After months of work, chanelqueen17 has created a gorgeous scene of Alice and Oz from Pandora Hearts, using scans that didn't even feature both characters together. Even after spending so much time on matching the details of the characters to their new looks, chanelqueen17 didn't stop there and went all out on the background too! This wallpaper definitely needs to be seen!
"Not a bad start, but it can be improved greatly.
Your vector is nice for your first one, not perfect, but okay I guess.
What I don't like is where you put your signature. I would like it more if it was at the bottom right/left in solid white. The colour you used here simply doesn't fit the black and grey tones.
As others said, your wallpaper is too simple and plain. Maybe you can try and add some textures or lightenings. Some more colours can also be great.
"Not a bad result for your first wall, keromie.
Just a few points I want to mention:
Your signature is too big and too outstanding. I'd prefer a smaller font size, solid white and you could erase everything except of your name and animepaper.net.
The main text "Once in a blue moon..." doesn't fit in my opinion. The colour is too greenish to fit the whole blue scheme. Maybe you could change the colour and add some text effects? Also, it doesn't seem to fit the whole scene because it's very solid and the rest of the wall seems very painted.
The rest seems quite okay, though it looks a bit odd how the trees on the right side of your wall are grown. I guess they are supposed to be that way so that's fine." View
Power
1 week 5 days ago
"I guess your concept isn't too bad, it just needs some more work.
The background is from the chapter where he first appears in Naruto Shippuuden, right? And Sasuke himself is from the chapter where he fights one of the kages I think...
Anyway, I think some people can recall both of those situations and will see immediately that you merged both situations together. Maybe you don't mind that, maybe I myself am wrong, I just want to mention that.
Concerning the picture itself I think it would make a nice scenery, with a nice sky (maybe with clouds or something more "exciting" to fit Sasuke's looks). The background vector needs some more shadows and some more different brown and grey colors.
Or maybe you want to add some more people, for example looking down at him?
Textures could be added to give it a more natural look - it looks very painted right now...
"Ah, how glad I am that you loaded it up her *smile*
The scan qulity is very high and it is cleaned very well so that's absolutely okay.
I also like the atmosphere of the wallpaper, especially the smaller picture you placed there fits the wall very good.
What I want to point out:
I don't like your text the most. The name of that guy (looks good, btw xD) fits the wall pretty well. All the other text, though, I would change a bit.
This wall is definitely a black and white one so I would stays with these colours and not bring up any other ones.
Also, the two texts you added on top and bottom of the wall are too big in my opinion. Maybe you should make the font of them the same. And get rid of that blue and red... really doesn't fit the wallpaper (in my opinion).
Other than that, I really like this creation!" View
I Yearn For You
6 months 1 day ago
"That's the same scan I'm currently working on xD
I like how you did your wallpaper, though. I just would have wished for a bit stronger colours here and there. Your, however, colouring is great!" View
What I've done?
6 months 3 days ago
"Ah, I like the idea of the wallpaper quite a lot!
There are some things, however, that I want to mention:
The text you wrote is okay I just think that it's a bit unconnected to the background. Maybe you would want to try out some blending methods. I'm also a bit unsure about the white outline. It seems a bit too light for the mood of the wallpaper and stands out a lot.
Nana could have a better place on the wallpaper. Around her legs there's all black and it seems a bit strange because of that.
Finally, I think it would be better if the whole scenery was more in the middle of the wallaper. As it is now, the left side seems to be quite empty." View
State of Inner Peace
6 months 3 days ago
"Late, but hopefully still in time!
First your text: I don't know if this was intended, but I would change the colour of the "r", either to the yellow or red you used. Also, I would maybe think of changing the bow the way that the whole text is above the sea.
I do think that you used a nice background but there's also that I don't think it really matches with the figures you used concerning the art style. You have done a pretty good job on them, though. Only the shirt of Shiro seems a bit strange with the colour you used - it nearly seems a bit blurry.
The hearts are a nice idea but for this wallpaper they are totally out of place in my opinion. They have no connection to the background or the figures, they just seem to be added to fill some space.
