"It's cute but plain.
i love the chibi, but the rest of the wall is very boring and plain. add some text with some flowers in the top left corner, or something" View
"I love the overall look of the wall. i think the text is a little weird, i know there's a version w/o it, it's just that the text, could be done differently. It works that way though. the one thing that bothers me is the candy. it doesn't look right or real. it think that if you blended it in more like changed the angle, made the vector match the character a bit more, and mage it look a bit more like she was actually biting it, and holding it with her teeth, it would produce a lot better effect. I love the whole wall in general though. good job.^.^" View
[ORIGINAL GENERATIONS] Excellen Browning
10 months 1 week ago
"I luv. it's soo cool and pretty. i love the bg, all the colors and shapes. it's really neat how you put together all the circles and hearts and swirls. i love it." View
"I think the sky is too black, and that you should add more color, like blues , etc. and add more stars to the bottom half, it seems empty. the character seems too faint, i like how it's trasparant, but make the color pop a little bit more, to give for depth, not make look as dull, as pale. I like the whole wall idea and design in general, hope it gets thru. also, maybe you should make the signiture icon a little smaller." View
Mr.Despair
11 months 2 weeks ago
"I really like. The soft lines on the character give it a different look, but cool one. I think it would look better without the black border though." View
Moonlight dance
1 year 1 month ago
"The bg still seems a little plain, maybe add something more to it. other than htat it is so beautiful. i also see you should edit the scan of her a bit, make it bitter, sharper. it beautiful, and i hope to see this in the gallery." View
Behind the School
1 year 2 months ago
"It looks really good. i think you can fix the scans a bit. maybe make them a little more vibrant, it seems like they don't fit with the bg (bg is more 3d-ish, they are more 2d scan-ish). other than that it looks really good." View
J'aime l'ete <3
1 year 2 months ago
"Like you said. when i saw the wall, i saw that you had only vectored, and how they actually really counted that as a wall. but 6oo differ shapes is hard. and i give you props on doing it. way to go." View
simple strips
1 year 2 months ago
"Well first off it was good that the scan is clean, but he wall bg is too boring, and there is nothing there. change the color other that white, or keep the white bg but add some differ colors to it. also add some filters to give it a texture look. also, you should follow the rule of thirds, it looks boring in the middle. lastly change the order of the strips, (don't have them just up and down), and change their color. and maybe you should add some other shapes in there too. good luck." View
Just Bebop
1 year 2 months ago
"This is awesome. i don't think i ave seen anything like this on animepaper before. there are alot of walls with colored vectored images on a whit bg, but this is so differ. there are not many coke-cola walls really, and this is also gives that moder, cool, disko look. it's awesome, i love. XD" View
OKAMI >:3
1 year 2 months ago
"I'm nbot completely familur with the game, so im not sure im acurate when i saw, the little Okami is sooo cute. other than that tho, awesome. " View
The Colourful side of Life
1 year 2 months ago
"This is awesome. you did a great job with the artwork and the colors. it's so cool. " View
"Awesome, wall. good job, im glad you got something in. way to go XD" View
2 Kool 4 Skool
1 year 2 months ago
"I love what you did with the wall. it looks awesome. im not sure ow to make it match better, maybe make the locker colors red instead of green, and maybe a bit clearer (a different style). whatever you do, it's awesome.XD" View
Yuuki's Wacky Wedding
1 year 2 months ago
"Oh, also, i didn't notice this before, but his name isn't Yuuki, it's Yuri." View
Yuuki's Wacky Wedding
1 year 2 months ago
"First off, your wall isn't a wall, but a scan. all you did was add you name. you need to add more of your own work to it, for it to even be considered a wall. " View
Paradise Garden
1 year 2 months ago
"First of, you need to add more into it. the whole wall is a scan, so you have to do a little more to actually make it a wallpaper. add some more of your own work into it. good cleaning tho." View
プラネタリウム / PURANETARIUMU
1 year 3 months ago
"Ok, im sorry but i don't like it. it's bad, not trying to be mean, but yeah. fist off, the glass effect doesn't look good. it doesn't look real, and i think it covers Aries up to much. second, the scan of cloud doesn't work, since he is from the game, and ARies from the movie, the two don't mix. you should either use a image od cloud from the movie, or get rid of him completely, which ever you prefer. " View
Wet Alchemist
1 year 3 months ago
"The character has jagged lines. you should clean it up a bit better or vector it. also the bg doesn't work at all. the fact that it is real really clashes with the anime, the two don't mix. i think you should create your own bg, i think of him in a shower would look best, it would also make him look a bit hotter. and thew font doesn't work that well, i think a more casual font would be better. " View
Believe in Heaven
1 year 3 months ago
"It's good to see a Loki wall. it is so cute. the lines of the character look a little jagged, so try to clean that up a bit. and take out the feathers floating around, it doesn't look right. i think the feathers, and the wings, would look alto better if white, like in the tutorial above. i hope to see this wall in the gallery." View
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4 months 1 week ago
