"'Despair' is such a strong word, pretty much, I can say this wall doesn't convey it. The vector is too simple, and of course, try to be creative with the background, such as mixture of dark colors, etc. " View
Colours Of Fall
6 months 3 weeks ago
"I pretty much love the vector, and great job on the eyes, I can never vector Clannad eyes for some reason... Actually, the leaves are quite good, and the butterfly is nicely done. Awesome work on the composition of the leaves, since there's a sufficient amount of depth. Really, I can't see what's wrong with the left arm, well drawn. Last of all, the shadowing is a nice touch, since it adds more to depth and realism. ^^" View
Tenma'ness
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Nice utilization of brushes, but the color of the background isn't appealing to me." View
Snow Kiss
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Nice concept. This series kinda went weird, so much dark pasts... Well back to the wallpaper, the vector looks nice from what I can see, since I can't really full view anymore for today since I've reached my limit, it seems to have tonal shading, nice. But I can't really say that a wallpaper with just legs would be adequate enough for me. " View
"Pleinair will kill...Again"
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Pretty nice concept, and the vector is adequate, actually, the sword looks awesome. There are two things that I would like to point out. Firstly, those two cracks on the tiles, doesn't seem that appealing to me, since it looks too much like just 'lines'. Some of the newspaper articles have text that are repeated, which crosses out the realism of the articles. But overall, I reckon the wall is nicely done, I would've preferred the line cracks to be diminished though... I don't know, it just stands out for me. Nice work! ^^" View
Knowledge is power
6 months 3 weeks ago
"The background definitely needs improvement, the brushes doesn't seem to connect well, it feels too randomly placed. " View
Leap to mugen
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Instead of brushing those lines, use the pentool, the brushed line doesn't look visually appealing. The shadow on the left is another problem, the edges are too rough. " View
Fantaisie De L'hiver
6 months 3 weeks ago
"There are some extraction problems, for example, the guy's head. As the others have mentioned, textures would be a nice addition, simply because it creates depth, which this wall doesn't have, because at it's current state, it just feels like an extracted scan slapped onto a background. " View
Misuzu Kamio
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Actually, there is only one major problem with this wall, the extraction of the image. Bits of hair are clearly cut off, it just feels too rough. I have no problems with the overall design, it's pretty much the extraction that won't let this wall pass." View
blood+ saya & hagi
6 months 3 weeks ago
"The wall as a whole is pretty much blurry, the extracted scan won't do, the quality isn't adequate enough to pass, try vectoring them, and less blur on the wall. " View
akatsuki~evolution
6 months 3 weeks ago
"To sum it up, if you want this wall to get accepted, vector them, the images in it's current state is pretty much horrible. The text 'Akatsuki' is blurred too much, the wall as a whole, is just irritating to look at, please vector them! And those circles in the background, isn't visually appealing.
"This wall needs a lot of work, simply because the quality of the image isn't adequate, the extraction is pretty obvious, leaving rough edges. Vector the image, and get rid of that land mass behind Ichigo. The background is crying out for help, a gradient just won't do. " View
Ichigo - All alone...
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Adequate utilization of brushes, it looks clean, but it's pretty strange for Ichigo to be dark when there's a fire right in front of him (the lighting is wrong). One more thing, I don't really like the text, not as in visual appearance, but what has been written, 'I must do this alone' doesn't sound that appealing to me. Overall, it's a nice simple wall, and since it's your first, nice work!
