After months of work, chanelqueen17 has created a gorgeous scene of Alice and Oz from Pandora Hearts, using scans that didn't even feature both characters together. Even after spending so much time on matching the details of the characters to their new looks, chanelqueen17 didn't stop there and went all out on the background too! This wallpaper definitely needs to be seen!
Just keep writing here all the day, and you'll have papers, look how much I got!^^ Go and read the FAQ before anything, it's the first step you should do:
"Composition wise, it is appealing, but you could've done better. Average, but the effort is an A. " View
Look! I've got a NYO! handphone <3
1 year 4 months ago
"Cute + colorful = Fantabulous!1 Your works are like crack to the eyes..." View
Eensy Weensy Love
1 year 4 months ago
"Nicely done, excellent work! I like the creativity you put into this one." View
A Lonely Vampire
1 year 4 months ago
"An okay wall, but the color on her arms don't seem to match the rest of her skin color... Looks pretty average, but I hope that won't stop you from making better walls." View
Sealed Fate
1 year 4 months ago
"Beautiful wall! But you could've done something about the thorns though, they kinda look out of place. But the composition is nice.." View
Meow ~ <3
1 year 4 months ago
"Hmm.. looks simple, it could've turned out better if you had put in more artistic elements into the wall, the vector is nicely done." View
Revenge
1 year 4 months ago
"Nicely done. I like the background, it definitely feels like the character is out looking for trouble. The vector is superbly done, your walls seem to get better and better." View
Prayer
1 year 4 months ago
"Lol, it's a cute wallie, I like the way it was put together. I see your vectoring skills are indeed improving. Good job!" View
Rivalry
1 year 4 months ago
"Minimalistic but nice. I like the way the wall came out, pretty creative. But, you could've made your sigs better looking e.g. put a good bg for the text, etc. An okay job overall." View
innocent beauty
1 year 5 months ago
"Take it from moto to give good constructive criticism! I have to agree with what he just said. Go for it Red!" View
Innocence
1 year 7 months ago
"I'm not sure what you were aiming for with this wallie, but it seems you managed to get it to submission level. Eyes' coat looks flat, it could use some work, should you choose to do a revision. You should consider lighting before doing a wall.. but overall, it's good work for someone fairly new to walling... But you can do better. I'm looking forward to seeing better walls from you! " View
laser guns are fun!
1 year 7 months ago
"It's tough to nail this wall, dam, seeing as it is in 3D. But if you can somehow pull it off, then it would be a very satisfying work..
Things I noticed:
1. As everyone here mentioned, the sky needs work.
2. The laser light on luigi's butt needs more work.
3. Work on the audience, kinda looks flat.
4. More work on lighting.
That's it. Good luck on getting this right! Patience and persistence is a virtue...
1. The white transparent overlay with the musical notes seem out of place, you need to come up with a design that flows naturally with the chosen background.
2. Eyes' color here is kind of dark, re-vector or fix the balance of colors to make him look more appealing. Also, I think he occupies too much of the wall, you might like to shrink him a bit.
3. Change the font for the title, if you can't find a good font, try to improve the look of the text by adding some shapes or styles.
4. The concept is okay, but if you could find a better orchestra bg, or perhaps a different perspective of the ochestra, the better.
That's all. Check out all the different walls here to get some inspiration. Your second wall will be challenging, but work at it, and you'll get it into the gallery like your first one. Don't falter! Your love for Eyes is at stake!
"Awesome! Finally, all your hard work paid off! It's good that you really worked hard at it, and now you can sit back and be satisfied with your work. It looks like you took my advice about the shadows.. It looks more convincing now than before." View
In my room...
1 year 9 months ago
"The wall kinda looks plain. You can add depth to the wall by adding shadows in the right places, don't forget to have only one light source so your shadows don't look messed up. Good luck, I know you can do it (because you're Eye's fangirl..lol XD)! Gambatte!" View
Catch Me As I Fall
1 year 9 months ago
"..I'm not quite sure what to say. The original and your version seem to look very similar, only difference being the colors and a few additions. Hmm.. perhaps you were limited with the time and design ideas when you were working on this wallie. But I'd give it an A for effort, but the wallpaper's impression on me is...kind of mediocre, sorry, but that is how I find it." View
Laser Guns are Fun!
1 year 9 months ago
"Nice vector work dam!
