No, don't post there! X_X there's are like 5 other threads on the same topic, where you question is answered. *slaps her forehead* prolly too late now...
"Year Angel-sama, i really love it.
And here it can be seen what people can imagine for their own. I'm talking about the bank behind the water. I always thought it must be far away ('cause the bank is very straight) and now i see some trees standing there. I'm not really sure if they are matching 'cause the rest of the bank is very plain, but for all other things: layout, colours, depht and mood are well done, so i personally can't tell you anything what to do better
" View
Tetsuo
2 days 10 hours ago
"Thanks Faantjie for your comment.
In the last revision i completely changed the background and i hope it fits better now.
Once more ~ Your comments are welcome" View
Fuu Fighter
3 days 13 hours ago
"Hi, this is a good job you made, i like the texture and the bg,
although - it might be better to remove the smaller letters in the middle part, i personally think that they don't fit to the bigger letters.
For the character it seems that she hasn't a connection to the bg ~ don't know how it looks when it's done, but giving her a pencil / paintbrush and/or a serious shadow maybe helps to give her a reason to be there (only an idea).
" View
Untitled
3 days 14 hours ago
"Hi, yes this is very nice, only some little points i saw:
most of the snowflakes are soft, it might be better to remove the hard ones,
it also might be better to add more tiny snowflakes around box and character to get more depht ~ only an idea
" View
Contemplation
4 days 2 hours ago
"Hi, the moon is very very cool!
It might be better to reduce the embossing on the tree or giving a soft light-outline on it from the moon and i can't explain the grey stripe.
But i like your wall 'cause of it's mood ^_^" View
The Time Is Now
5 days 10 hours ago
"Hey, i really like your stylished wall ^_^
CooL" View
Rising sun Tetsuo
6 days 4 minutes ago
"Hey, no Akira wall without my comment ^_^
I like the tec bg and the art of title shows that you have a lot of ideas
CooL work" View
Dreaming
6 days 16 minutes ago
"Hi, i personally think that it's a blue dream but a little bit too dark.
the right area in the wall doesn't fit well to the left 'cause they are different styles.
it might be better to find a crossing to a realistic scene e.g. a silhouette of a kiss ~ only an idea" View
power of the sun
6 days 31 minutes ago
"Hi, to get better help it's neccesary to write what you want to show with your wall (if you have one - or do you like experimenting? - it's ok)
So for the colours i think that the b/w character doesn't fit to the colours of the background.
It might be better to vector some parts, especially on the right side of the main character.
If you like to use the line drawing on the right, you should vector all 'cause it's very pixelated and try to integrate it in an other bg, 'cause in the way it is shown it's too conspicuous.
When you use the main character (on the left) without colorising, try to find a b/w background or add some brushes which fits to the char ~ only some ideas
" View
Once a promise, Forever a promise V2
1 week 10 hours ago
"Although your wall has good ideas i have to say that there are some things you should change.
First the front looks a bit blurry, details in the character can't be seen.
the wave is interrupted by a line and i can see some points which doesn't belong to the wall e.g. at the birds on the right.
i personally think that the water outlines are broken too often, it might be better to close them or using a colour to fill the water areas seriously. As an additional effect there would be more depht." View
'Holiday'
1 week 10 hours ago
"Hi Angel-sama, i don't remember the old version exactly,
first what i see is that i really like it (as i wrote - summernight party)
on second sight i should repeat parts of my last comment.
What i can really see is that you add some whirls in the water, thats quiet good.
Only an idea for the black landscape: i think you don't need a reflection of the fireworks there, but some kind of light, why not try to put some diffuse little little lights in there, they can be interpreted as lights from houses or open fires ~ mainly it could be seen that there is life.
For the landscape in the front of the water (where the chars are) it might be better to put in some reflections of the fireworks 'cause it would fit to the characters.
All these things i wrote are little ones in my eyes, the main attentions are fireworks and chars, i think they are pretty good (apart of the missing reflections in front of the black areas ^_^), and i have no ideas to make them better" View
seeker
1 week 3 days ago
"Your idea is great, but it looks very pixelated" View
Sora Master Form
1 week 6 days ago
"Ishinsai is right,
the bg is ok but let it what it is - a bg.