"Ah, I'm in the process of creating a Zero no Tsukaima wall right now, to celebrate the confirmation of the 3rd season! Well back to commenting on this wall, You pretty much conveyed the 'warmth' feeling, I reckon the large glowing ball below the text is a tad large, but nice work! " View
Awakening The Beast
6 months 4 weeks ago
"Well, if you don't want any other inclusions in this wall, such as images and etc, You might want to consider implementing some sort of text, like a phrase or simply 'Naruto' on the left. Text alone won't do much, unless you spice it up, using effects such as flames, and wrapping it around the text?" View
Shana
6 months 4 weeks ago
"Actually, the design for this wall is quite nice, it looks very professional, there are some image problems here and there, such as quality, so you might need to work on that. Shana on the left, in my opinion doesn't suit the wall, the quality of the image isn't as adequate as it should be, the scan, generally, doesn't blend well enough with the 'pretty' pink, since pink is more relaxed and Shana, well, agitated? The wall is pretty good, please get rid of Shana on the left, it's irritating to look at. Hope that helps. ^^" View
zabimaru vs. zangetsu
6 months 4 weeks ago
"Pretty awesome vector work, I got to say, the wall looks much better in comparison to the original scan. I see you've decided to change the ground to a floor of tiles, nice move, looks great. The reflection and the sparks is an awesome inclusion, overall the wall looks adequately nice, great work! ^^" View
Divine justice
7 months 12 hours ago
"Improve the composition, it doesn't seem quite right yet, and as for the text 'A God Came from Heaven' should be much clearer, since it's pretty hard to see with blood splatters covering on top of it. The wall has potential though, it does look cool, just got to fix on some things. ^^" View
～団子観月～
7 months 1 day ago
"Another Dango wall, awesome.^^ I never liked that rabbit, seems scary, nice work anyways." View
An Afterschool Rhapsody
7 months 2 days ago
"Ah... Seriously, I was pretty amazed by this wall, but I'm crushed, why, oh why is this wall limited to one size!? D:
I got to admit, best Clannad wall so far, and the vectoring is just awesome. You kinda motivated myself to go vector something, and I probably shall, seriously dude, I love it! Even if the wall doesn't fit my screen, it's going to be my new wall, instant favorite. ^^" View
You definitely conveyed the power of the 'Death Note' with strong utilization of red, and the brushes are well applied which looks pretty adequate since it implements 'impact' into the wall. The brushes, really create an intense feel, but there's something that is bothering me about this wall, like I reckon the text could have been placed at a better location, and the brushes on the top right seems pretty random to me. It kinda feels messy, but overall, it's pretty good.
The concept of the characters soul being empty and lost portrayed by black and white is a 'yes' for me since if you did the opposite, which is the characters is the only colors in a mono chromic world, that would be a no no since the background would've killed my eyes.
Your background is truly awesome, it's vibrant and elegant, though I don't really like those root things on the ground surrounding the characters, but I guess they convey the emptiness, etc.
The concept is interesting, and the design is pretty adequate. The only thing I truly dislike is the greyness from the background. The brushes are well utilized, and a nice selections of pictures. Nice wall! ^^
For the same reason, suffering from boredom, I shall comment on your best wall so far. I'm not a huge Naruto fan, probably only seen a few full episodes in my life, so it was natural to think that Haku was a girl, until you told me it was a guy, though I can't help feel sorry for him, since he past away. For your first time using stocks, it's pretty impressive, even though you think it's nothing, it's definitely something. *Sigh* I wish I can use stocks, but they're so hard to blend! D:
Heh, where to start? Well, I loved the stock photo you utilized, and the snow is pretty good, way better than my attempted experimental snow. D:
The mask is pretty ordinary in terms of quality (I'm guessing it's because of the poor extraction?), you should have vectored it, or at least outline the edges so it doesn't have this rough feel.
The text is a no no for me, simply because It's just a horrible contrast, actually, since I can't visually any text that would adequately blend or contrast nicely to the wall, I would have preferred the text to be diminished, but if the text is taken out, then the mask would look pretty random on the wall. But then again, this wall needs the text, so it can convey the theme...
The footprints are nicely done, same with the soft brushing for the snow effect. I would have written some more, but I'm out of things to write about. D:
Alright, overall I think I pretty much covered everything, and In my honest opinion, the wall is great, you seriously need to teach me how to use stocks before the holidays end. I shall be waiting for your next Rozen Maiden wall, can't wait!
