hello My work is really bad!

2 years 10 months ago

"If you can't make one, what are you doing here? Really... you should do something about this, it's not the right attitude :))"
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Why was I rejected?

2 years 10 months ago

"I guess you could try finding some other kind of brushes. Go to deviantart.com/resources/photoshop brushes for that.
For the vector you need a special program, Photoshop, Illustrator, Flash, Corel... I suggest photoshop, though, it's the best for image editing and for this kind of wall.

About your wall, i think the scan is a problem.. the grainy stuff al around, they have to go. I think you should start everything from scratch with new brushing and new cleaning. As for the image, i have the scan, but in small sizes, so i suggest you should redownload it :-s..

good luck :)"
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Peace Maker Kurogane Wall

2 years 10 months ago

"Umm... don't want to.. ummm.. be mean or something, but that's definitely not a wall. I think you should read the faq..."
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Hollow Ichigo(first try at a wall) Need Feedback

2 years 10 months ago

"Umm. 10 minutes?? don't want to be mean or anything :-s, but i don't think you can make a nice wall in one hour, and there you go with 10 minutes? :(. Put some effort into it, cause this place is for people that do that.

So, let's start with the dots or squares or whatever they are. Umm... they're noot working. They're too rough for everything.
Secondly, the text is tooo tough also, try something smaller and a little more smooth.
Thirdly, the scan(s). Try to loose the ones from the back, and concentrate more on just one, one that you can improve with some cleaning, brushes and textures maybe.

Anyway,pleease try to put more effort on your work from now on, cause you'll get.. umm... bad treated :-ss.

p.s: i'm really not trying to be mean or anything, just giving you some piece of advice ^^"
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Burning Naruto (rejected on Jan 10th)

2 years 10 months ago

"Why not trying to place him in the middle? I think it would be easier to fill the empty space, that's if you really want to keep the flames. Try some darker background, like black or blue. I think that Naruto should be more visible and that flames do need some work, cause they just seemed brushed there. I guess you could use some metal brushes or fractal one, to make more impact. As for the text, i think it would be better if it was horizontal and i agree with fragola89, that the japanese characters don't fit very well. Hmm, i'm thinking you could make those flames look like a spiral or something swirly :-?. Umm, i don't know ^^.

Anyway, if you want metal brushes, go to deviantart.com, it's a sure thing that you'll find some nice, good ones.

Don't give up, it could end up really nice :). "
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Fall Has Come

2 years 10 months ago

"Nice work so far, if it's your first as you say it is :).

I just wanted to say that you should make the grass more..umm.. green? when you use the grass brush, change the foreground color And the background color with two different greens and you'll get some new effect.
It kinda botheres me that the scan is not really blending with the grass. What you could do is flatten the grass in the portions where their feet are, so it looks like there's some actual weight in there, or try to use the grass brush, but in smaller sizes.
You can mix brush sizes, brush colors to make the grass look more realistic and such.

for more brushes, go to deviantart.com, it's a great resource mine. when you're there, go to Browse-> Resources-> Adobe Photoshop Brushes and there you are. Look for the most popular ones from "all time" and i'm sure you'll find something useful. ^^

Hope that helps. Give your best :)
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my first Wall for you

3 years 2 months ago

"You should listen to pana I guess... :). He knows better. I think you shouldn't have that edge, maybe if you could do something as if it was burned or such. you could turn this into a really grungy wall. Also, you could work on that black bg, add some textures, or maybe, you could do something to look like a door or something. Um... just my thoughts on that >.>.

The second wall is also nice, but needs something extra. But, I suggest you to start a new topic for the new wall.

Keep it up. "
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fate/stay night 2nd try

3 years 2 months ago

"Yes, yes, I think that the whole thing is too blurry too :) and I agree with ~zazou8888: maybe you should add some other kind of leaves and maybe you could do the hugglings bluer or something, but they are blurred too.
Also, I think you should get new star brushes, cause this one can't handle bigger sizes. Anyway, i guess the idea is nice, keep it up, you ^^"
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Monochomatic Sound

3 years 4 months ago

"Really nice vector. I like the last one best. :)"
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... can't think of a title right now ...