"It's cute but plain.i love the chibi, but the rest of the wall is very boring and plain. add some text with some flowers in the top left corner, or something"
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Sweet Delight
4 months 1 week ago
"Very cute. i love itView
Love candy
9 months 3 weeks ago
"I love the overall look of the wall. i think the text is a little weird, i know there's a version w/o it, it's just that the text, could be done differently. It works that way though. the one thing that bothers me is the candy. it doesn't look right or real. it think that if you blended it in more like changed the angle, made the vector match the character a bit more, and mage it look a bit more like she was actually biting it, and holding it with her teeth, it would produce a lot better effect. I love the whole wall in general though. good job.^.^"View
[ORIGINAL GENERATIONS] Excellen Browning
10 months 1 week ago
"I luv. it's soo cool and pretty. i love the bg, all the colors and shapes. it's really neat how you put together all the circles and hearts and swirls. i love it.View
Audiotheraphy Revisitations
11 months 5 days ago
"Love the colors and design."View
C. C. ~Night at Paradise~
11 months 5 days ago
"I think the sky is too black, and that you should add more color, like blues , etc. and add more stars to the bottom half, it seems empty. the character seems too faint, i like how it's trasparant, but make the color pop a little bit more, to give for depth, not make look as dull, as pale. I like the whole wall idea and design in general, hope it gets thru. also, maybe you should make the signiture icon a little smaller."View
Mr.Despair
11 months 2 weeks ago
"I really like. The soft lines on the character give it a different look, but cool one. I think it would look better without the black border though."View
Moonlight dance
1 year 1 month ago
"The bg still seems a little plain, maybe add something more to it. other than htat it is so beautiful. i also see you should edit the scan of her a bit, make it bitter, sharper. it beautiful, and i hope to see this in the gallery."View
Behind the School
1 year 2 months ago
"It looks really good. i think you can fix the scans a bit. maybe make them a little more vibrant, it seems like they don't fit with the bg (bg is more 3d-ish, they are more 2d scan-ish). other than that it looks really good."View
J'aime l'ete <3
1 year 2 months ago
"Like you said. when i saw the wall, i saw that you had only vectored, and how they actually really counted that as a wall. but 6oo differ shapes is hard. and i give you props on doing it. way to go."View
simple strips
1 year 2 months ago
"Well first off it was good that the scan is clean, but he wall bg is too boring, and there is nothing there. change the color other that white, or keep the white bg but add some differ colors to it. also add some filters to give it a texture look. also, you should follow the rule of thirds, it looks boring in the middle. lastly change the order of the strips, (don't have them just up and down), and change their color. and maybe you should add some other shapes in there too. good luck."View
Just Bebop
1 year 2 months ago
"This is awesome. i don't think i ave seen anything like this on animepaper before. there are alot of walls with colored vectored images on a whit bg, but this is so differ. there are not many coke-cola walls really, and this is also gives that moder, cool, disko look. it's awesome, i love. XD"View
OKAMI >:3
1 year 2 months ago
"I'm nbot completely familur with the game, so im not sure im acurate when i saw, the little Okami is sooo cute.View
The Colourful side of Life
1 year 2 months ago
"This is awesome. you did a great job with the artwork and the colors. it's so cool. "View
Haruhi city
1 year 2 months ago
"Really cool. i love it. awesome"View
Haruhi's SOS Brigade
1 year 2 months ago
"Really cool, good job for your first wall."View
Grim Goodbye
1 year 2 months ago
"I love your wall, it's so cool. awesome."View
Snake Eater
1 year 2 months ago
"Awesome, wall. good job, im glad you got something in. way to go XD"View
2 Kool 4 Skool
1 year 2 months ago
"I love what you did with the wall. it looks awesome. im not sure ow to make it match better, maybe make the locker colors red instead of green, and maybe a bit clearer (a different style). whatever you do, it's awesome.XD"View
Yuuki's Wacky Wedding
1 year 2 months ago
"Oh, also, i didn't notice this before, but his name isn't Yuuki, it's Yuri."View
Yuuki's Wacky Wedding
1 year 2 months ago
"First off, your wall isn't a wall, but a scan. all you did was add you name. you need to add more of your own work to it, for it to even be considered a wall. "View
Paradise Garden
1 year 2 months ago
"First of, you need to add more into it. the whole wall is a scan, so you have to do a little more to actually make it a wallpaper. add some more of your own work into it. good cleaning tho."View
プラネタリウム / PURANETARIUMU
1 year 3 months ago
"Ok, im sorry but i don't like it. it's bad,View
Wet Alchemist
1 year 3 months ago
"The character has jagged lines. you should clean it up a bit better or vector it. also the bg doesn't work at all. the fact that it is real really clashes with the anime, the two don't mix. i think you should create your own bg, i think of him in a shower would look best, it would also make him look a bit hotter. and thew font doesn't work that well, i think a more casual font would be better. "View
Believe in Heaven
1 year 3 months ago
"It's good to see a Loki wall. it is so cute. the lines of the character look a little jagged, so try to clean that up a bit. and take out the feathers floating around, it doesn't look right. i think the feathers, and the wings, would look alto better if white, like in the tutorial above. i hope to see this wall in the gallery."View