"Congrats on having your first wall accepted! I watched this is Session Zero and thought this would be a favorite. You did well on this.
Great job on the selection of the scan and all of the changes you made. It works well together. I was going to suggest adding a moon... but the moon would lighten it and take away from the theme... besides, it almost seems cliche, so ignore that. I love this the way it is!
"It's alright but there's too much text on the wallpaper. Take the unimportant things away like the names of the other characters, and the extra stuff with Metal Gear Solid 2. It's just not needed" View
"This is a great wallpaper. I can't think of anything to suggest except bigger resolutions." View
deep blue
4 months 3 weeks ago
"I like the blurred effect. It seems to soften the wallpaper entirely. Nice choice of the shades of blue, by the way. I'd suggest softening the edges around Natsume Maya because they're a bit jagged (not terribly jagged but they're not smooth)." View
Hidan
4 months 3 weeks ago
"I personally think it's good enough. The only thing I'd play around with is the placement of his name. Everything else looks great (to me)!
"This is definitely an awesome concept for a wallpaper. The mystery of it is a welcome change to other wallpapers. I'd suggest doing a bit more to the background though. " View
Eyes of Ice
4 months 3 weeks ago
"I like what you've done with the paper and why you chose the color scheme you did. The attention is drawn to his eyes since everything else is of the same colors, so good job with that.
"Uh... don't ask how on earth I noticed, but you're missing an 'E' in "Doesn't" in your text.
Anyway, I like the color scheme. It's not the usual colors used together but it looks great. Also, everything else looks great to me... I like the simplicity of it. Hope to see it accepted soon!" View
Heartbroken
4 months 3 weeks ago
"Instead of using the crosshatch effect all over the wallpaper, try something different. If the images aren't of good quality, try your hand at vectoring it. It would appear to be fine if you vectored the image of the girl on the bridge/fence/thing without her face overlayed on the wall. " View
Beyond The Mountains..(Okami)
4 months 3 weeks ago
"I'd suggest softening the sun to subdue its presence. Because all of the colors are so vibrant around Amaterasu, it actually sorta overpowers her and brings the attention elsewhere. Definitely add a shadow to her, beneath her, in order to make it look like she's part of the picture. And if those are mountains in the distance, the trees should either be much smaller or at the foot of the mountains. Where they are placed now makes little sense mainly because trees don't appear that huge on mountains from a distance.
The image itself is clean and good. Just try a little more creativity to bring more interest to it. It's a great start though. Good luck!" View
Killing Beauty
4 months 3 weeks ago
"Oh, bravo! The colors are bright, which you have a knack for picking. Great job on the wallpaper altogether!
"I agree with the previous comments. The pattern looks like it should be softer and a larger image of Osaka placed over it as the focus (or something). But the wallpaper like it is is quite boring. Play around with more options, brushes and images to make it more interesting. Good luck!" View
イタチ - 鬼鮫 (Itachi - Kisame)
4 months 3 weeks ago
"Congrats on getting it accepted! I've been waiting for this to show up in Latest Wallpapers. It's look a lot better since it seems you brightened it a bit. I like how Itachi's Sharingan stands out against the darkness of the wall. Nice choice of colors! Congrats again. " View
I wil catch u a star
4 months 3 weeks ago
"I like this wallpaper. The bold colors look awesome. " View
Breaking through the Webs
4 months 3 weeks ago
"This is an amazing wallpaper. I think the title is absolutely perfect for it. Great selection for a wallpaper. Fav'd & sav'd!" View
Dressed in wind
4 months 4 weeks ago
"Congrats, Selennna!!
Anyway, I love this wall and had been eyeing it all day whenever I managed to sneak on here for a moment. The title matches perfectly with the image of the wallpaper and I love it, ecchi or not. It's beautiful and well done. No one said you had to use brushes all the time. Yay for being creative! " View
"Try something other than the lens flare... and the background is kinda plain. I'd play around with some textures, brushes and filters to make the background more interesting. Good luck." View
Deep Sleep
5 months 1 day ago
"I kept looking at this like "All they did was clean up a close-up scan." and can't believe you vectored this. It's beautiful and you picked a great picture to make into a wall. The expression rather dazed but sleepy... the subdued colors is great, too. " View
The Frozen Throne
5 months 2 days ago
"*glares at full-metal's comment* Whatever.
Anyway, for your first wallpaper, this is awesome. This is a tough wall to make because all you can really do is clean up the scans and hope for the best. I'm really really impressed and excited to use this as a wallpaper. Great job, fav'd & sav'd!" View
The Frozen Throne
5 months 3 days ago
"I think you did an awesome job. Doing wallpapers with this dude is not easy. I personally like the texture different between the two outside pics and the middle one... but that's my twisted idea of art.
The font sorta bothers me, but it's no real big deal.
Oh, and don't forget to do more resolutions because I really *really* want to use this as a background.
"Good job on the wallpaper! I like what you've done with it and how the eye automatically focuses on the blue, which I imagine that was the reason why it's the only color on the wallpaper.
"I'm so glad your new idea and attempt at a different wall was accepted not only by AP but by the members as well. Even though I personally don't care much for DBZ, I can appreciate the artistic turn you took with this. You're awesome.
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Here Comes Trouble
4 months 2 weeks ago
"Congrats on having your first wall accepted! I watched this is Session Zero and thought this would be a favorite. You did well on this.Great job on the selection of the scan and all of the changes you made. It works well together. I was going to suggest adding a moon... but the moon would lighten it and take away from the theme... besides, it almost seems cliche, so ignore that. I love this the way it is!
I look forward to seeing more from you."