On the whole, the wall is a bit easily done. There are no brushes or textures. And to be honest, I'm not sure if the background image you used really has anything to do with Fate Stay Night, but that's maybe just my opinion." View
The 13th Ace
6 months 1 week ago
"What I dislike the most of your wallpaper are the colours you've chosen. Both the lilac and orange/yellow aren't what I like and also the greenish colour you used for the background doesn't fit.
Seems as if you wanted to use only a few colours, what's not a bad idea, I just don't like the outcome of your idea. But that's maybe just my personal taste.
Also, the little girl seems to need a bit more work concerning the vectoring. Especially the hair's angular at some points.
ANother point is your test style. I think it doesn't look too good to just add the test behind all the characters and then use some random effect. Mainly, I don't like the font and how you placed it.
"What I like most about this wallpaper are the colours. Love them and how you used them!
Also, the chibis are quite cute and totally fit into the wallaper.
Other than that... the wallpaper itself is a bit small and a bit emtpy on the left side. I would suggest that you add somethin more there (maybe some sort of brush, text or whatever).
I hope you improve that one a bit - it's really great I think. " View
The Place Where The Wind Arrives
6 months 1 week ago
"Not a bad start here.
Just a few things: The effect you used on the whole wallaper - I would use it for the sky and maybe the gras but not for the girl since this looks a bit weird. Or, if this should be rain (what I don't think), make it look mroe like rain. There are some good tutorials out there...
The extraction of the girl needs some more work; you can see some white border around it.
The sky is really good done. The gras has more to be desired. You used some outstanding gras but just about four - that's too little. So maybe you goud increase the number.
In general, your left side is quite empty and needs some work, either adding some sort of brush or you have another idea. Now it's definitely too empty, though.
" View
Selecao
6 months 1 week ago
"Just repeating the words said before me: Your vector doesn't seem to be a real vector, just an effect (maybe a sharpener or something). Make a real vectored and you will increase the quality of your wallaper a lot!
Your background is quite good. It just seems that the "selecao" image you used was enlarged and therefore looks a bit blurry now.
Furthermore, I think the pink colour you used for the text really doesn't suit the wallpaper. Either get rid of that text or change the colour into something like blue or black.
Maybe I've overlooked it but I can't find your signature on the wall. You have to add one." View
State of Inner Peace
6 months 1 week ago
"You could vector the image of Saber and Shiro holding hands - that's always an option if you don't find a new, better image.
About your text: Again, vectoring wouldn't be a bad idea. The logo is strange itself because it doesn't seem to be complete. It seems to be cut out somewhere and the right and the bottom side was somehow not extractable. The text you added yourself is quite rushed written down. No effects, a very simple font... Furthermore I don't think that bright red suits the wall.
The effect you used on the background maybe wouldn't be that bad if you cut it down a little. And maybe adding some effect on Saber and Shiro would be nice too. They are way too outstanding now. They don't match with the background.
As far as I can see you did a good job extracting the image. For me, however, it needs an adjusmtent layer to get the colours better done.
Aside that I can't say much more simply because you need something more on your wall. Maybe another image, some text or only some good looking brush concept. That's up to you but you definitely have to do something with the left side and the middle.
I wish you good luck with you wall (it's not a bad start I think)." View
Let's
6 months 1 week ago
"I like that wallpaper quite a lot.
The only thing I want to mention: The colours of the figure and the colours of the background don't fit together. Especially the lilac and dark blue you used for the figure distract me. Maybe you can try and put some more colours from the figure into the background.
Also, the figure is too outstanding and too clear compared to the blurry looking background. The blurryness is okay, though. Fading the figure a bit could make it look better I think - maybe ;)
I hope I'm nevertheless allowed, to write down some constructive criticism.
The picture in the middle of the wall. The border really does stand out. Maybe it would be a nice idea to smoothen the change from the picture and the background. I think that will fit into the wall.
I like your choice of the fonts. The space between the lines is maybe a bit too little, though.
Other than that, I can't find other things. You're best work till now!" View
theilre
6 months 1 week ago
"Another Togainu no Chi *cheers*
I like that one quite a lot, it's just a bit small.
About your text: I know I'm not the best at English, but shouldn't it be "If you have time to think, you have time to run."? I also don't think that the quotation marks are really necessary (I'm not fond of them on a wallpaper).
I like the effect you used on the whole wallaper, especially on Shiki and the background of his image it looks great.
