"I hope you'll accept this comment as a form of criticism and that you'll understand the reasons why i'm not really liking your wallpaper.
When i saw the thumbnail of your wallpaper, i thought that someone posted a slightly modified version of the original scan. This was a first bad impression ; but as i like the original scan, i downloaded your wall to see the details and what you added.
My main criticism is that i don't understand what your wall arstically brings compared to the original scan. To my non-waller point of view, it just looks like you played with the scan by adding effects and textures ... And tada, we have a wallpaper ready.
I'm not really comfortable when saying this because i don't have any idea of the effort needed to create this from the original scan. But still, i had a clue because the scan you credit (which is now in quarantaine as it is duplicated compared to the orignal scanned by Piyura) has been posted on MT some hours ago ; It shows that the effort required to produce such a texture wall isn't that big.
Besides this fact, i don't really understand your choice regarding the colors. Some parts are really bright and blurry ; they hide a lot of details of the scan which in my opinion were nice : the rose, the details of her eyes and the details of her face.
I think that applying these colors just remove the emotions carried by the original eyes.
I think the scenery and the emotion carried by the original scan is nothing but common and nothing but just a "trendy" illustration.
I also really don't understand which light source you wanted to give to your wall. There is a diagonal line on the right which separates the dark and lightened parts ; it doesn't look really natural as just on its left there is a super bright zone encapsulating all the top left part of the illustration. To my eyes, it's a mistake to have so many different light sources ; it makes difficult to focus on and to understand the whole scenery but enforces the impression that there are different parts in the wallpaper.
The skin of the character is a good example of the presence of different parts of your wall. Her arms are somehow between dark green and dark blue, while her face is not at all of the same color. This is not really homogeneous.
Besides all these negative points, i think that your texture looks quite nice when applied to the roses garden and the shiny particles also do their jobs at making the scenery a bit more "magical".
I hope that you will accept my remarks , i tried to be as objective as i could and i hope it won't make you angry to receive this kind of criticism.
" View
Baren Vines
3 months 4 days ago
"This is a very interesting wallpaper. At first look i directly fell in love with it ; though, when fullviewing i had a weird feeling i hardly can explain.
I mean, the atmosphere of your wall is really nice and mysterious. The colors are in my opinion well chosen. This contrast between light and darkness can lead to various interpretations ; so that's a very good point.
But still i have some problems to appreciate the mix between the kind of realistic environment you designed and the character. She seems a bit out of the wall if you know what i mean. That's a bit the main criticism i have, being the reason of the weird feeling i had when full viewing.
Still, i think that both parts taken apart, the environment and the character, you create some kind of mysteriously appealing atmosphere ; and that's why i like your wall and why i add it to my favourites." View
Loneliness
3 months 5 days ago
"Your wallpaper is really amazing.
I particularly love the general atmosphere you created. The sky is wonderful ; it seems it was really hard to do but you did it wonderfully well. The castle landscape is also great and fits superbly ; The mix of this quite realistic background and of a manga character isn't confusing.It seems really natural.
The perspective is also in my opinion genuinely thought. It really makes me think that we see the wall through the eyes of some dead knight that an angel of the death is coming to take away of this world. Well that's just my vision of your wall ; but that's what i like in it :the fact that you can create a story about it.
What i like a bit less are the wings which in my opinion contrasts a bit too much with the rest because they are less detailed than the rest of your wall. The same remark for the grass; there is a bit too much of it ; though it enforces the perspective.
In conclusion, this is really a wonderful wall with a great atmosphere and on which we can dream at imaginary stories. A must-add-to-favourites ^^" View
Wind, a breath of life
3 months 6 days ago
"I really love this wallpaper. I saw it by chance in the showcased one.
I really have the feeling the character is playing with the clouds or maybe creating them with the "blanket" she's holding. I don't know what was your feeling when creating the wall but mine was that girl was maybe some kind of wind goddess taking care of the city ^^
I also really like the painting. It changes from what we usually can see.
