Wallpapers and Walling

A wallpaper made sometime ago but i wanna some critique

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~vedacode

7 months, 2 weeks ago

 

to be honest, i want to make A simple wallpaper and fresh wallper so i do this work. And i make two version with the diffirent process of the background. Here it is, what do you think of it..

----it may be hard to find, but the latter one still has the flower

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^hatesyou the definition of insanity

7 months, 1 week ago

 

I find both versions are not overly strong compositionally as there is little tying elements to each other and elements are pushed to corners with no real focal point. This is more evident in the second image where the only overlapping element (the blue bar) is removed. Work more to unify the elements in your composition as they are at present the wallpapers are visually weak.

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~HappyTail73

7 months, 1 week ago

 

If you're aiming for a simple wall, this two version will do but I think adding more elements in the background will add to its impact and beauty. Adding more bright color to it will be better. I think its nice and simple.

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~artcreator

3 months, 3 weeks ago

 

I think the version with the blue stripe gives your wallpaper more depth, plus it looks more professional, i like them both