After months of work, chanelqueen17 has created a gorgeous scene of Alice and Oz from Pandora Hearts, using scans that didn't even feature both characters together. Even after spending so much time on matching the details of the characters to their new looks, chanelqueen17 didn't stop there and went all out on the background too! This wallpaper definitely needs to be seen!
"IMHO... the use of brush is bit too obvious, tone it down a bit, perhaps by playing around at its uniformity and opacity.
next your char glows bit too much, it appears washed out, and blurry.
the pattern and its grids on the background is too strong and competing with the foreground image for attention. It makes me rather dizzy...
Now if you think my view is rather subjective, think about this...
if my current opinion represents just around 20% of the population's opinion... your maximum grade is only 80% out of 100%, even that wont guarantee anything.
because some people might jugde you on a heavier scale.
i'm not saying mine was the right way of doing things but this could be the easy way out to do it.
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Broken World
2 years 5 months ago
"Ok. this one looks great to begin with
some comments would be removal of the bunny on the bottom right, shorten the decoration below her head ( shorten , do not delete ) and bring the whole image down so that the girl is at about 1-1,5 inch from the bottom of the screen.
add gradation so that the screen is too bright, bright color at the bottom darker colour at the top.
20% blue tint on top and 0% tint ( white ) on the bottom
add text on the top part of the screen, use clean fonts like verdana / century gothic
and inverse colour them ( the text is reverse gradation of the background )
"Hmm the background is too crowded, use lesser colour shapes.
Big and chunky color shapes will work better, tone down the whole background to make the char stands out lil bit more.
also the text... if you dont want text, its also good.
if you felt compeled to put anything bottom right corner is a good place... maybe the anime title & some jargon of your own... not too big tho... just make sure its contrasted
"Tony taka is a great artist, yes his work is always bit hentai-ish... and i'm in a bit of trouble trying to tone it down even just a bit. was bout to use his artwork on several occasion but you are ahead of me already... so Congrats!
its harsh community here in AP, and some critics can be cruel... but dont worry you have taste and thats all that matters XD
about your work... its an artwork isnt? shouldn't it be accepted as it is?
in this one put it simply, its pleasing at the very least.
I wouldnt put it on my desktop in my office tho... nor my home PC, but perhaps somewhere else" View
faded memories
3 years 4 months ago
"Hay Reesha :D
nice artwork! looks great and almost professional
the colour is great and the character shown too!
the only thing that bothers me is that the character placement, why on the left? i thought it would look better in the middle, issit because of the flower bouquet she was holding ?
well regardless its still a major work :) loving it!
it would much appreciated by the MAC user who generally finds that their wallpaper have disturbing blank spot on the side of the screens
the character choosing and its placement is very good despite it will create just a lil bit of problems if you runs windows
the colours is very nice but is kinda "gender bias", preventing some groups from fully appreciating the work by placing it on their desktops... regardless... its still a great stuff created :)
very nice work, regardless where the vector comes from, you did it just right it brings out the best out of it!
i like the glow and everything, it seems you put lots of effort in to the details.
The colour too is nice but IMHO the ambience is rather incomplete, the face is far too bright as if it was shining, i thought it would be more realistic should the face has shadow casted upon it or has dimmer wash around it. but then again whats realistic might not be the best for the impression :)
One thing i must note from your work the hair's colouring & shadowing is the most impressive i ever seen made.
the bed sheets and other ornamental too are very nice.
BTW did you finish the eye last? or was it the first? coz somehow it got touched rather differently than the hair.
I love it, it have perfect colour and harmony, the cat looks cool too
very amazing indeed
i love the whole image, the trees and especially the placement and choice of the fonts its very good :)
BTW, apparently you unique style, first of all i thought simply similar to my ideals, but apparently yours has a very distinct selection of colour pallete. I'll have to browse for more of your work later on.
