Wallpapers and Walling

Critique/Advise on Beelzebub Wallpaper

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°darkheartknight

1 year, 6 months ago

 

I basically vectored the manga scans and put different panels together to make it somewhat like a sequence in the wallpaper. Does the Beelzebub text seem out of place? Should I remove the text and put something else, if so any ideas on what to replace it with? I added some motion blur on the top panel to make it look like she just collapsed to the ground, is the blur distracting/out of place? Lastly, what should I do about the empty spaces? Should I just leave it be?

Here's what I have made so far.

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/4861/unled1wwb.jpg

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~GeroGirl

1 year, 6 months ago

 

Just looking at it I find that the text looks perfect. The motion blur however, seems to strain the eyes. I know it will be a background, and not often looked at by the owner of the computer, but keep in mind someone might find it distracting. The empty space looks just fine in my opinion, don't want to make it too busy looking. Specifically talking about the text I like the way it enlarges slightly in size with the purple space.

Overall I think that this wallpaper looks great.

~Gerogirl

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~Zero91CZ91

1 year, 6 months ago

 

let me see it's so cool the wallpaper but I don't know where anime is from xP

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*zazou8888

1 year, 5 months ago

 

For me the text is fine. But I would recommend an other color.

As for the motion blur indeed it seems not enough or way too much. And the top panel isn't really clear for me. What is that?

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°darkheartknight

1 year, 5 months ago

 

That's Hilda falling to the floor, the yellow is her hair, then skin is her arm, and the black is her arm and body.

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*zazou8888

1 year, 5 months ago

 

The hair I was pretty sure but as for the rest... But anyway the blur effect isn't totally working on that part it's not really eye-candy.

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