No, don't post there! X_X there's are like 5 other threads on the same topic, where you question is answered. *slaps her forehead* prolly too late now...
It looks kind of plain too me.. Is that a reflection in the water of Matsuri or what? If it is, then you should add ripple effect of the water. Not only to the reflection but also on Matsuri clothes and hands. I've never tried water effect before so I'm sorry for not being able to help you much. Another thing is, if you planned to use the brush there, make sure the above brushes have their reflections in the water as well. I apologize if it's not water reflection that you're trying to make. Well, good luck for you =)
I see.. So it's your first time making wallpaper, right? If you've difficulties in walling, make sure you check out some sites that provides you with hints and various ways of enhancing artworks that you can apply to your wallpaper. Don't just cut out a render from a scan then stick it to a plain black background. Yeah, as has been mentioned above, it's good idea to use a vector of C.C. If you don't want, you'll have to vector it by yourself. The text you applied's also too simple, well... not attractive... Find out some way of blendings by yourself that suit your own style. It doesn't really need a box there though... Anyway, good luck for you. I went through a lot of difficulties in making my first wallpaper too so I hope you won't give up. See you around =)
I like the colors of the wallpaper =) The vector itself is simple yet neat and clean ^^ The texture you used match with the wallpaper well. Keep up the good work ^^
It's a great wallpaper, indeed =) However, honestly speaking, I think that the face looks stiff (just as Anolibb-san) mentioned. Another thing is the cloth around her neck.. I don't know how to put it right but I just feel it's odd.. I'm sorry.. >_<; But overall, it looks fine to me ^^ Keep up the good work =)
"Greetings~
It's indeed a great vectored wallpaper you managed to finish there. I like the way you vectored the flowers and her dress. It looks awesome and really eye-catching although I thought that the position of the render would look better if you move it upper a bit so that it might look more balance since there's no legs. Keep up the great work! =)
"Overall, it looks quite okay to me but the blur background and vectored render doesn't really match.. It seems as if the render you used there is glued to the background. May be you should fix the line to make it prominent. The diagonal black lines effect should be fixed too =)
Hint : Try to add something (shadow or another effect) at the bottom of her feet in order to make it looks as if it blends with the background. Also try to texturized and apply gradient to those diagonal effect. Don't forget to credit Danalm for the vector =)
"Nice wallpaper with excellent details and also well vectored =)
If only the background were more colourful then it'd look more catching to the eyes. Anyway, it's a great wallpaper ^^" View
The Colourful side of Life
1 year 2 months ago
"I like the colorful patterns of the wallpaper, moreover, the outlining's pretty well-done. Nice wallpaper although there're too much things going on there but it's looks fine to me for the creativeness =)
"Yay! That's a great wall ^o^\
I like the way you used the brushes although I don't really know how to make it looks like that one of yours though ^^;
The effect is okay, many brushes but it doesn't seem to be crowded. Hope to see more from you next time ^^
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Unparalleled Beauty
3 weeks 3 days ago
"Greetings~Simplicity is the best =) I love the textures you used on the kimono ^^ The vector is very clean and neat too =) Keep up the good work ^^
Good day~
-Breezie-"
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Night's ending
3 weeks 3 days ago
"Greetings~It looks kind of plain too me.. Is that a reflection in the water of Matsuri or what? If it is, then you should add ripple effect of the water. Not only to the reflection but also on Matsuri clothes and hands. I've never tried water effect before so I'm sorry for not being able to help you much. Another thing is, if you planned to use the brush there, make sure the above brushes have their reflections in the water as well. I apologize if it's not water reflection that you're trying to make. Well, good luck for you =)
Good day~
-Breezie-"
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C.C.
3 weeks 3 days ago
"Greetings~I see.. So it's your first time making wallpaper, right? If you've difficulties in walling, make sure you check out some sites that provides you with hints and various ways of enhancing artworks that you can apply to your wallpaper. Don't just cut out a render from a scan then stick it to a plain black background. Yeah, as has been mentioned above, it's good idea to use a vector of C.C. If you don't want, you'll have to vector it by yourself. The text you applied's also too simple, well... not attractive... Find out some way of blendings by yourself that suit your own style. It doesn't really need a box there though... Anyway, good luck for you. I went through a lot of difficulties in making my first wallpaper too so I hope you won't give up. See you around =)
Good day~
-Breezie-"
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Sexy Madness!
1 month 3 days ago
"Greetings~I like the colors of the wallpaper =) The vector itself is simple yet neat and clean ^^ The texture you used match with the wallpaper well. Keep up the good work ^^
Have a nice day~
-Breezie-"
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Through The Fire
2 months 3 weeks ago
"Greetings~The wall's nicely done with great effect =) Of course, I like Shana the best since she looks so cool ^.^ Keep up the great work =D
Regards,
-Breezie-"
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Somber Blues
7 months 1 day ago
"Greetings~It's a great wallpaper, indeed =) However, honestly speaking, I think that the face looks stiff (just as Anolibb-san) mentioned. Another thing is the cloth around her neck.. I don't know how to put it right but I just feel it's odd.. I'm sorry.. >_<; But overall, it looks fine to me ^^ Keep up the good work =)
Have a nice day~
-Breezie-"
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Within Reach
8 months 2 weeks ago
"Greetings~It's nicely done with my favourite colour ---> Blue ^^ Thank you for sharing =) I like the abstract lines ^^ Keep up the good work =)
Good day~
-Breezie-"
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I am falling...
8 months 3 weeks ago
"Greetings~It's indeed a great vectored wallpaper you managed to finish there. I like the way you vectored the flowers and her dress. It looks awesome and really eye-catching although I thought that the position of the render would look better if you move it upper a bit so that it might look more balance since there's no legs. Keep up the great work! =)
Regard,
-Breezie-"
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Starlight
9 months 4 days ago
"Greetings~It's indeed a great vectored wallpaper ^^ I've to admit that although I'm not a maniac of dark wallpapers ^^ Great job done and thanks for sharing =D
-Breezie-"
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summoning
1 year 4 weeks ago
"Overall, it looks quite okay to me but the blur background and vectored render doesn't really match.. It seems as if the render you used there is glued to the background. May be you should fix the line to make it prominent. The diagonal black lines effect should be fixed too =)Hint : Try to add something (shadow or another effect) at the bottom of her feet in order to make it looks as if it blends with the background. Also try to texturized and apply gradient to those diagonal effect. Don't forget to credit Danalm for the vector =)
Hope that helps~
-Breezie-"
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Gravity of Love
1 year 1 month ago
"Nice wallpaper with excellent details and also well vectored =)If only the background were more colourful then it'd look more catching to the eyes. Anyway, it's a great wallpaper ^^"
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The Colourful side of Life
1 year 2 months ago
"I like the colorful patterns of the wallpaper, moreover, the outlining's pretty well-done. Nice wallpaper although there're too much things going on there but it's looks fine to me for the creativeness =)Good Day~
-Breezie-"
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Winding Path
1 year 6 months ago
"Congratulation ^^ you did it well =DIt's a good wall. Simple and nice! Thank you for recommending it to me ^_^
Hope to see more from you ^^
-Breezie-"
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Ah! Stop!
1 year 6 months ago
"All I can say is... it's pretty well-done *^.^*It's quite simple but funny =D
Keep up the good work!! =)
-Breezie-"
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A Winter Christmas Day
1 year 6 months ago
"Yay! That's a great wall ^o^\I like the way you used the brushes although I don't really know how to make it looks like that one of yours though ^^;
The effect is okay, many brushes but it doesn't seem to be crowded. Hope to see more from you next time ^^
-Breezie-"
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