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In Despair
6 months 3 weeks ago
"'Despair' is such a strong word, pretty much, I can say this wall doesn't convey it. The vector is too simple, and of course, try to be creative with the background, such as mixture of dark colors, etc. "View
Colours Of Fall
6 months 3 weeks ago
"I pretty much love the vector, and great job on the eyes, I can never vector Clannad eyes for some reason... Actually, the leaves are quite good, and the butterfly is nicely done. Awesome work on the composition of the leaves, since there's a sufficient amount of depth. Really, I can't see what's wrong with the left arm, well drawn. Last of all, the shadowing is a nice touch, since it adds more to depth and realism. ^^"View
Tenma'ness
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Nice utilization of brushes, but the color of the background isn't appealing to me."View
Snow Kiss
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Nice concept. This series kinda went weird, so much dark pasts... Well back to the wallpaper, the vector looks nice from what I can see, since I can't really full view anymore for today since I've reached my limit, it seems to have tonal shading, nice. But I can't really say that a wallpaper with just legs would be adequate enough for me. "View
"Pleinair will kill...Again"
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Pretty nice concept, and the vector is adequate, actually, the sword looks awesome. There are two things that I would like to point out. Firstly, those two cracks on the tiles, doesn't seem that appealing to me, since it looks too much like just 'lines'. Some of the newspaper articles have text that are repeated, which crosses out the realism of the articles. But overall, I reckon the wall is nicely done, I would've preferred the line cracks to be diminished though... I don't know, it just stands out for me. Nice work! ^^"View
Knowledge is power
6 months 3 weeks ago
"The background definitely needs improvement, the brushes doesn't seem to connect well, it feels too randomly placed. "View
Leap to mugen
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Instead of brushing those lines, use the pentool, the brushed line doesn't look visually appealing. The shadow on the left is another problem, the edges are too rough. "View
Fantaisie De L'hiver
6 months 3 weeks ago
"There are some extraction problems, for example, the guy's head. As the others have mentioned, textures would be a nice addition, simply because it creates depth, which this wall doesn't have, because at it's current state, it just feels like an extracted scan slapped onto a background. "View
Misuzu Kamio
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Actually, there is only one major problem with this wall, the extraction of the image. Bits of hair are clearly cut off, it just feels too rough. I have no problems with the overall design, it's pretty much the extraction that won't let this wall pass."View
blood+ saya & hagi
6 months 3 weeks ago
"The wall as a whole is pretty much blurry, the extracted scan won't do, the quality isn't adequate enough to pass, try vectoring them, and less blur on the wall. "View
akatsuki~evolution
6 months 3 weeks ago
"To sum it up, if you want this wall to get accepted, vector them, the images in it's current state is pretty much horrible. The text 'Akatsuki' is blurred too much, the wall as a whole, is just irritating to look at, please vector them! And those circles in the background, isn't visually appealing."
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Bankai!
6 months 3 weeks ago
"This wall needs a lot of work, simply because the quality of the image isn't adequate, the extraction is pretty obvious, leaving rough edges. Vector the image, and get rid of that land mass behind Ichigo. The background is crying out for help, a gradient just won't do. "View
Ichigo - All alone...
6 months 3 weeks ago
"Adequate utilization of brushes, it looks clean, but it's pretty strange for Ichigo to be dark when there's a fire right in front of him (the lighting is wrong). One more thing, I don't really like the text, not as in visual appearance, but what has been written, 'I must do this alone' doesn't sound that appealing to me. Overall, it's a nice simple wall, and since it's your first, nice work!Sorry if I sounded harsh. ^^"
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.::~W~A~R~M~T~H~::.