Your text doesn't look to bad too. I just think that it would look better if the shadow you used was blended to be merged with the background.
I know that you wanted a very simple design but I do think that on top and on the bottom there could be some brushes.
And the red colour you used for your signature distracts a bit because it's very bright and actually no colour from one of the images.
You really are at a good start here, I hope you will work a bit to get it accepted!" View
imfreefromlies
6 months 2 weeks ago
"Aw, you know, I do love Togainu no Chi!
Again, that wallaper is a bit too small for my taste.
I like the gradient and pattern you used. And I like the dark atmosphere of it. Also, I think you did a good job with your choice of text, font and effect.
What I don't like that much is your picture, or better the way you placed Shiki. It's a bit strange to see him vertical instead of horizontal. I would like it more if he was horizontal. Maybe you could change it that his face is on the right bottom? Or use another image where he's leveled out. As it is now I always have to tilt my head.
Another note: You're extracting needs some work. The tips of his hair (on the whole face) aren't well done and also the blood is somehow very thin and grainy.
I like how you started this wallaper and think it has great potential. Please do work on it and be able to submit it (yay, Togainu no Chi!)." View
imnotbulletproof
6 months 2 weeks ago
"First, the wallpaper is a little small and I can't find your signature (a must).
To the picture: This is what I like about the wallaper, how the character is placed and his position over all. I'm just curious if you added the Japanese characters or if that's the scan and you either weren't able or didn't want to erase them. I personally don't think they fit into the wallpaper you wanted to create.
Something about your text: Compared to the effect you used on the figure and the rest of the wall, the text is way too clear to read. I like the shadow you added but I think it needs some sort of effect because like it's now it's too outstanding and has no connection to the rest of the wall. Also, the first font you used is hard to read (for me).
The effect you used is not bad but I think it doesn't suit the whole wallpaper. Especially for the character I think it could be better without it or maybe a bit less of it. But I do like it with the grey and lilac.
What I miss are some brushes, expect of the one effect you used the wall is quite empty, especially on the left upper side.
That's all what I spotted and thought of now, so maybe I could help. " View
Eyes on C.C.
6 months 2 weeks ago
"Okay, this wallpaper really needs a lot of work.
C.C. is not of good quality. She's extracted quite poorly. I really would think of vectoring the whole scan because there's also some (hopefully) not wanted texture on it. I know this really can be difficult and to find suitable colors for re-coloring can be hard too, but this would increase the quality of your wallpaper very much.
You maybe also want to use a different scan since that one is quite ecchi (I don't have anything against some ecchiness but I don't think it really suits the atmosphere you tried/wanted to create).
The eye on the background doesn't seem to be a bad idea. I do think, however, that the red sign is out of place here. It seems really strange how you placed it so either you cut it away or move it to somewhere else (what might be a bit difficult since there's not that much space left to place).
I also think that you could improve the range and sort of colors you used. For me, there's simply too much green. Maybe adding some black or a totally new color would be nice.
Some more brushes would be great too (the ones at the top seem to be very lonely and outstanding).
The text you added is okay for the start, would be great if you could add some more that matches with your purpose of creating that special sort of atmosphere.
For me, it's just that the blue colour you used is too bright and it has to much of turquoise than real blue. With that colour, your signature is also quite hard to read. Well, maybe it's just my taste or how I collaborated my computer...
Furthermore, as mentioned above, the left side of your wallpaper is a bit plain...
On the whole, though, I think this is a good (but a bit small) wallpaper." View
- Lost in Memories -
6 months 2 weeks ago
"For me, it's the background the thing that could be improved!
It's very easy and rushed one, I would say it would look good if you add some textures or brushes.
Furthermore, I think there's no real connection between your two pictures, they are, just that: two pictures from the same person. Maybe you can connect them more... Also, a little more connection to your title would be nice (I assume the lower opacity image is the memory?)
And there are some white pieces left which should be erased (happened while extracting I would say).
What I do like about the wall is the bottom. It looks as if she would sit on glas or something. " View
Windows
6 months 2 weeks ago
"The wallpaper needs quite a lot of work I think.
First, you didn't extract the characters well, there's much white on the edging. I would also think of vectoring the single pictures, it would make it look more professional and better.