So for the scenery and the emotional touch of this wall, i add it to my favs ^^ it's my first one here ^^
" View
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I Need A Miracle
2 months 6 days ago
"I hope you'll accept this comment as a form of criticism and that you'll understand the reasons why i'm not really liking your wallpaper.When i saw the thumbnail of your wallpaper, i thought that someone posted a slightly modified version of the original scan. This was a first bad impression ; but as i like the original scan, i downloaded your wall to see the details and what you added.
My main criticism is that i don't understand what your wall arstically brings compared to the original scan. To my non-waller point of view, it just looks like you played with the scan by adding effects and textures ... And tada, we have a wallpaper ready.
I'm not really comfortable when saying this because i don't have any idea of the effort needed to create this from the original scan. But still, i had a clue because the scan you credit (which is now in quarantaine as it is duplicated compared to the orignal scanned by Piyura) has been posted on MT some hours ago ; It shows that the effort required to produce such a texture wall isn't that big.
Besides this fact, i don't really understand your choice regarding the colors. Some parts are really bright and blurry ; they hide a lot of details of the scan which in my opinion were nice : the rose, the details of her eyes and the details of her face.
I think that applying these colors just remove the emotions carried by the original eyes.
I think the scenery and the emotion carried by the original scan is nothing but common and nothing but just a "trendy" illustration.
I also really don't understand which light source you wanted to give to your wall. There is a diagonal line on the right which separates the dark and lightened parts ; it doesn't look really natural as just on its left there is a super bright zone encapsulating all the top left part of the illustration. To my eyes, it's a mistake to have so many different light sources ; it makes difficult to focus on and to understand the whole scenery but enforces the impression that there are different parts in the wallpaper.
The skin of the character is a good example of the presence of different parts of your wall. Her arms are somehow between dark green and dark blue, while her face is not at all of the same color. This is not really homogeneous.
Besides all these negative points, i think that your texture looks quite nice when applied to the roses garden and the shiny particles also do their jobs at making the scenery a bit more "magical".
I hope that you will accept my remarks , i tried to be as objective as i could and i hope it won't make you angry to receive this kind of criticism.
"
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Baren Vines
3 months 4 days ago
"This is a very interesting wallpaper. At first look i directly fell in love with it ; though, when fullviewing i had a weird feeling i hardly can explain.I mean, the atmosphere of your wall is really nice and mysterious. The colors are in my opinion well chosen. This contrast between light and darkness can lead to various interpretations ; so that's a very good point.
But still i have some problems to appreciate the mix between the kind of realistic environment you designed and the character. She seems a bit out of the wall if you know what i mean. That's a bit the main criticism i have, being the reason of the weird feeling i had when full viewing.
Still, i think that both parts taken apart, the environment and the character, you create some kind of mysteriously appealing atmosphere ; and that's why i like your wall and why i add it to my favourites."
View
Loneliness
3 months 5 days ago
"Your wallpaper is really amazing.I particularly love the general atmosphere you created. The sky is wonderful ; it seems it was really hard to do but you did it wonderfully well. The castle landscape is also great and fits superbly ; The mix of this quite realistic background and of a manga character isn't confusing.It seems really natural.
The perspective is also in my opinion genuinely thought. It really makes me think that we see the wall through the eyes of some dead knight that an angel of the death is coming to take away of this world. Well that's just my vision of your wall ; but that's what i like in it :the fact that you can create a story about it.
What i like a bit less are the wings which in my opinion contrasts a bit too much with the rest because they are less detailed than the rest of your wall. The same remark for the grass; there is a bit too much of it ; though it enforces the perspective.
In conclusion, this is really a wonderful wall with a great atmosphere and on which we can dream at imaginary stories. A must-add-to-favourites ^^"
View
Wind, a breath of life
3 months 6 days ago
"I really love this wallpaper. I saw it by chance in the showcased one.I really have the feeling the character is playing with the clouds or maybe creating them with the "blanket" she's holding. I don't know what was your feeling when creating the wall but mine was that girl was maybe some kind of wind goddess taking care of the city ^^
I also really like the painting. It changes from what we usually can see.
So for the scenery and the emotional touch of this wall, i add it to my favs ^^ it's my first one here ^^
"
View