3 years 5 months ago

"Sooo, i was just wondering if my concept is stupid or not.
The wall gave me a serious headache, cause i had to brush it, scratch id, smudge it, etc... and that's also the process with the sidewalk, that i had to make from scratch.
Had a hard time making the right wings, but... oh, well..

So, i'm wondering if it's any good or if i've spent my entire yesterday in vain :-<.



please, please full view.
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same vector with another small details

3 years 5 months ago

"Um.. I think the grass shouldn't be there O_o
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Vector Wall

3 years 5 months ago

"So, i guess, you followed the sakura tutorial? neat. Really nice. Good luck on your bg!
Keep it up ^^"
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My next wallie :)

3 years 5 months ago

"Umm... I think it's nice, but the bg is kinda too realistic. And I also think you should make the wings stand out more. You can't really see them. And some kind of glow i think will suit them well. :-??. I think that if you would do your original background with stars and such, it will look really nice and smooth. But if you want to keep this bg, i guess ... i don't know . Anyway, good luck.

sorry if i wasn't helpful ~_~... :-s"
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xxxHolic wall around the corner

3 years 5 months ago

"Hm... plain color? I think it won't suit the fact that she's not coloured and all. I really want to keep the black feeling. I'll try something new, eventually and see where it gets.

also, there are a couple of places where the hair crosses the shoulders/neck/fingers and you can still see both the hair lines and the shoulder lines. i guess that may be the style...

Yes, yes, I meant for that to be the way it is :)

so, overall, should I remove the leaves?

well, i guess i'll wait and see how the new version gets.

thanks for you comments anyway ^^"
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xxxHolic wall around the corner

3 years 5 months ago

"After several attempts of making it look better... here's what i've come up with:



oh, well... ^^"
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xxxHolic wall around the corner

3 years 6 months ago

"Um... is this new idea any good?

i don't really want to add so many things, cuz i don't want it to look heavy. The concept should be simple and ... red :D



please full view :)

edit: heck, the lines look jagged... dont' understand why :(, cuz, after all, it's all just vectors. oh, well. gotta figure this out.
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xxxHolic wall around the corner

3 years 6 months ago

"Hey, guys... i just want your opinion on my vectoring in my latest work. Took me a while to do all that details and such...

hope it's somehow good... :-s.


p.s: please open the link, because you can't see nothing in the thumbnail. :-s


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Wallpaper ~Stories~

3 years 6 months ago

"WHoaa, this looks so so nice. I really like your concept a lot. And since I mean it, I can't really tell you how you could improve :-?.

Maybe some shadows as alienzero said, but I guess it looks ok without tthem too.

Good luck to you! nice job ^^"
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Another try.

3 years 6 months ago

"Hm.. i gues this looks better after all... with my own clouds :))



but still... any ideas on what to put on next or what to do? I think it would be better to just let it go, but I worked so hard and it feels bad. :("
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Another try.

3 years 6 months ago

"This was vectored after a draw of mine I made in my french class about 2 weeks ago...

Everything is vectored, beside the sky...

At first, I thought the concept might be nice... but, now, I don't like it.

Damn, and it took me so soo long to vector everything. everybody got any ideas about what I should do with the girl or something?

*depressed*

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Being Skinny, Is it a good thing?

3 years 6 months ago

"Hmm.. well...

You know there are people who are very active and even if they eat enough they're skinny and aren't able to take a few kilograms ...

I guess i'm just like that. I know i'm thin and all, but I'm not see through ^^. And, although i kinda eat a lot, i don't really get fat. Well, now i've started some sports and all, and maybe that's keeping me in shape right now. But, until now, I was never fat... and I like it that way.. :D

So, i guess, being thin suits me, cause I can't imagine a fat me O_o

:))

conculsion... as someone else already said... I agree ... it's good to be thin as long it fits you :)"
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should've done this a while ago..

3 years 6 months ago

"Yay. More and more humans gathering here. That's... like... ubercool ^^..

welcome *waves along*"
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