Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!
"It looks good but could use a bit of color. Try to lighten up the picture of Shana a bit, a bit more contrast wouldn't hurt as well. Also, you could add a bit more to the background, like a few flames or a couple of blue fires like the "torches" in the story. That's my opinion but better wait for a professional to critique heh. Nice wallpaper anyway." View
ill be waiting
1 year 1 month ago
"Yes, as the others said, the many words around the wallpaper are very distracting. I suggest you use a smoother font and add a bit of transparency if you really wanna keep all that text. If not, the wallpaper will look better without them as I see it. Good job anyway! " View
Super-Stars
1 year 1 month ago
"Well, it doesn't look bad but it could use a touch of color. Lucky Star is about fun and randomness so it wouldn't be crazy to paint buildings of different bright colors or something like that. I honestly find it a bit plain and have no idea how it took 18 hours. Another two hints would be: try to center the 4 characters and try to create different buildings and crowds, all look copy/pasted. Overall it's not bad but it could definitely use some work. Good job and good luck with the wallpaper.
" View
Miracle
1 year 1 month ago
"Yeah, the wallpaper is quite good. The Matsuri image is good, thoguh I find it a bit odd at the back: the hair is nearly/exactly the same color as the skirt. I don't know if the image was like that from the start. Also, it could use a little work in the darker part of the hair at the back, where it seems a bit grainy. Overall is good, I like the background (kind of reminds me of muscle tissues heh) and the font of the text. Good job!" View
Proper Education
1 year 1 month ago
"Heh, cool idea, I like the wallpaper. Yeah, "We don't need no education" really fits the atmosphere of Haruhi Suzumiya. I don't have much to say about it, pretty good arrangement and I like the "visor" effect. Good job!" View
H for Haruhi...Suzumiya
1 year 1 month ago
"Awesome wallpaper, I really like the design. I had this on my desktop for months. I like the black and white set-up and the "polished floor" reflection, though you could have written "The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya" in another place, it doesn't stand so well in the middle of the H, and everyone who uses this wallpaper surely knows what show it is. Great job anyway! " View
Magic Takes You There
1 year 1 month ago
"This is actually my favorite Shuffle! wallpaper. Sia, Nerine and that totally awesome background. Every time I look at it, I have a faint feeling like it's actually outer space, it looks very good. And the atom-like lights around the two girls are cool, it's really a great wallpaper, my respect for it." View
asa-sempai
1 year 1 month ago
"I really like this wallpaper, Asa being my favorite character. The green could be a bit darker to fit her hair but it's fine as it is, and with the CGs down there it looks even better. Nice font as well, good job on the wallpaper!" View
Through This Spirit Sword
1 year 1 month ago
"Looks good but I don't know if it quite fits the mood of Kaze no Stigma. It could use a bit of color, some fiery red (coming from Ayano). Still, I like the effect and it's a nice addition to the KnS wallpaper list (kind of lacking wallpapers).
Good job! " View
Solar Dreams
1 year 1 month ago
"With the "Lunar Tranquility" wallpaper, this is a perfect match. Same as before, the color fits with the wallpaper but I think that the planet behind could be a little brighter to blend in. Great wallpaper nonetheless!" View
Lunar tranquility
1 year 1 month ago
"Great wallpaper, it really has a certain tranquility mood. The purple color of the space fits well with the Lunar Priestess (Chikane) and the moon overall. It looks good as it is." View
The Crow: Death Note
1 year 1 month ago
"Wow, this wallpaper looks great. I like the black and white style, including all that text in the background. And indeed, L does look like "The Crow". Good job!" View
Okatus Rule!
1 year 1 month ago
"I love this wallpaper, I have it on my desktop. I really like the "Police Line, Do Not Cross" idea and the text fits perfectly, it's one of my favorite L*S wallpapers, really good job." View
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Shana
1 year 1 month ago
"It looks good but could use a bit of color. Try to lighten up the picture of Shana a bit, a bit more contrast wouldn't hurt as well. Also, you could add a bit more to the background, like a few flames or a couple of blue fires like the "torches" in the story. That's my opinion but better wait for a professional to critique heh. Nice wallpaper anyway."View
ill be waiting
1 year 1 month ago
"Yes, as the others said, the many words around the wallpaper are very distracting. I suggest you use a smoother font and add a bit of transparency if you really wanna keep all that text. If not, the wallpaper will look better without them as I see it. Good job anyway! "View
Super-Stars
1 year 1 month ago
"Well, it doesn't look bad but it could use a touch of color. Lucky Star is about fun and randomness so it wouldn't be crazy to paint buildings of different bright colors or something like that. I honestly find it a bit plain and have no idea how it took 18 hours. Another two hints would be: try to center the 4 characters and try to create different buildings and crowds, all look copy/pasted. Overall it's not bad but it could definitely use some work. Good job and good luck with the wallpaper."
View
Miracle
1 year 1 month ago
"Yeah, the wallpaper is quite good. The Matsuri image is good, thoguh I find it a bit odd at the back: the hair is nearly/exactly the same color as the skirt. I don't know if the image was like that from the start. Also, it could use a little work in the darker part of the hair at the back, where it seems a bit grainy. Overall is good, I like the background (kind of reminds me of muscle tissues heh) and the font of the text. Good job!"View
Proper Education
1 year 1 month ago
"Heh, cool idea, I like the wallpaper. Yeah, "We don't need no education" really fits the atmosphere of Haruhi Suzumiya. I don't have much to say about it, pretty good arrangement and I like the "visor" effect. Good job!"View
H for Haruhi...Suzumiya
1 year 1 month ago
"Awesome wallpaper, I really like the design. I had this on my desktop for months. I like the black and white set-up and the "polished floor" reflection, though you could have written "The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya" in another place, it doesn't stand so well in the middle of the H, and everyone who uses this wallpaper surely knows what show it is. Great job anyway! "View
Magic Takes You There
1 year 1 month ago
"This is actually my favorite Shuffle! wallpaper. Sia, Nerine and that totally awesome background. Every time I look at it, I have a faint feeling like it's actually outer space, it looks very good. And the atom-like lights around the two girls are cool, it's really a great wallpaper, my respect for it."View
asa-sempai
1 year 1 month ago
"I really like this wallpaper, Asa being my favorite character. The green could be a bit darker to fit her hair but it's fine as it is, and with the CGs down there it looks even better. Nice font as well, good job on the wallpaper!"View
Through This Spirit Sword
1 year 1 month ago
"Looks good but I don't know if it quite fits the mood of Kaze no Stigma. It could use a bit of color, some fiery red (coming from Ayano). Still, I like the effect and it's a nice addition to the KnS wallpaper list (kind of lacking wallpapers).Good job! "
View
Solar Dreams
1 year 1 month ago
"With the "Lunar Tranquility" wallpaper, this is a perfect match. Same as before, the color fits with the wallpaper but I think that the planet behind could be a little brighter to blend in. Great wallpaper nonetheless!"View
Lunar tranquility
1 year 1 month ago
"Great wallpaper, it really has a certain tranquility mood. The purple color of the space fits well with the Lunar Priestess (Chikane) and the moon overall. It looks good as it is."View
The Crow: Death Note
1 year 1 month ago
"Wow, this wallpaper looks great. I like the black and white style, including all that text in the background. And indeed, L does look like "The Crow". Good job!"View
Okatus Rule!
1 year 1 month ago
"I love this wallpaper, I have it on my desktop. I really like the "Police Line, Do Not Cross" idea and the text fits perfectly, it's one of my favorite L*S wallpapers, really good job."View