The character seems to be very blurry, it is a must to clear Sora, 'cause the front is the most important of the wall. you can give colours of the bg to it, but very serious - try to use only colours of the whirl to fill the face, not of the horizontal stripe.
You can also try to integrate the horizontal stripe in the whirl with a course, the lines you're using are to hard in my eyes.
At least try to integrate your user name at the bottom, this is better for using the wall as desktop background.
only some ideas - layout and colours are very original - so far
" View
2 weeks 2 days ago
"Dignity is right, there are also too much blendings, it might be better to use one clearly character in the front." View
my Treasure all bottled up
2 weeks 4 days ago
"Hey, nice wall - great idea and i like the surrealistic touch." View
Under The Moonlight
2 weeks 4 days ago
"I've seen your wall at animewallpapers.com and it's interesting to see that you make more effort on it here, especially the character - very good work indeed!" View
'Holiday'
2 weeks 6 days ago
"Hi Angel-chan,
When i saw the wall i thought it must be yours - and so it was ^_^
You got a lot of comments here but i tell you mine even if it is written before.
I like this one, for me it has a nice mood of a summer night party.
Some things i personally would think about:
the outlines of the chars are interrupted when they meet landscape (the black areas),
i think that isn't necessary.
the reflection of fireworks in the water should be a little bit more whirly (so the water)
and the landscape could need some reflection too.
Although the chars are worked out very good it might be better to lighten them.
The little crosses you made are too clear, they give a little light to the wall but i'm not sure what they should show - are they a part of the firework?
That's all for now - good work indeed!" View
Deceitful Dreams
3 weeks 2 days ago
"Hi, what a lovely idea to show the three mutants in this way :l
and it's nice that i'm the first to say thanks to this lovely wall 'cause i'm a great Akira fan.
As you - i've seen your other Akira walls and i hope others will follow
^_^" View
Mizore Ice Queen
3 weeks 5 days ago
"I think your idea is great, although in my personal view some things should be changed:
the difference of colours between character and background is too high, you canalso use purple colours in the bg.
it seems that the perspective of grass and trees is not correct, it might be better if the grass is smaller in the depht (also the trees). possibly it can be more easy to use stylished trees, the ones you use are very realistic.
the hills should have more details - in contrast to grass and hills.
thats all for now - carry on" View
View the Sunset with Me
3 weeks 5 days ago
"Hi, nice that this wall is accepted.
The leaves and the stars fits very well together. Very nice mood you was able to kept.
my new fav ^_^" View
Hinata_ANBU
3 weeks 6 days ago
"This could be a very goog wall, but there are some things to change (my personal view):
the scan of Hinata you used isn't clean, it's hard to imagine that it is vectorized.
The background colours are stronger than the ones in the character, as a result the char looks pale, i also think that it's not enough to use a simple course for the areas in front and bg, possibly it will look better with darker colours and some brushes?
Although the text gives a good description of her character it's too much, also double lettered - and in the way it is shown really conspicuous up to illegible.
thats all for now - carry on ^_^" View
An Assassins Life for Me...
4 weeks 2 days ago
"Hi, i like your wall - cool mood - i think the title needs a cleanup too but i really don't know if it fits to the rest after that" View
Pending Title
4 weeks 2 days ago
"This is very interesting you made.
on first sight i saw that the outlines of the characters are square-cut, you should change that.
Don't know what the chars are doing, so giving a little light might be better, especially on the outlines.
on second sight i think its very hard to create backlight walls (for me ^_^). Giving the contours a little colour might be ok, 'cause a serious green is a colour that would fit to the rest. possibly you have problems with the tree then. it can be better to find one, which is more stylished, the one you're using is very delicate. For a romantic mood it's a bit too dark in my eyes, but i like the sky bg very much.
that's all for now
" View
VONGOLA
1 month 21 hours ago
"I think in general it's a good idea but too simple.
the colours might be ok, but there's no depht.
i've seen your other walls and i'm sure you'll get some good inspirations.
'til then" View
Shun Goku Satsu
1 month 2 days ago
"I think the bg doesn't fit 'cause the colours behind the character are stronger than the colours of Akuma, especially in the middle part, it might help to duplicate the layer.
the black sparkles on the char are a little bit disconcerting, possibly it is better to fit the sparkles to the bg, but thats only an idea.