Here are a few things that could improve your work:
1. You can try making your star vectors more realistic by adding shadows or you could shade it to look better.
2. The dark sky on the back could use some sprucing up, it looks kinda plain.
3. The laser hit luigi right? Make it look like he really jumps up from the pain, motion blur perhaps? And a beam coming from fox's gun could make it more convincing, along with the effects of the beam hitting luigi in the bum.
4. You could add a little more detail to the crowd in the bg, they look kinda blurry.
Good job! Eventually you'll get so used to PS, you'll breezing by these thing you are struggling with now, it's only a matter of time." View
Chill Out.
1 year 11 months ago
"Looks pretty cool for a first submission. I can't see anything wrong with it. Nice job!" View
iJelanda
1 year 11 months ago
"I agree with motogp, it's too simple. Give it a bit more artistic touch. Look around the wallpaper gallery and find similar wallpapers so you can get some ideas." View
Excaliber Fate Stay Night
1 year 11 months ago
"Artistically speaking, this wallpaper looks really nice. However, here are a few things that might improve it even more IMO:
- Try removing the white glow around Saber, it seems pointless to have it when only a portion of it is visible.
- The patterns around the word 'Excalibur Fate Stay Night' is very artistic, however it looks messy, perhaps using better brushes might solve the prob. Also try to make it look cleaner. The patterns near Saber may need to be redone also, they look plain.
- You could try using a different font for the text that matches the wallpaper.
That is all. This looks like a promising wallpaper, but it still needs some work.
" View
Ling Xiaoyu T5DR
2 years 17 hours ago
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kamrankhalid
...i hope you can play as good with Xiaoyu as you make her wallpapers
Believe me, I do. She's my main character, and only good players could beat me. I'll take into consideration next time I make my next wallpaper to be of higher resolution.
"Too simple. Add some more elements to it and it'll look better. A dark background will make it look more attractive." View
Looking back...
2 years 2 days ago
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BlueShadowX700
..consider the color of the pictures, I prefer it to be in their original colors... I think it will look better in that way or if you want make it all gray like what you have done in the middle picture
I have to agree with BlueShadowX700 on that one. A better choice of words on the picture labels will also improve it. The wall is pretty good conceptually." View
Gaara of the Desert
2 years 2 days ago
"Nice wallie. Instead of using the current background, why not try using a desert scenery instead? It would probably look even better that way (be it stock photo or anime art). The rectangular boxes with the textures don't need to be stroked entirely, you can try stroking only the top and bottom of both. Overall, the concept is pretty good." View
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Good Night, Sweetheart
1 year 4 months ago
"Composition wise, it is appealing, but you could've done better. Average, but the effort is an A.View
Look! I've got a NYO! handphone <3
1 year 4 months ago
"Cute + colorful = Fantabulous!1 Your works are like crack to the eyes...View
Eensy Weensy Love
1 year 4 months ago
"Nicely done, excellent work! I like the creativity you put into this one."View
A Lonely Vampire
1 year 4 months ago
"An okay wall, but the color on her arms don't seem to match the rest of her skin color... Looks pretty average, but I hope that won't stop you from making better walls.View
Sealed Fate
1 year 4 months ago
"Beautiful wall! But you could've done something about the thorns though, they kinda look out of place. But the composition is nice.."View
Meow ~ <3
1 year 4 months ago
"Hmm.. looks simple, it could've turned out better if you had put in more artistic elements into the wall, the vector is nicely done."View
Revenge
1 year 4 months ago
"Nicely done. I like the background, it definitely feels like the character is out looking for trouble. The vector is superbly done, your walls seem to get better and better."View
Prayer
1 year 4 months ago
"Lol, it's a cute wallie, I like the way it was put together. I see your vectoring skills are indeed improving. Good job!"View
Rivalry
1 year 4 months ago
"Minimalistic but nice. I like the way the wall came out, pretty creative. But, you could've made your sigs better looking e.g. put a good bg for the text, etc. An okay job overall."View
innocent beauty
1 year 5 months ago
"Take it from moto to give good constructive criticism! I have to agree with what he just said. Go for it Red!"View
Innocence
1 year 7 months ago
"I'm not sure what you were aiming for with this wallie, but it seems you managed to get it to submission level. Eyes' coat looks flat, it could use some work, should you choose to do a revision. You should consider lighting before doing a wall.. but overall, it's good work for someone fairly new to walling... But you can do better. I'm looking forward to seeing better walls from you!View
laser guns are fun!