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Grey Fox
4 months 2 weeks ago
"It's alright but there's too much text on the wallpaper. Take the unimportant things away like the names of the other characters, and the extra stuff with Metal Gear Solid 2. It's just not needed"View
Warrior
4 months 2 weeks ago
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Warrior
4 months 2 weeks ago
"I like this wallpaper... it looks like an aged painting of some sort.Great job! "
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Versus
4 months 3 weeks ago
"This is a great wallpaper. I can't think of anything to suggest except bigger resolutions."View
deep blue
4 months 3 weeks ago
"I like the blurred effect. It seems to soften the wallpaper entirely. Nice choice of the shades of blue, by the way. I'd suggest softening the edges around Natsume Maya because they're a bit jagged (not terribly jagged but they're not smooth)."View
Hidan
4 months 3 weeks ago
"I personally think it's good enough. The only thing I'd play around with is the placement of his name. Everything else looks great (to me)!Fav'd. Can't wait to see it accepted."
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It's time for the clown to bow out
4 months 3 weeks ago
"This is definitely an awesome concept for a wallpaper. The mystery of it is a welcome change to other wallpapers. I'd suggest doing a bit more to the background though. "View
Eyes of Ice
4 months 3 weeks ago
"I like what you've done with the paper and why you chose the color scheme you did. The attention is drawn to his eyes since everything else is of the same colors, so good job with that.Hope to see this accepted soon."
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Not Your Average Girl
4 months 3 weeks ago
"Uh... don't ask how on earth I noticed, but you're missing an 'E' in "Doesn't" in your text.Anyway, I like the color scheme. It's not the usual colors used together but it looks great. Also, everything else looks great to me... I like the simplicity of it. Hope to see it accepted soon!"
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Heartbroken
4 months 3 weeks ago
"Instead of using the crosshatch effect all over the wallpaper, try something different. If the images aren't of good quality, try your hand at vectoring it. It would appear to be fine if you vectored the image of the girl on the bridge/fence/thing without her face overlayed on the wall. "View
Beyond The Mountains..(Okami)
4 months 3 weeks ago
"I'd suggest softening the sun to subdue its presence. Because all of the colors are so vibrant around Amaterasu, it actually sorta overpowers her and brings the attention elsewhere. Definitely add a shadow to her, beneath her, in order to make it look like she's part of the picture. And if those are mountains in the distance, the trees should either be much smaller or at the foot of the mountains. Where they are placed now makes little sense mainly because trees don't appear that huge on mountains from a distance.The image itself is clean and good. Just try a little more creativity to bring more interest to it. It's a great start though. Good luck!"
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Killing Beauty
4 months 3 weeks ago
"Oh, bravo! The colors are bright, which you have a knack for picking. Great job on the wallpaper altogether!Fav'd & sav'd!"
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Return Of Osaka
4 months 3 weeks ago
"I agree with the previous comments. The pattern looks like it should be softer and a larger image of Osaka placed over it as the focus (or something). But the wallpaper like it is is quite boring. Play around with more options, brushes and images to make it more interesting. Good luck!"View
イタチ - 鬼鮫 (Itachi - Kisame)
4 months 3 weeks ago
"Congrats on getting it accepted! I've been waiting for this to show up in Latest Wallpapers. It's look a lot better since it seems you brightened it a bit. I like how Itachi's Sharingan stands out against the darkness of the wall. Nice choice of colors! Congrats again.View
I wil catch u a star
4 months 3 weeks ago
"I like this wallpaper. The bold colors look awesome. "View
Breaking through the Webs
4 months 3 weeks ago
"This is an amazing wallpaper. I think the title is absolutely perfect for it. Great selection for a wallpaper. Fav'd & sav'd!"View
Dressed in wind
4 months 4 weeks ago
"Congrats, Selennna!!Anyway, I love this wall and had been eyeing it all day whenever I managed to sneak on here for a moment. The title matches perfectly with the image of the wallpaper and I love it, ecchi or not. It's beautiful and well done. No one said you had to use brushes all the time. Yay for being creative!
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Sunborn
4 months 4 weeks ago
"Perfect!It's crisp, vibrant and clean. I love it.
Fav'd & sav'd!"
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Nikopol
5 months 13 hours ago
"Try something other than the lens flare... and the background is kinda plain. I'd play around with some textures, brushes and filters to make the background more interesting. Good luck."View
Deep Sleep
5 months 1 day ago
"I kept looking at this like "All they did was clean up a close-up scan." and can't believe you vectored this. It's beautiful and you picked a great picture to make into a wall. The expression rather dazed but sleepy... the subdued colors is great, too. "View
The Frozen Throne
5 months 2 days ago
"*glares at full-metal's comment* Whatever.Anyway, for your first wallpaper, this is awesome. This is a tough wall to make because all you can really do is clean up the scans and hope for the best. I'm really really impressed and excited to use this as a wallpaper. Great job, fav'd & sav'd!"
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The Frozen Throne
5 months 3 days ago
"I think you did an awesome job. Doing wallpapers with this dude is not easy. I personally like the texture different between the two outside pics and the middle one... but that's my twisted idea of art.The font sorta bothers me, but it's no real big deal.
Oh, and don't forget to do more resolutions because I really *really* want to use this as a background.
Fav'd!"
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Out Of Darkness
5 months 4 days ago
"Good job on the wallpaper! I like what you've done with it and how the eye automatically focuses on the blue, which I imagine that was the reason why it's the only color on the wallpaper.Fav'd & sav'd!"
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Most Powerful Being
5 months 5 days ago
"I'm so glad your new idea and attempt at a different wall was accepted not only by AP but by the members as well. Even though I personally don't care much for DBZ, I can appreciate the artistic turn you took with this. You're awesome.Fav'd & sav'd!"
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