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~phoenolf

1 year, 3 months ago

 

I have finished a vector I was doing for months now and I wanted to make sure if there's any loose ends I forgot to fix. this is my first time making a vector so I'll accept every critique you guys give me

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/56832385/phoenolf/Ai-Yori-Aoshi.png

ok, I fixed the vector, I hope it's better now http://dl.dropbox.com/u/56832385/phoenolf/%5BAnimePaper%5Dscans_Ai-Yori-Aoshi.png

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^hatesyou the definition of insanity

1 year, 3 months ago

 

As said previously, line weights are all over the place. Paths for her top look to be stroked paths (as they lack natural variation). Other lines appear to be overly heavy with little rhyme or reason.

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    ~phoenolf

    1 year, 3 months ago

     

    so the only time the stroked paths is used is when I outline the highlights and shadows?

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      ^hatesyou the definition of insanity

      1 year, 3 months ago

       

      Stroked paths should generally be avoided outright. They don't simulate natural line variations found in hand drawings at all. It's generally more aesthetically pleasing to use thin shapes with a fill.

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        ~phoenolf

        1 year, 3 months ago

         

        never use stroked paths, got it. thanks for the help -w- (by the way, how's the katzilla avatar thing going?)

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