 year, 10 months ago
I'm not really familiar with Beelzebub, but she looks like she could be looking at someone or something. If there are things like, butterflies, dragon flys, bees (beez maybe? XD) or small creatures specific to the show, they could look nice there vectored in the same style you've done the girl. And have like, a little stylized flying trail after it. And then you could put text on!
Just a thought :D I quite like it so far, it's a really unique color palette you're using :)
1 year, 10 months ago
@Bantam I didn't posterize anything, I'll check it out and see if I can fix it up. I was also thinking about adding text but didn't know where to put it! Thanks so much for the idea, I will try it out!! 8D
@nat I didn't think of that at all! I will figure something out and try that as well! xD
Oh man, thanks for the ideas guys! If anyone else has any, keep them coming! xD
1 year, 10 months ago
I just watched the ending, and maybe you could vector some of the construction/deserted room type elements from photos, but just in solid black silhouettes like they are in the ED.
1 year, 9 months ago
i really like this. i think you should leave it, that way people have somewhere to put stuff on there desktops.
but if you do put any writing, try to stay with the same pallet. i think too many colors would take away from the simplicity you got going on.
1 year, 5 months ago
I think that the idea is awsome , only change the background ...or give it more definition, a theme or something else. =) good luck!