happiness

2 years 1 week ago

"Kewl... ehehehe.. the metaling is so cute... :).. thanks for using my upload.. :)"
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Magical Sakura

2 years 1 month ago

"The text is one of the things that everybody seems to look forward to.. well.. the text rendering doesn't fit to the wall.. too generic.. :) and yes.. as what they said... adding more stuff to background makes it cool... if you prefer daylight.. add some clouds and some sort of a lens flare.. :).. adjust the levels of sakura.. just make it a little darker.. change that star trails on her.. find a much better sparkle brush.. :) ... for the text.. try changing the stroke of the text to white and use a sans serif font... put some glass effect on it... :) more important is that it uses a color which actually coordinates with all the elements of your wallpaper... so that it looks elegant and doesn't make someones eye pop out.. :) btw.. also try to change the black feather.. look for an alternative vector feather image or brush.. :)"
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2 years 1 month ago

"Cool idea huh? :)

here's my suggestions about it:
1. the windows background that you used is zoomed in and it causes for it to have some blurry stuff on it.. observe it on the left side of the wall..
2. all the elements don't have the same rendering effects.. it just doesn't go with the background image..
[a] the characters are 3d(i guess) and it doesn't fit too much on the background.
[b] as well as the the rolling cloud effect..
i hope there are more options or alternatives with regards to the background.. :) just change the lighting effects of each element so that it can go with the background.. keep it consistent... :)
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Black and Red

2 years 1 month ago

"Hmm... here are my comments:

1. observe the stars on the left and chunli.. there are some blurry stuff on the edges.. seems like it was enlarged or something.. eliminate those...

2. the wallpaper was too simple...try putting some additional stuff (like filters, lighting effects.. etc.)

well that's all.. :)"
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I Burn for You

2 years 1 month ago

"1. The main characters' levels doesn't fit to the background..

2. The Edges of the main characters aren't that well extracted.. try to fix it... i saw one on kagome's hair and inuyasha's hair.. from above and the bottom..

3. Try adding some more filters... the image looks very simple to me.. :)"
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Haru

2 years 1 month ago

"Very simple... well here ar my comments and suggestions about it..

1. Try sharpening or vectorizing the image.. too blurry... it won't show the crisp of the image..

2. add more filters to your wall.. it could help increase the design

3. sakura leaves are lovely.. but sakuras doesn't fall from the inside right? hehehehe
i hope you could change the background to a more open area so that sakuras will fit in the image.. the image is not abstract as i think..

4. improve the levels of your image..


well thats all.. i hope that this wall could get approved soon.. :)"
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Meer // Lacus

2 years 1 month ago

"The effects is good.. but the colors really hurts the eyes... try changing to something that doesnt make the eyes pop out.. :) the concept was good... keep up the good work"
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Loveless Star

2 years 1 month ago

"Good concept... well... the work looks grungy to me.. hehehe... cute.. if i were to make this wall i'd rather eliminate the grungy stuff because the starry things just won't fit for me.. anway.. all of us have our very own special concept.. uhmm. that's just for me ok.. it's up to you if you'll change things.. :) but it quite good already.. :) i just said my own opinion on it. :)"
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The Hope for Rune Midgard

2 years 1 month ago

"Well... nothing much to say about it.. the wall seemed to be a cut version of the original.. hmm... eheheh... at least you have made a little touch to it.. impressive.. :) i like this one more than the original one.. :) it's more better if they are complete.. :) great job.. :)"
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Elegance of light

2 years 1 month ago

"Kewl.. i have only seen this now and i can resemble it to my work... hehehehe... the same character job except for that mine is a male priest.. we have the same concept.. hahaha quite weird.. :) anyway... i just love the lighting effects and stuff... :) i just wish that the hair color was not green... :) btw... very great.. :)"
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And I...you

2 years 1 month ago

"Good one.. is this one drawn by yourself?? the characters seemed to have some kind of drama which is i like... very well done... except for the work to be much cleaner with regards to the edges.. try to smoothen it just a little bit specially on the hair.. :)"
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haruno sakura

2 years 1 month ago

"Well... everything's except for the image on the right side... the edges look bad... edit it... putting glow on it won't help hide the jagged edges.. :).. and try changing the image levels of it.. too far from the image levels of the left image... not balanced.. :) btw... the concept is nice which really matches with the image.. and also.. change the text effect.. instead, make it a little more simpler.. remove the blur or glow on the side.. :)"
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Best Friends .. Best Rivals