"Hmm, sorry to notice this one 8 months too late, Gosh, this gotta be the grandest wall i ever seen, soo complex!
it got the rustic feel, the classical style, etc, resembles some middle ages paintings ( michael angelo & davinci stuff ) very2 roman styled.
"Hmmm i love everything bout this wall, the clouds are nice, the colours is subtle and relaxing...
but something is wrong with the girl, i dunno what and i cant quite tell, but something is definitelly doesnt fit about her... it could be her texture, skin texture, but i'm not sure myself
on the other hand, it looks nice as it is, still good looking nonetheless :)
"Wow, this is so great, very catchy
the girls is cute and the cat... is kinda eerie, anyhow its a great stuff you got
the colour is well balanced, and the effects you use on the background was cool too
i just dont understand why the sig is so long and big... lucky it gets covered by start menu bar from time to time, so not too much of a nuisance there
"Hay tamster, your sky is really awesome :)
very skillfully created, must takes you hours to do that issnt?
The colour and ambience is very good.
Spirited away text too is good looking, the only part i don't like is chihiro and the dragon, she looks too flat compared to the background you made ( the background is great, chihiro is not LOL )
the loss of your memories into the fading haze of time passing by
3 years 6 months ago
"Wow, great stuff, i live the thingy!
i love the symbolism you created.
xcept for some minor details, the white fog on the foreground contrasted too much with the yelow/creme background.
but the white fog thing is nothing compared with the font and its background
the font used and its black ribbon background doesnt blend in very well.. i say something more hazy as text background and cleaner text such as garamond will do better... again thats just my opinion.
its great as it is, just the text prevents me from +fav ing it." View
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Stand Out...
2 years 3 months ago
"IMHO... the use of brush is bit too obvious, tone it down a bit, perhaps by playing around at its uniformity and opacity.next your char glows bit too much, it appears washed out, and blurry.
the pattern and its grids on the background is too strong and competing with the foreground image for attention. It makes me rather dizzy...
Now if you think my view is rather subjective, think about this...
if my current opinion represents just around 20% of the population's opinion... your maximum grade is only 80% out of 100%, even that wont guarantee anything.
because some people might jugde you on a heavier scale.
oh well , good luck"
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Yukari Takeba
2 years 5 months ago
"Well, the scan is pretty to begin with...but the background is not in tune with her color.
also to be added, its bit too much brush action going on there, keep it to the minimum, since its too distracting
also the text... its rather old fashioned sorry to say... keep it small please
u dont need to shout her name out loud, i'm pretty sure your viewer are not some guy with visual impairment.
at any rate you are heading the right direction already, just that the use of brush, selection of color and typesetting can be improved.
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallpapers/kuman/item28282/
i'm not saying mine was the right way of doing things but this could be the easy way out to do it.
"
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Broken World
2 years 5 months ago
"Ok. this one looks great to begin withsome comments would be removal of the bunny on the bottom right, shorten the decoration below her head ( shorten , do not delete ) and bring the whole image down so that the girl is at about 1-1,5 inch from the bottom of the screen.
add gradation so that the screen is too bright, bright color at the bottom darker colour at the top.
20% blue tint on top and 0% tint ( white ) on the bottom
add text on the top part of the screen, use clean fonts like verdana / century gothic
and inverse colour them ( the text is reverse gradation of the background )
well good luck & thanks
kuman
"
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Little Mermaid Sora Naegino
2 years 6 months ago
"Hmm the background is too crowded, use lesser colour shapes.Big and chunky color shapes will work better, tone down the whole background to make the char stands out lil bit more.
also the text... if you dont want text, its also good.
if you felt compeled to put anything bottom right corner is a good place... maybe the anime title & some jargon of your own... not too big tho... just make sure its contrasted
good luck!"