The background on the whole is too simple since you used no brushes and didn't create any effects. Furthermore, the pictures themselves aren't in the middle of the wallpaper but more on the right bottom side.
There also isn't any signature from you.
I do think that your start is not that bad but you should put more effort in it! Especially to reach a connection between the title and your work (for me, they are not exactly windows...)" View
Horo Night Fall
6 months 2 weeks ago
"I think this wallpaper does need some work!
Especially the gras could be done better. You sure started well, but for me, there's simply too little gras. There are many black spots between the single gras strains, what makes it look a bit odd and not like a hill (what you want to intend if I'm right). May I suggest a really good website? Gras tut by ningen - this is were I learned a bit about how to style gras.
For me, Horo is too dark. I know that it's night time and she should be dark but I wouldn't mind having some light sources (maybe a moon? - you could also fill the empty room with something like that) to get her brighter.
This also goes for your text and the butterflies. They are too dark and you can't see/read it that good. Furthermore, the text is small compared to the size of the wallpaper and to add just her name is boring (no offence here!). I think the idea of adding some more text (you don't have to get rid of her name just because you add test) is a very good one you should think about.
First, the red color you used on the arrow is a bit too dark for my taste. Not much lighter of course, but like it is now I think it's a bit too little difference to the black.
And second, the shadow you used on the outside of the picture with the figures is a bit thick. It's not a bad idea but maybe it's a bit too outstanding with such a big shadow? Especially compared to the arrow, which looks a bit plain.
Oh and maybe the whole picture is a bit too much on the right side of the wall." View
Cherry Blossom Kunoichi
6 months 2 weeks ago
"Totally agree with the others. A bit more color for some focus would be nice!
What I don't like that much is your text. It's okay what you've written but for Sakura, the font is a bit too big and clumsy. But that's just my taste I think.
On the whole, I like your concept and idea ;)" View
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The Eyes of Misfortune
21 hours 21 minutes ago
"Not a bad start, but it can be improved greatly.Your vector is nice for your first one, not perfect, but okay I guess.
What I don't like is where you put your signature. I would like it more if it was at the bottom right/left in solid white. The colour you used here simply doesn't fit the black and grey tones.
As others said, your wallpaper is too simple and plain. Maybe you can try and add some textures or lightenings. Some more colours can also be great.
Hope I could help you a bit~"
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once in a blue moon
3 days 23 hours ago
"Not a bad result for your first wall, keromie.Just a few points I want to mention:
Your signature is too big and too outstanding. I'd prefer a smaller font size, solid white and you could erase everything except of your name and animepaper.net.
The main text "Once in a blue moon..." doesn't fit in my opinion. The colour is too greenish to fit the whole blue scheme. Maybe you could change the colour and add some text effects? Also, it doesn't seem to fit the whole scene because it's very solid and the rest of the wall seems very painted.
The rest seems quite okay, though it looks a bit odd how the trees on the right side of your wall are grown. I guess they are supposed to be that way so that's fine."
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Power
1 week 5 days ago
"I guess your concept isn't too bad, it just needs some more work.The background is from the chapter where he first appears in Naruto Shippuuden, right? And Sasuke himself is from the chapter where he fights one of the kages I think...
Anyway, I think some people can recall both of those situations and will see immediately that you merged both situations together. Maybe you don't mind that, maybe I myself am wrong, I just want to mention that.
Concerning the picture itself I think it would make a nice scenery, with a nice sky (maybe with clouds or something more "exciting" to fit Sasuke's looks). The background vector needs some more shadows and some more different brown and grey colors.
Or maybe you want to add some more people, for example looking down at him?
Textures could be added to give it a more natural look - it looks very painted right now...
I hope I could help you a bit :)"
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powerandloneliness
5 months 2 weeks ago
"Ah, how glad I am that you loaded it up her *smile*The scan qulity is very high and it is cleaned very well so that's absolutely okay.
I also like the atmosphere of the wallpaper, especially the smaller picture you placed there fits the wall very good.
What I want to point out:
I don't like your text the most. The name of that guy (looks good, btw xD) fits the wall pretty well. All the other text, though, I would change a bit.
