Sasuke's Susano'o: The Power Of Darkness

2 weeks 8 hours ago

"http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/463/13/
I think you should look at this chapter as a reference. I think you should make the ribs of susanoo a glowing white. Also I think there's too many ribs, maybe make fewer ribs, but expand the width of the ribs. The texture of the rib should be like a hot glowing white.
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I'm not a big fan of the flame colors, since I don't think red suits susanoo, since he is the god of storms. For some reason, when I read the manga, I feel like it should be blue. But it's your choice.
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=crmli&s=3
This is probable the closest thing I can picture to Sasuke using Susanoo, if it was in color.

Overall good work. I think you should improve on this and see how well it goes. Like I said, there can be other variations of this work and you can always improve on it. A suggestion for your future work could be to do Sasuke's Third Power Susanoo? I can't wait to see that =D"
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Naruto's Rasen Shuriken: The Beacon Of Hope

1 month 1 week ago

"Wow I really like how intensifying this looks. This makes your first wall look wimpy. It's been awhile since an epic Naruto wall came out. You did a great job portraying the intensity with the effects especially. I look foward to your Sasuke wall and keep up the good work.

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Generations

2 months 1 week ago

"This is pretty good so far. One suggestion I would make is that you can add more effects on the characters. You vectored them pretty nicely. More work on the characters would be great. Anyways good luck!"
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The Taste Of Ink

2 months 1 week ago

"I really like what you did here. The texture of the ink looks pretty realistic. The character and effect looks really interesting. The way you portrayed his movement works well. Overall a really good job and I hope to see your future works."
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We Refuse To Choose That Future

2 months 1 week ago

"This is a really good job. I'm glad that you make it a larger size. I think if you vector it more and make the art look more cleaner, it would look much better. But overall, its a really good job with the colors and everything."
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We Refuse To Choose That Future

2 months 2 weeks ago

"I really like the overall concept of this wall. You did a really excellent job in putting this wall together. I think there are some improvements you can do for this wall. It's not really a standard, but you can definitely increase the resolution of this wall. The bigger the resolution, the more detailed it will look. Also you can try doing some vector and cleaning work. This wall looks kinda rough and grainy. So keep up the good work and I look forward to it being submitted into the galleries."
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FlowerDragons

2 months 3 weeks ago

"Yeah I agree. This wallpaper is definitely good and you did a great job on it. But wallpapers should have something to do with anime. I think if you work with this a little you can do better. It had great brushwork and coloring too."
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Sheep-san

2 months 3 weeks ago

"I really like this final version of your wallpaper. You did a good job improving over your previous versions. It's a very simple wallpaper, but pretty humorous and clean. The vector is pretty nice too as well. Overall you did a great job working on this and I am looking forward to looking at your next work."
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Search and Destroy

4 months 1 week ago

"So far so good. I think the red on Alucard looks a lot better than the blue that you put previously. You vectored Alucard pretty nicely. I think you should do some work on the background. Probably you can try making the clouds a bit better. You can make it more realistic. You can also try making the background even more ominous and darker too I believe."
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"Happy Birthday...Anyways..."

4 months 2 weeks ago

"I really like the concept. I think you can do more with the granite background? I mean it looks really plain. The picture looks pretty good. The group seems a little blurry, but its great overall. I don't really know of any ideas of what you can do for the background. Maybe you can make the background an actual wall or some sort. Like it could be a bulletin board, a refrigerator, a photo album, or something. I think you're pretty good at making realistic objects. Like the note and the tape looks pretty realistic to me. So maybe the background can be realistic? The background doesn't need to represent Gundam since you are addressing a birthday.

I hope this helps and good luck!"
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Winter Breeze

4 months 3 weeks ago

"This looks like a really nice wallpaper so far. I think you should definitely work more on this to make it not look like an edited scan. I really like the brush work you did here. You should also use better fonts. I look forward to seeing you work getting submitted =] "
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K-On! The power of music!

4 months 3 weeks ago

"I really like the concept of the wallpaper a lot. I don't really like the texture of the background. It's sorta too realistic and it badly contrasts with the characters. Also the photograph should be vector, it's kinda blurry."
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Crying......

4 months 3 weeks ago

"Excellent background, but overall the character is pretty weak. You should definitely work on nagato more. She's pixelated and she looks kinda plain maybe? You should vector her out more. Background looks beautiful. But an anime wallpaper is all about the character and the background should not overpower the character itself. Definitely work more on this and it will be great!"
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Let the Good Times Roll

4 months 3 weeks ago

"It does feel empty. I think if you're going with simplicity, instead of a pure white background try to do more with it. You can try a different color, adding some texture, or adding some patterns to it. I think you're getting a good idea, but you should definitely work with this a little more. Think about more you can do."
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Beautiful C.C

5 months 4 days ago

"This wall is hawt =D
I think C.C. lying on top of a bed would be another nice scenery. You did an amazing job on this wall. C.C. looks absolutely beautiful here. This is really really nice."
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Sakura no Hikari

5 months 4 days ago

"Hey you finally published this, great job! I really like the cloud effect you put into the wallpaper. This is pretty good improvement over the first version of the wall. Again, beautiful vectoring work on the character. She blends well with the background. The sakura petals looks great here. The stars looks really good too as well. Everything here just blends well together and fits in perfectly. You did a great job!"
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Zabuza The Demon In The Mist

5 months 4 days ago

"Hm I wouldn't say that you should overall the ENTIRE wallpaper. What you should do is:
1) Fix the resolutions
2) Make the central object (Zabuza) more clear and defined.
3) Instead of a mosaic collage, maybe you can put together a few important images and use it as a background. Maybe you can do it so it's like a manga or something.

Hope this helps."
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Road to Dawn

5 months 4 days ago

"I like the shadow effect around Riku and your character overall is pretty good. The background looks kinda plane, maybe you can do something about it. The same can be said about the text."
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Gundam 00

5 months 4 days ago

"Hm blue is really more of my thing rather than red, but good job! I really like the effect you added to the gundam. The background feels plane, so maybe you can add more to it? Overall great work."
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Black & White

5 months 4 days ago

"That scene was pretty memorable
I really love the concept. The gun is lying down, half is in the shadow while the other half is in the light. This is good as it is, but maybe you can make the shadow more realistic? Also the broken glass looks kinda weird. I can't describe it, but it feels unrealistic? Great work and good luck!"
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Crazy Maze

5 months 4 days ago

"You need to do some more vectoring. The lines and edges of the characters and background aren't very clear. They look jagged. Some vectoring work can smooth out the lines. Otherwise this is an ok wall. I think you can greatly do some improvements on this wall."
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Alicia and Welkin's love

5 months 4 days ago

"I really like the effect you did here. It's already good enough as it is. If you want to add something, maybe you can make the image bigger and maintain the same quality. Also maybe some borders can help with this wall? "
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Gundam 00

5 months 4 days ago

"Would have prefer blue and white, but this is still pretty nice. Maybe the red represents trans-am? really like the background and the texture. The gundam blends in really well with the background as well. I don't know what effect you added to the gundam, but it looks really nice. It's like shiny and rough, I can't describe it with words. This effect is excellent. Great job!"
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Cuter without glasses

5 months 4 days ago

"Absolutely amazing job. This is a great improvement since your first wall. I am glad that you were able to take other people's advice and put a lot of improvements to your wall. I hope you will continue your good work and hopefully the community will try their best to help you "
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Be Stray

5 months 2 weeks ago

"This version looks pretty good. It's just that I think the previous version, it had more a metallic look to the logo, so that was pretty good. This one is kinda blurry, so maybe you should fix it up a little."
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