All in all i like your conception" View
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'Holiday'
2 days 10 hours ago
"Year Angel-sama, i really love it.And here it can be seen what people can imagine for their own. I'm talking about the bank behind the water. I always thought it must be far away ('cause the bank is very straight) and now i see some trees standing there. I'm not really sure if they are matching 'cause the rest of the bank is very plain, but for all other things: layout, colours, depht and mood are well done, so i personally can't tell you anything what to do better
"
View
Tetsuo
2 days 10 hours ago
"Thanks Faantjie for your comment.In the last revision i completely changed the background and i hope it fits better now.
Once more ~ Your comments are welcome"
View
Fuu Fighter
3 days 13 hours ago
"Hi, this is a good job you made, i like the texture and the bg,although - it might be better to remove the smaller letters in the middle part, i personally think that they don't fit to the bigger letters.
For the character it seems that she hasn't a connection to the bg ~ don't know how it looks when it's done, but giving her a pencil / paintbrush and/or a serious shadow maybe helps to give her a reason to be there (only an idea).
"
View
Untitled
3 days 14 hours ago
"Hi, yes this is very nice, only some little points i saw:most of the snowflakes are soft, it might be better to remove the hard ones,
it also might be better to add more tiny snowflakes around box and character to get more depht ~ only an idea
"
View
Contemplation
4 days 2 hours ago
"Hi, the moon is very very cool!It might be better to reduce the embossing on the tree or giving a soft light-outline on it from the moon and i can't explain the grey stripe.
But i like your wall 'cause of it's mood ^_^"
View
The Time Is Now
5 days 10 hours ago
"Hey, i really like your stylished wall ^_^CooL"
View
Rising sun Tetsuo
6 days 4 minutes ago
"Hey, no Akira wall without my comment ^_^I like the tec bg and the art of title shows that you have a lot of ideas
CooL work"
View
Dreaming
6 days 16 minutes ago
"Hi, i personally think that it's a blue dream but a little bit too dark.the right area in the wall doesn't fit well to the left 'cause they are different styles.
it might be better to find a crossing to a realistic scene e.g. a silhouette of a kiss ~ only an idea"
View
power of the sun
6 days 31 minutes ago
"Hi, to get better help it's neccesary to write what you want to show with your wall (if you have one - or do you like experimenting? - it's ok)So for the colours i think that the b/w character doesn't fit to the colours of the background.
It might be better to vector some parts, especially on the right side of the main character.
If you like to use the line drawing on the right, you should vector all 'cause it's very pixelated and try to integrate it in an other bg, 'cause in the way it is shown it's too conspicuous.
When you use the main character (on the left) without colorising, try to find a b/w background or add some brushes which fits to the char ~ only some ideas
"
View
Once a promise, Forever a promise V2
1 week 10 hours ago
"Although your wall has good ideas i have to say that there are some things you should change.First the front looks a bit blurry, details in the character can't be seen.
the wave is interrupted by a line and i can see some points which doesn't belong to the wall e.g. at the birds on the right.
i personally think that the water outlines are broken too often, it might be better to close them or using a colour to fill the water areas seriously. As an additional effect there would be more depht."
View
'Holiday'
1 week 10 hours ago
"Hi Angel-sama, i don't remember the old version exactly,first what i see is that i really like it (as i wrote - summernight party)
on second sight i should repeat parts of my last comment.
What i can really see is that you add some whirls in the water, thats quiet good.
Only an idea for the black landscape: i think you don't need a reflection of the fireworks there, but some kind of light, why not try to put some diffuse little little lights in there, they can be interpreted as lights from houses or open fires ~ mainly it could be seen that there is life.
For the landscape in the front of the water (where the chars are) it might be better to put in some reflections of the fireworks 'cause it would fit to the characters.
All these things i wrote are little ones in my eyes, the main attentions are fireworks and chars, i think they are pretty good (apart of the missing reflections in front of the black areas ^_^), and i have no ideas to make them better"
View
seeker
1 week 3 days ago
"Your idea is great, but it looks very pixelated"View
Sora Master Form
1 week 6 days ago
"Ishinsai is right,the bg is ok but let it what it is - a bg.