This wall is definitely a black and white one so I would stays with these colours and not bring up any other ones.
Also, the two texts you added on top and bottom of the wall are too big in my opinion. Maybe you should make the font of them the same. And get rid of that blue and red... really doesn't fit the wallpaper (in my opinion).
Other than that, I really like this creation!"
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I Yearn For You
6 months 1 day ago
"That's the same scan I'm currently working on xDI like how you did your wallpaper, though. I just would have wished for a bit stronger colours here and there. Your, however, colouring is great!"
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What I've done?
6 months 3 days ago
"Ah, I like the idea of the wallpaper quite a lot!There are some things, however, that I want to mention:
The text you wrote is okay I just think that it's a bit unconnected to the background. Maybe you would want to try out some blending methods. I'm also a bit unsure about the white outline. It seems a bit too light for the mood of the wallpaper and stands out a lot.
Nana could have a better place on the wallpaper. Around her legs there's all black and it seems a bit strange because of that.
Finally, I think it would be better if the whole scenery was more in the middle of the wallaper. As it is now, the left side seems to be quite empty."
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State of Inner Peace
6 months 3 days ago
"Late, but hopefully still in time!First your text: I don't know if this was intended, but I would change the colour of the "r", either to the yellow or red you used. Also, I would maybe think of changing the bow the way that the whole text is above the sea.
I do think that you used a nice background but there's also that I don't think it really matches with the figures you used concerning the art style. You have done a pretty good job on them, though. Only the shirt of Shiro seems a bit strange with the colour you used - it nearly seems a bit blurry.
The hearts are a nice idea but for this wallpaper they are totally out of place in my opinion. They have no connection to the background or the figures, they just seem to be added to fill some space.
On the whole, the wall is a bit easily done. There are no brushes or textures. And to be honest, I'm not sure if the background image you used really has anything to do with Fate Stay Night, but that's maybe just my opinion."
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The 13th Ace
6 months 1 week ago
"What I dislike the most of your wallpaper are the colours you've chosen. Both the lilac and orange/yellow aren't what I like and also the greenish colour you used for the background doesn't fit.Seems as if you wanted to use only a few colours, what's not a bad idea, I just don't like the outcome of your idea. But that's maybe just my personal taste.
Also, the little girl seems to need a bit more work concerning the vectoring. Especially the hair's angular at some points.
ANother point is your test style. I think it doesn't look too good to just add the test behind all the characters and then use some random effect. Mainly, I don't like the font and how you placed it.
Other than that, you did a nice job here ;)"
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pastel love
6 months 1 week ago
"What I like most about this wallpaper are the colours. Love them and how you used them!Also, the chibis are quite cute and totally fit into the wallaper.
Other than that... the wallpaper itself is a bit small and a bit emtpy on the left side. I would suggest that you add somethin more there (maybe some sort of brush, text or whatever).
I hope you improve that one a bit - it's really great I think. "
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The Place Where The Wind Arrives
6 months 1 week ago
"Not a bad start here.Just a few things: The effect you used on the whole wallaper - I would use it for the sky and maybe the gras but not for the girl since this looks a bit weird. Or, if this should be rain (what I don't think), make it look mroe like rain. There are some good tutorials out there...
The extraction of the girl needs some more work; you can see some white border around it.
The sky is really good done. The gras has more to be desired. You used some outstanding gras but just about four - that's too little. So maybe you goud increase the number.
In general, your left side is quite empty and needs some work, either adding some sort of brush or you have another idea. Now it's definitely too empty, though.
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Selecao
6 months 1 week ago
"Just repeating the words said before me: Your vector doesn't seem to be a real vector, just an effect (maybe a sharpener or something). Make a real vectored and you will increase the quality of your wallaper a lot!Your background is quite good. It just seems that the "selecao" image you used was enlarged and therefore looks a bit blurry now.
Furthermore, I think the pink colour you used for the text really doesn't suit the wallpaper. Either get rid of that text or change the colour into something like blue or black.
Maybe I've overlooked it but I can't find your signature on the wall. You have to add one."