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Between the Clouds...I found You
2 years 6 months ago
"Tony taka is a great artist, yes his work is always bit hentai-ish... and i'm in a bit of trouble trying to tone it down even just a bit. was bout to use his artwork on several occasion but you are ahead of me already... so Congrats!its harsh community here in AP, and some critics can be cruel... but dont worry you have taste and thats all that matters XD
about your work... its an artwork isnt? shouldn't it be accepted as it is?
in this one put it simply, its pleasing at the very least.
I wouldnt put it on my desktop in my office tho... nor my home PC, but perhaps somewhere else"
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faded memories
3 years 4 months ago
"Hay Reesha :Dnice artwork! looks great and almost professional
the colour is great and the character shown too!
the only thing that bothers me is that the character placement, why on the left? i thought it would look better in the middle, issit because of the flower bouquet she was holding ?
well regardless its still a major work :) loving it!
it would much appreciated by the MAC user who generally finds that their wallpaper have disturbing blank spot on the side of the screens
great work reesha !
thanks
kuman"
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This is the sound!
3 years 4 months ago
"Hmm nice work with the wall, its lovely :)the character choosing and its placement is very good despite it will create just a lil bit of problems if you runs windows
the colours is very nice but is kinda "gender bias", preventing some groups from fully appreciating the work by placing it on their desktops... regardless... its still a great stuff created :)
great work shinn, your style is very good!
thanks
kuman"
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Sheer Lust
3 years 4 months ago
"Hey blu3 :)very nice work, regardless where the vector comes from, you did it just right it brings out the best out of it!
i like the glow and everything, it seems you put lots of effort in to the details.
The colour too is nice but IMHO the ambience is rather incomplete, the face is far too bright as if it was shining, i thought it would be more realistic should the face has shadow casted upon it or has dimmer wash around it. but then again whats realistic might not be the best for the impression :)
One thing i must note from your work the hair's colouring & shadowing is the most impressive i ever seen made.
the bed sheets and other ornamental too are very nice.
BTW did you finish the eye last? or was it the first? coz somehow it got touched rather differently than the hair.
ehehehe
well GREAT JOB & i love it :)
"
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Simple Drift
3 years 4 months ago
"Amazing unorthodox wallpaper for this genre :)I love it, it have perfect colour and harmony, the cat looks cool too
very amazing indeed
i love the whole image, the trees and especially the placement and choice of the fonts its very good :)
BTW, apparently you unique style, first of all i thought simply similar to my ideals, but apparently yours has a very distinct selection of colour pallete. I'll have to browse for more of your work later on.
well see ya & thanks :)
kuman"
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Push the Stars!
3 years 5 months ago
"Wow, this is an amazingly minimalist wallpaper that works!everything is perfect, especially the composition and the balance of colour & weighting.
U got some real talent i say :)
great job!
thanks
kuman
"
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Dismissal
3 years 5 months ago
"Amazing work jason :) really amazing!really different from the original draft you showed us before. its much impressive, the details and everything.
I favored the idea the doors were kept open, that way more details can be shown and it will highlights your dedication to this one.
Glad you didnt give up on this.
If yours get faved by anyone, believe me, its worth every effort you made!
great job :)
kuman "
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Every color
3 years 5 months ago
"Great looking for a quickie!But isnt the colour a bit too red? i mean the over saturated perhaps?
anyhow it looks great, bu your sig definitelly ruins it * Sorry... but it really could do with out the black background under the text
cool stuff tho :)
thanks
kuman"
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Memory
3 years 5 months ago
"Cool stuff, i love the lines & the ornaments, well it looks as if spike is balancing on a cable like of stuff.great concept & execution. The only things that i can comments on are the colours, it could be brighter :D
IMHO This one is just great tho :)
thanks
kuman"
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Winter Prelude Version II
3 years 5 months ago
"Very very nice!great colours & details!!
your scan is very good, and you did a great job colouring them, very great job honestly
Just curious, where did you get the background from? appears to me it was a retouched photo :D
SO pretty!
thanks
great job :)"
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Sanctio Requietum
3 years 5 months ago
"Hmm, sorry to notice this one 8 months too late, Gosh, this gotta be the grandest wall i ever seen, soo complex!it got the rustic feel, the classical style, etc, resembles some middle ages paintings ( michael angelo & davinci stuff ) very2 roman styled.