6 months 4 weeks ago
"Ah, I'm in the process of creating a Zero no Tsukaima wall right now, to celebrate the confirmation of the 3rd season! Well back to commenting on this wall, You pretty much conveyed the 'warmth' feeling, I reckon the large glowing ball below the text is a tad large, but nice work! "View
Awakening The Beast
6 months 4 weeks ago
"Well, if you don't want any other inclusions in this wall, such as images and etc, You might want to consider implementing some sort of text, like a phrase or simply 'Naruto' on the left. Text alone won't do much, unless you spice it up, using effects such as flames, and wrapping it around the text?"View
Shana
6 months 4 weeks ago
"Actually, the design for this wall is quite nice, it looks very professional, there are some image problems here and there, such as quality, so you might need to work on that. Shana on the left, in my opinion doesn't suit the wall, the quality of the image isn't as adequate as it should be, the scan, generally, doesn't blend well enough with the 'pretty' pink, since pink is more relaxed and Shana, well, agitated? The wall is pretty good, please get rid of Shana on the left, it's irritating to look at. Hope that helps. ^^"View
zabimaru vs. zangetsu
6 months 4 weeks ago
"Pretty awesome vector work, I got to say, the wall looks much better in comparison to the original scan. I see you've decided to change the ground to a floor of tiles, nice move, looks great. The reflection and the sparks is an awesome inclusion, overall the wall looks adequately nice, great work! ^^"View
Divine justice
7 months 12 hours ago
"Improve the composition, it doesn't seem quite right yet, and as for the text 'A God Came from Heaven' should be much clearer, since it's pretty hard to see with blood splatters covering on top of it. The wall has potential though, it does look cool, just got to fix on some things. ^^"View
～団子観月～
7 months 1 day ago
"Another Dango wall, awesome.^^ I never liked that rabbit, seems scary, nice work anyways."View
An Afterschool Rhapsody
7 months 2 days ago
"Ah... Seriously, I was pretty amazed by this wall, but I'm crushed, why, oh why is this wall limited to one size!? D:I got to admit, best Clannad wall so far, and the vectoring is just awesome. You kinda motivated myself to go vector something, and I probably shall, seriously dude, I love it! Even if the wall doesn't fit my screen, it's going to be my new wall, instant favorite. ^^"
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Solitary Night
7 months 1 week ago
"Oh damn... I don't know how to create waves! D:Yeah, my ps skills are pretty limited..."
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Shin sekai no kami: Kira desu
7 months 2 weeks ago
"Hey. ^^You definitely conveyed the power of the 'Death Note' with strong utilization of red, and the brushes are well applied which looks pretty adequate since it implements 'impact' into the wall. The brushes, really create an intense feel, but there's something that is bothering me about this wall, like I reckon the text could have been placed at a better location, and the brushes on the top right seems pretty random to me. It kinda feels messy, but overall, it's pretty good.
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In this big world
7 months 2 weeks ago
"Hey. ^^The concept of the characters soul being empty and lost portrayed by black and white is a 'yes' for me since if you did the opposite, which is the characters is the only colors in a mono chromic world, that would be a no no since the background would've killed my eyes.
Your background is truly awesome, it's vibrant and elegant, though I don't really like those root things on the ground surrounding the characters, but I guess they convey the emptiness, etc.
Overall, great work on the wall! ^^
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Blocks of Bleach
7 months 2 weeks ago
"Hey. ^^The concept is interesting, and the design is pretty adequate. The only thing I truly dislike is the greyness from the background. The brushes are well utilized, and a nice selections of pictures. Nice wall! ^^
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Innocent Snow
7 months 2 weeks ago
"Hey hey. ^^For the same reason, suffering from boredom, I shall comment on your best wall so far. I'm not a huge Naruto fan, probably only seen a few full episodes in my life, so it was natural to think that Haku was a girl, until you told me it was a guy, though I can't help feel sorry for him, since he past away. For your first time using stocks, it's pretty impressive, even though you think it's nothing, it's definitely something. *Sigh* I wish I can use stocks, but they're so hard to blend! D:
Heh, where to start? Well, I loved the stock photo you utilized, and the snow is pretty good, way better than my attempted experimental snow. D:
The mask is pretty ordinary in terms of quality (I'm guessing it's because of the poor extraction?), you should have vectored it, or at least outline the edges so it doesn't have this rough feel.
The text is a no no for me, simply because It's just a horrible contrast, actually, since I can't visually any text that would adequately blend or contrast nicely to the wall, I would have preferred the text to be diminished, but if the text is taken out, then the mask would look pretty random on the wall. But then again, this wall needs the text, so it can convey the theme...
The footprints are nicely done, same with the soft brushing for the snow effect. I would have written some more, but I'm out of things to write about. D:
Alright, overall I think I pretty much covered everything, and In my honest opinion, the wall is great, you seriously need to teach me how to use stocks before the holidays end. I shall be waiting for your next Rozen Maiden wall, can't wait!
Bye. ^^"
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