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State of Inner Peace
6 months 1 week ago
"You could vector the image of Saber and Shiro holding hands - that's always an option if you don't find a new, better image.About your text: Again, vectoring wouldn't be a bad idea. The logo is strange itself because it doesn't seem to be complete. It seems to be cut out somewhere and the right and the bottom side was somehow not extractable. The text you added yourself is quite rushed written down. No effects, a very simple font... Furthermore I don't think that bright red suits the wall.
The effect you used on the background maybe wouldn't be that bad if you cut it down a little. And maybe adding some effect on Saber and Shiro would be nice too. They are way too outstanding now. They don't match with the background.
I hope you can improve this wallaper."
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6 months 1 week ago
"The wallaper is way too empty.As far as I can see you did a good job extracting the image. For me, however, it needs an adjusmtent layer to get the colours better done.
Aside that I can't say much more simply because you need something more on your wall. Maybe another image, some text or only some good looking brush concept. That's up to you but you definitely have to do something with the left side and the middle.
I wish you good luck with you wall (it's not a bad start I think)."
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Let's
6 months 1 week ago
"I like that wallpaper quite a lot.The only thing I want to mention: The colours of the figure and the colours of the background don't fit together. Especially the lilac and dark blue you used for the figure distract me. Maybe you can try and put some more colours from the figure into the background.
Also, the figure is too outstanding and too clear compared to the blurry looking background. The blurryness is okay, though. Fading the figure a bit could make it look better I think - maybe ;)
"
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ilrewords
6 months 1 week ago
"Aw, thank you very much for that little present!I hope I'm nevertheless allowed, to write down some constructive criticism.
The picture in the middle of the wall. The border really does stand out. Maybe it would be a nice idea to smoothen the change from the picture and the background. I think that will fit into the wall.
I like your choice of the fonts. The space between the lines is maybe a bit too little, though.
Other than that, I can't find other things. You're best work till now!"
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theilre
6 months 1 week ago
"Another Togainu no Chi *cheers*I like that one quite a lot, it's just a bit small.
About your text: I know I'm not the best at English, but shouldn't it be "If you have time to think, you have time to run."? I also don't think that the quotation marks are really necessary (I'm not fond of them on a wallpaper).
I like the effect you used on the whole wallaper, especially on Shiki and the background of his image it looks great.
Your text doesn't look to bad too. I just think that it would look better if the shadow you used was blended to be merged with the background.
I know that you wanted a very simple design but I do think that on top and on the bottom there could be some brushes.
And the red colour you used for your signature distracts a bit because it's very bright and actually no colour from one of the images.
You really are at a good start here, I hope you will work a bit to get it accepted!"
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imfreefromlies
6 months 2 weeks ago
"Aw, you know, I do love Togainu no Chi!Again, that wallaper is a bit too small for my taste.
I like the gradient and pattern you used. And I like the dark atmosphere of it. Also, I think you did a good job with your choice of text, font and effect.
What I don't like that much is your picture, or better the way you placed Shiki. It's a bit strange to see him vertical instead of horizontal. I would like it more if he was horizontal. Maybe you could change it that his face is on the right bottom? Or use another image where he's leveled out. As it is now I always have to tilt my head.
Another note: You're extracting needs some work. The tips of his hair (on the whole face) aren't well done and also the blood is somehow very thin and grainy.
I like how you started this wallaper and think it has great potential. Please do work on it and be able to submit it (yay, Togainu no Chi!)."
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imnotbulletproof
6 months 2 weeks ago
"First, the wallpaper is a little small and I can't find your signature (a must).To the picture: This is what I like about the wallaper, how the character is placed and his position over all. I'm just curious if you added the Japanese characters or if that's the scan and you either weren't able or didn't want to erase them. I personally don't think they fit into the wallpaper you wanted to create.
Something about your text: Compared to the effect you used on the figure and the rest of the wall, the text is way too clear to read. I like the shadow you added but I think it needs some sort of effect because like it's now it's too outstanding and has no connection to the rest of the wall. Also, the first font you used is hard to read (for me).
The effect you used is not bad but I think it doesn't suit the whole wallpaper. Especially for the character I think it could be better without it or maybe a bit less of it. But I do like it with the grey and lilac.
What I miss are some brushes, expect of the one effect you used the wall is quite empty, especially on the left upper side.
That's all what I spotted and thought of now, so maybe I could help. "
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Eyes on C.C.
