There's a few lines (generally those with a heavier lineweight) that don't appear to be overly crisp for whatever reason.

The ties in her hair are also inconsistent. One's been given depth (although it still reads as being a little wonky) and the other is flat.

Lines also to be a little uniform overall. Very few lines appear to vary in width along their length although there is a mix of weights used throughout.

Niggles aside its not a poor effort by any means.

not bad, but maybe the left arm near the cubit to finish the rest of the arm,continuing slightly thicker line was first ..the rest needs no changes

really mazing work i think there is just alittle details i have the impression the elbow have not the same wide but if not is really great

It looks good for your first time. Perhaps you should add more shadings next time.