2 years 1 month ago

"I have nothing much to say about your work... :) i like it.. the glowing stuff, except for the text.. it just doesn't the glowing thingies.. it look liked a grungy type.. change the effects of the text.. :) that's all... :)


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2 years 1 month ago

"I already saw the full color version of this wall and i see nothing different from the colored one.. the scan quality seems to be zoomed in, making it quite grainy... the super blue and black really pops out the eye... try to have more alternatives with regards to the scan.. :) the first one (colored version) was already good except for the image quality..

i hope you can fix it more... :)"
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Xellos

2 years 1 month ago

"The wall is too simple for me... try putting more stuff on it... and change the colors to a different one instead of purple... or otherwise. match it with black... and eliminate the frame... ^_^"
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Super-Stars

2 years 1 month ago

"Well.. here are the things i could say about your work..

1. the colors doesn't fit that much to your characters and the colors are quite simple for them.
try changing the colors of your walk of fame (is it?).. :)

2. the characters aren't extracted well.. observe the hair of the 2nd character from the right.. (the one with the blonde hair and red dress).. there are still traces of white background from the left & right side of her face.. try clearing them up.

3. the edges... clear them a little bit more..
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ill be waiting

2 years 1 month ago

"Another second emotion here... the concept is quite different but the texts doesn't fit to the work.. specially that black text.. change it's opacity maybe and change the color to white, and don't scatter them up... The image seems as if it belongs to small kind one zoomed to fit in.. well i hope that's not the only pic you can find HQ.. or if you can't really find anything.. find more alternative to that... this is where filters really needs to be inserted.. put some to add more stuff on it.. and look for appropriate brushes for your work... i hope you can improve it.. i am looking forward to it.. :)"
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Shana

2 years 1 month ago

"Well i have no things to say about this work... it's great to me... :) simple and nice.. but one thing is the lighting of the character.. if im the one to make this i would rather put some lighting effects on the character maybe.. but it's up to you... hehehe... we have different concepts.. btw it's just what i think... :) anyway.. keep up the good work.. wait for more critics to check out for your work then go submit it... but if i'm the mod here.. this is really accepted.. :)"
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Pita Happiness

2 years 1 month ago

"Well... first of all i wanna say i really don't know this anime but she's cute, i have no objections :) .. here are my comments:

1. it seemed that this image was a little bit zoomed or correct if it's not.
2. the edges seem to be jagged to me that's why i have said that this image was a bit zoomed.
3. i know that you can find a little bit more of a HQ scan of this.. :) good luck"
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Magnus Exorcismus

2 years 2 months ago

"Thank you.. :)"
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2 years 2 months ago

"The concept was nice and cool... here are my comments:
1. the image cutting was not so good.. try to be observant on curves.. take for example the wing.
2. the image was from a low quality image enlarged to fit it.. making the image not look so good. well... with regards to that. try to find some more larger of it..
3. cut of the bg of the center image... it still obvious that the center image is not as black as the whole background of the image..
4. try putting some more filters on it.. it can help enhance your work

i am looking forward that you can improve it... :)"
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Oren-San

2 years 2 months ago

"1. well.. all i could say is that you need to give your character a color... it really sucks seeing wallpaper so uniform in color.. btw.. we all know uniformity.. but change it..
2. change the font of your text (or whatsoever we can call it). your text is kinda gothic to me and your wallpaper is not gothic in style.. as well as it's color. In addition, try changing / removing the embossment of it.. try thinking of more alternatives that will make your texts fit with your background..
3. remove the very noisy stroke on your character.. it just doesn't fit.. just put a simple glow.
4. with regards to the background. i have no objections on the concept and design of it except for the colors.. make it a little darker...

I understand that this is your first.. well i also make one's and i am looking forward to everybody's comments.. i know that you can still improve it.. :):)

goodluck.. :)"
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Lenneth Valkyrie

2 years 2 months ago

"The design and concept was nice... :)

i just wish that the character itself was a little bit whiter..

the color harmony was nice.. i love it.. :)

great work! :)"
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My first wallpaper ^^

2 years 2 months ago

"Hmmm... the concept was indeed nice.. but the images doesn't fit together with regards to it's quality... the characters' image quality is lower than the background.. try searching for a high quality image of that or otherwise look for an high-quality alternative image for that in case you can't find one.. :),, btw.. nice concept... and i hope that you can improve it.. i'm looking forward to it.. :)"
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Mokona!

2 years 2 months ago

"I love the background of the wallpaper specially mokona and it's vector stuff & effects... with regards to the text.. the colors are good... for the font.. i would rather use a thick sans serif font.. well we have our own styles anyway.. btw... nice job... :)"
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