XD i love this one, a rare sight indeed!!
thanks
kuman"
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Paper Girl
3 years 5 months ago
"Very pretty indeed, simple design, very well execution.just that as some one has mentioned earlier, a bit jagged on some edges.
other than that it looked awesome!
great work
thanks
kuman"
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Sakura
3 years 5 months ago
"Your wallpaper is very nice :) its lovely for short.i really like the background and the character is cute too!
i cant say much but her pose, bit out of place, but its completely not your fault
everything was great and fell into places nicely!
nice work :)
Thanks+Fav
kuman"
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3 years 6 months ago
"Hmmm i love everything bout this wall, the clouds are nice, the colours is subtle and relaxing...but something is wrong with the girl, i dunno what and i cant quite tell, but something is definitelly doesnt fit about her... it could be her texture, skin texture, but i'm not sure myself
on the other hand, it looks nice as it is, still good looking nonetheless :)
good job Blu3 :)
thanks
kuman"
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Al
3 years 6 months ago
"Wow, cool stuff, really original looking.I love the brown colour, it s easy on the eyes
and plenty of space for my icons :)
thanks
kuman"
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Lost kitten
3 years 6 months ago
"Wow, this is so great, very catchythe girls is cute and the cat... is kinda eerie, anyhow its a great stuff you got
the colour is well balanced, and the effects you use on the background was cool too
i just dont understand why the sig is so long and big... lucky it gets covered by start menu bar from time to time, so not too much of a nuisance there
Thanks, its a neat stuff :)
kuman"
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Come and Save Me - EDITED!!
3 years 6 months ago
"Congrats for the wallpaper :DIt loosk much better than the one you showed me earlier,
The colours especially, very vivid! and the stained glass was original looking too
great job on this wall :)
thanks
kuman
"
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Desperate search
3 years 6 months ago
"Hay tamster, your sky is really awesome :)very skillfully created, must takes you hours to do that issnt?
The colour and ambience is very good.
Spirited away text too is good looking, the only part i don't like is chihiro and the dragon, she looks too flat compared to the background you made ( the background is great, chihiro is not LOL )
great stuff :)
thanks
kuman"
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FLCL : My City
3 years 6 months ago
"Hay, great piece of work seriously... I love it!now i know that you ar indonesian i dare say this
this thing is great, and it wil be even more if the shilouette was soeharto, soekarno, and the rest of our presidents.
and also shadows of people rioting and debris of trash thrown in the sky, just a bit.
and the haruka was replaced by shilouette of a bajaj, spewing smokes
and in the mist of the sky add just a bit of Monas's shilouette
IT WOULD BE THE GREATEST THING!
LOLZ
anyhow its a great piece you have there, the composition and everything is good
nice stuff!
kuman"
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Pink Twins!
3 years 6 months ago
"Sooo cute!, the colour and the details are just great, love it!its soo cheerfull, and everything falls into place just great.
i'm thinking of using it on my office PC :)
and now if only i'm a girl... LOL ( i'm a guy. obviously if i uses this everyone will sneer on me XD )
cool stuff tho, I'll be gettin this one for my sister.
thanks"
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the loss of your memories into the fading haze of time passing by
3 years 6 months ago
"Wow, great stuff, i live the thingy!i love the symbolism you created.
xcept for some minor details, the white fog on the foreground contrasted too much with the yelow/creme background.
but the white fog thing is nothing compared with the font and its background
the font used and its black ribbon background doesnt blend in very well.. i say something more hazy as text background and cleaner text such as garamond will do better... again thats just my opinion.
its great as it is, just the text prevents me from +fav ing it."
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