The character seems to be very blurry, it is a must to clear Sora, 'cause the front is the most important of the wall. you can give colours of the bg to it, but very serious - try to use only colours of the whirl to fill the face, not of the horizontal stripe.
You can also try to integrate the horizontal stripe in the whirl with a course, the lines you're using are to hard in my eyes.
At least try to integrate your user name at the bottom, this is better for using the wall as desktop background.
only some ideas - layout and colours are very original - so far
"
View
2 weeks 2 days ago
"Dignity is right, there are also too much blendings, it might be better to use one clearly character in the front."View
my Treasure all bottled up
2 weeks 4 days ago
"Hey, nice wall - great idea and i like the surrealistic touch."View
Under The Moonlight
2 weeks 4 days ago
"I've seen your wall at animewallpapers.com and it's interesting to see that you make more effort on it here, especially the character - very good work indeed!"View
'Holiday'
2 weeks 6 days ago
"Hi Angel-chan,When i saw the wall i thought it must be yours - and so it was ^_^
You got a lot of comments here but i tell you mine even if it is written before.
I like this one, for me it has a nice mood of a summer night party.
Some things i personally would think about:
the outlines of the chars are interrupted when they meet landscape (the black areas),
i think that isn't necessary.
the reflection of fireworks in the water should be a little bit more whirly (so the water)
and the landscape could need some reflection too.
Although the chars are worked out very good it might be better to lighten them.
The little crosses you made are too clear, they give a little light to the wall but i'm not sure what they should show - are they a part of the firework?
That's all for now - good work indeed!"
View
Deceitful Dreams
3 weeks 2 days ago
"Hi, what a lovely idea to show the three mutants in this way :land it's nice that i'm the first to say thanks to this lovely wall 'cause i'm a great Akira fan.
As you - i've seen your other Akira walls and i hope others will follow
^_^"
View
Mizore Ice Queen
3 weeks 5 days ago
"I think your idea is great, although in my personal view some things should be changed:the difference of colours between character and background is too high, you canalso use purple colours in the bg.
it seems that the perspective of grass and trees is not correct, it might be better if the grass is smaller in the depht (also the trees). possibly it can be more easy to use stylished trees, the ones you use are very realistic.
the hills should have more details - in contrast to grass and hills.
thats all for now - carry on"
View
View the Sunset with Me
3 weeks 5 days ago
"Hi, nice that this wall is accepted.The leaves and the stars fits very well together. Very nice mood you was able to kept.
my new fav ^_^"
View
Hinata_ANBU
3 weeks 6 days ago
"This could be a very goog wall, but there are some things to change (my personal view):the scan of Hinata you used isn't clean, it's hard to imagine that it is vectorized.
The background colours are stronger than the ones in the character, as a result the char looks pale, i also think that it's not enough to use a simple course for the areas in front and bg, possibly it will look better with darker colours and some brushes?
Although the text gives a good description of her character it's too much, also double lettered - and in the way it is shown really conspicuous up to illegible.
thats all for now - carry on ^_^"
View
An Assassins Life for Me...
4 weeks 2 days ago
"Hi, i like your wall - cool mood - i think the title needs a cleanup too but i really don't know if it fits to the rest after that"View
Pending Title
4 weeks 2 days ago
"This is very interesting you made.on first sight i saw that the outlines of the characters are square-cut, you should change that.
Don't know what the chars are doing, so giving a little light might be better, especially on the outlines.
on second sight i think its very hard to create backlight walls (for me ^_^). Giving the contours a little colour might be ok, 'cause a serious green is a colour that would fit to the rest. possibly you have problems with the tree then. it can be better to find one, which is more stylished, the one you're using is very delicate. For a romantic mood it's a bit too dark in my eyes, but i like the sky bg very much.
that's all for now
"
View
VONGOLA
1 month 21 hours ago
"I think in general it's a good idea but too simple.the colours might be ok, but there's no depht.
i've seen your other walls and i'm sure you'll get some good inspirations.
'til then"
View
Shun Goku Satsu
1 month 2 days ago
"I think the bg doesn't fit 'cause the colours behind the character are stronger than the colours of Akuma, especially in the middle part, it might help to duplicate the layer.the black sparkles on the char are a little bit disconcerting, possibly it is better to fit the sparkles to the bg, but thats only an idea.
All in all i like your conception"
View