6 months 2 weeks ago
"Okay, this wallpaper really needs a lot of work.C.C. is not of good quality. She's extracted quite poorly. I really would think of vectoring the whole scan because there's also some (hopefully) not wanted texture on it. I know this really can be difficult and to find suitable colors for re-coloring can be hard too, but this would increase the quality of your wallpaper very much.
You maybe also want to use a different scan since that one is quite ecchi (I don't have anything against some ecchiness but I don't think it really suits the atmosphere you tried/wanted to create).
The eye on the background doesn't seem to be a bad idea. I do think, however, that the red sign is out of place here. It seems really strange how you placed it so either you cut it away or move it to somewhere else (what might be a bit difficult since there's not that much space left to place).
I also think that you could improve the range and sort of colors you used. For me, there's simply too much green. Maybe adding some black or a totally new color would be nice.
Some more brushes would be great too (the ones at the top seem to be very lonely and outstanding).
The text you added is okay for the start, would be great if you could add some more that matches with your purpose of creating that special sort of atmosphere.
Hope I could help you a little!"
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The Captured Swan Has Been Set Free
6 months 2 weeks ago
"I like your plans for this wallpaper!For me, it's just that the blue colour you used is too bright and it has to much of turquoise than real blue. With that colour, your signature is also quite hard to read. Well, maybe it's just my taste or how I collaborated my computer...
Furthermore, as mentioned above, the left side of your wallpaper is a bit plain...
On the whole, though, I think this is a good (but a bit small) wallpaper."
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- Lost in Memories -
6 months 2 weeks ago
"For me, it's the background the thing that could be improved!It's very easy and rushed one, I would say it would look good if you add some textures or brushes.
Furthermore, I think there's no real connection between your two pictures, they are, just that: two pictures from the same person. Maybe you can connect them more... Also, a little more connection to your title would be nice (I assume the lower opacity image is the memory?)
And there are some white pieces left which should be erased (happened while extracting I would say).
What I do like about the wall is the bottom. It looks as if she would sit on glas or something. "
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Windows
6 months 2 weeks ago
"The wallpaper needs quite a lot of work I think.First, you didn't extract the characters well, there's much white on the edging. I would also think of vectoring the single pictures, it would make it look more professional and better.
The background on the whole is too simple since you used no brushes and didn't create any effects. Furthermore, the pictures themselves aren't in the middle of the wallpaper but more on the right bottom side.
There also isn't any signature from you.
I do think that your start is not that bad but you should put more effort in it! Especially to reach a connection between the title and your work (for me, they are not exactly windows...)"
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Horo Night Fall
6 months 2 weeks ago
"I think this wallpaper does need some work!Especially the gras could be done better. You sure started well, but for me, there's simply too little gras. There are many black spots between the single gras strains, what makes it look a bit odd and not like a hill (what you want to intend if I'm right). May I suggest a really good website? Gras tut by ningen - this is were I learned a bit about how to style gras.
For me, Horo is too dark. I know that it's night time and she should be dark but I wouldn't mind having some light sources (maybe a moon? - you could also fill the empty room with something like that) to get her brighter.
This also goes for your text and the butterflies. They are too dark and you can't see/read it that good. Furthermore, the text is small compared to the size of the wallpaper and to add just her name is boring (no offence here!). I think the idea of adding some more text (you don't have to get rid of her name just because you add test) is a very good one you should think about.
I hope I could help you a little bit."
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Morita's Angels
6 months 2 weeks ago
"Really good job you did here!Just some little things:
First, the red color you used on the arrow is a bit too dark for my taste. Not much lighter of course, but like it is now I think it's a bit too little difference to the black.
And second, the shadow you used on the outside of the picture with the figures is a bit thick. It's not a bad idea but maybe it's a bit too outstanding with such a big shadow? Especially compared to the arrow, which looks a bit plain.
Oh and maybe the whole picture is a bit too much on the right side of the wall."
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Cherry Blossom Kunoichi
6 months 2 weeks ago
"Totally agree with the others. A bit more color for some focus would be nice!What I don't like that much is your text. It's okay what you've written but for Sakura, the font is a bit too big and clumsy. But that's just my taste I think.
On the whole, I like your concept and idea ;)"
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