1 year 7 months ago
"It's tough to nail this wall, dam, seeing as it is in 3D. But if you can somehow pull it off, then it would be a very satisfying work..Things I noticed:
1. As everyone here mentioned, the sky needs work.
2. The laser light on luigi's butt needs more work.
3. Work on the audience, kinda looks flat.
4. More work on lighting.
That's it. Good luck on getting this right! Patience and persistence is a virtue...
View
The World-Class Pianist
1 year 8 months ago
"Okay, here's what I think:1. The white transparent overlay with the musical notes seem out of place, you need to come up with a design that flows naturally with the chosen background.
2. Eyes' color here is kind of dark, re-vector or fix the balance of colors to make him look more appealing. Also, I think he occupies too much of the wall, you might like to shrink him a bit.
3. Change the font for the title, if you can't find a good font, try to improve the look of the text by adding some shapes or styles.
4. The concept is okay, but if you could find a better orchestra bg, or perhaps a different perspective of the ochestra, the better.
That's all. Check out all the different walls here to get some inspiration. Your second wall will be challenging, but work at it, and you'll get it into the gallery like your first one. Don't falter! Your love for Eyes is at stake!
View
Picturesque
1 year 8 months ago
"Awesome! Finally, all your hard work paid off! It's good that you really worked hard at it, and now you can sit back and be satisfied with your work. It looks like you took my advice about the shadows.. It looks more convincing now than before."View
In my room...
1 year 9 months ago
"The wall kinda looks plain. You can add depth to the wall by adding shadows in the right places, don't forget to have only one light source so your shadows don't look messed up. Good luck, I know you can do it (because you're Eye's fangirl..lol XD)! Gambatte!"View
Catch Me As I Fall
1 year 9 months ago
"..I'm not quite sure what to say. The original and your version seem to look very similar, only difference being the colors and a few additions. Hmm.. perhaps you were limited with the time and design ideas when you were working on this wallie. But I'd give it an A for effort, but the wallpaper's impression on me is...kind of mediocre, sorry, but that is how I find it."View
Laser Guns are Fun!
1 year 9 months ago
"Nice vector work dam!Here are a few things that could improve your work:
1. You can try making your star vectors more realistic by adding shadows or you could shade it to look better.
2. The dark sky on the back could use some sprucing up, it looks kinda plain.
3. The laser hit luigi right? Make it look like he really jumps up from the pain, motion blur perhaps? And a beam coming from fox's gun could make it more convincing, along with the effects of the beam hitting luigi in the bum.
4. You could add a little more detail to the crowd in the bg, they look kinda blurry.
Good job! Eventually you'll get so used to PS, you'll breezing by these thing you are struggling with now, it's only a matter of time."
View
Chill Out.
1 year 11 months ago
"Looks pretty cool for a first submission. I can't see anything wrong with it. Nice job!"View
iJelanda
1 year 11 months ago
"I agree with motogp, it's too simple. Give it a bit more artistic touch. Look around the wallpaper gallery and find similar wallpapers so you can get some ideas."View
Excaliber Fate Stay Night
1 year 11 months ago
"Artistically speaking, this wallpaper looks really nice. However, here are a few things that might improve it even more IMO:- Try removing the white glow around Saber, it seems pointless to have it when only a portion of it is visible.
- The patterns around the word 'Excalibur Fate Stay Night' is very artistic, however it looks messy, perhaps using better brushes might solve the prob. Also try to make it look cleaner. The patterns near Saber may need to be redone also, they look plain.
- You could try using a different font for the text that matches the wallpaper.
That is all. This looks like a promising wallpaper, but it still needs some work.
"
View
Ling Xiaoyu T5DR
2 years 17 hours ago
"Believe me, I do. She's my main character, and only good players could beat me. I'll take into consideration next time I make my next wallpaper to be of higher resolution.
View
Gotcha!
2 years 1 day ago
"Too simple. Add some more elements to it and it'll look better. A dark background will make it look more attractive."View
Looking back...
2 years 2 days ago
"I have to agree with BlueShadowX700 on that one. A better choice of words on the picture labels will also improve it. The wall is pretty good conceptually."
View
Gaara of the Desert
2 years 2 days ago
"Nice wallie. Instead of using the current background, why not try using a desert scenery instead? It would probably look even better that way (be it stock photo or anime art). The rectangular boxes with the textures don't need to be stroked entirely, you can try stroking only the top and bottom of both. Overall, the concept is pretty good."View