2 years 11 months ago

"Actually it's not 800*600 but 1600*1200. Dunno if you re-upload it or made a typeO. Anyways i love the concept. Dark, chillie and just a bad rainy day. Now to the critique.

You maybe could make one side of the wall a little more darker otherwise the wall looks a little flat like nuniko said. And also the brush effect on the left side at the bottom lights out too much. You should tone down it just a little tiny bit and add some dirt on it. The "Endless memories" font looks ugly. Try change theme on it. A transparent text would be good

Other than that the wall is great. The environment is dark. The mood is sad and the characteristic point of view is great.

Not much you can work on it except the things above.

A good wall and this one is running to favorite :)


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2 years 11 months ago

"Omg this is sooo sweet :D

I'm so happy for you and nuniko. ;D

Definatly a Favorite :D"
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Futakoi Alternative - Sara and Soju

2 years 11 months ago

"I have always been a fan of your work ShiNN and you always keeped me inspired with the proffesional walls you've make.

This is certanly one of the best submission this month. Great vector and an awesome background. Did you draw the flowers and the butterflies with the pen-tool? Janks, i've must of underestimated that tool. Haven't worked with it much at all.

The only little thing i had in mind is that the adorable ladies are a bit too uncolored. They don't seem to blend in the environment. If you only could color them up a bit so you get that sunny day look it would be a 10 points from me and i probably would of faint of the excitement :faint: :D

Anyways a great wall. Definitely one of the best this summer. Just remember to boost saturation a tiny bit so they don't look too greyish

... And this wall is flyin' to favorits :)"
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Godzilla Girls

2 years 11 months ago

"Love this one!

Don't really have time to give it some critique cuz i'm watching a movie in about 1 min but it's a really great wall

Just love the concept :D

+fav"
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2 years 11 months ago

"Like the concept. Need some work and cleaning though.

Some edges are jagged. Nice BG


Good job =)"
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A perfect day edit ver.

2 years 11 months ago

"You should work on the extraction a bit. Especially on the hairline and on the bag.

You could also work a little on the wall in general. It's to simple to just throw in a stockphoto and the character and add som brushes and some text.

Anyways good joob looking forward to see you evolv in walling =)"
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Blue

2 years 11 months ago

"It's so pretty and i like the blue surronding. It really gives that cold lateautumn feeling that fits with her cloths,hair and the rest of thw body.

A suggestion maybe is that you could work a little on the brushes. It's too ordinary.


Anyways great job i like the concept. Adding it to favs ;)"
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2 years 11 months ago

"Love this. Clean, crisp, colorful and clean. Great vecor.

Only complaint is that if you've made the light purple radars a little more translucent it would make a slightly more realistic diffrence.

Now with that being said lets just admire the wall and add it as a favorite =)"
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Slumber

2 years 11 months ago

"Much much much sader than before...but more detailed and truly a awesome job.

+fav"
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2 years 11 months ago

"Happy birthday to you. Happy birthday to you. Happy birthday dear Chriiiis! Happy birthday to you!!


Blow out the candles!! wiee omedeto gosaimas!


!!"
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Eden's Highway

2 years 11 months ago

"I can just feel love for this wallpaper.

Think i've only dreamt of the bg scenario


+fav!"
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2 years 11 months ago

"Wonderful! kawaii kawii so scenetric. You've really catched the glimt.

High Pro wall Excellent Job. One of your best so far

+fav"
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Butterfly Effect

2 years 11 months ago

"Oh this concept is new and it works well indeed i must say.

only one isue though. The crop at the sides shouldn't be croped imo.

Anyways a great wall

+fav"
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Hazuki's Tripping

2 years 11 months ago

"I don't know if i hate or love the series. I just don't like the lesbianism

Anyways great wall. A very realistic concept that fits smoothly

+fav"
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2 years 11 months ago

"Remove the text at the bottom id disturbes the whole wall. Great wall otherwise"
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Mugen's Rage

2 years 11 months ago

"Awesome! Nice work there.I love the textures and how things are melting. especially the colors. And oh remember to teach me tha later on msn how you did ;)

+fav"
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The leader

2 years 11 months ago

"Have to agree with nat just a bit. You'd maybe wanna make the wall a little bit darker and ad some textures. Also how did you do the characters so clean?"
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magical ranbow collab!

3 years 1 day ago

"I love it!

How did you do the reflection from the sun so well! >.<
That is easily the highlight of the wall for sure ^^
It feels so realistic ;P"
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Summer's Breeze

3 years 2 days ago

"A very nice wallpaper. The only thing i had in mind is that maybe you could texturize or detail the water. It feels to ordinary"
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Contradicting Souls

3 years 3 days ago

"Beautiful! The vectorwork is so co0_ol! :D"
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Escape from the Sinking

3 years 3 days ago

"This wall is easily the best paper with feeling i've ever seen. This proves that it isn't hard to make a simple wall/concept for it to succed. Great work.

But like the other said the resolution isn't the best

+fav"
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Dream Goddess

3 years 4 days ago

"Nice!

+fav"
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Scryed - Serenity Within

3 years 5 days ago

"I love this one. And the fact that you've done every little thing by yourself makes me more inspired


+fav"
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3 years 5 days ago

"Great work. I saw your work in session zero and so on and comeparing with the unfinished you've really made it beautifully and most of all. You've finished it with the extra touch that is the main goal to complete in wallpapers or other artwork in general. You've made so it's alive.

Great work ^^

+Fav "
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War of Genesis III // Fallen City

3 years 6 days ago

"Dude.. i love it! every inch of every aspect. They all seem to fit in nicley

+fav"
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