First Wallpaper!

1 year 5 months ago

"I only see one problem that has been consistent on your progression while making this wallpaper: the flow.

Your scans aren't fit to be in the background you place them. The cleaning of the scans are rather messy too, specially with the lady's hand. Her resolution is low-medium, and Athrun's one hasn't be cleaned at all, except for border trims, which wasn't done well either. You can see that it came from a magazine or a paper publication, because of the stripes and patterns in all the picture.

The background is also very distinctive, in a not so good sense. What kind of style are you trying to attempt here? A rainy background, or a pencil-sketch-esque background? It looks like a hybrid of both.

Other than that, I can see that you are trying hard. Keep it up, read some guides from the Resource Pool, and you'll be ready to release this first wallpaper of yours very soon."
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A New Wall of Ranma

1 year 5 months ago

"This is a blatant copy/paste. You've just taken a picture, and pasted it on the corner. This isn't a wallpaper.

Although, if you are only showing us part of it, and want us to suggest you what to do, you are on the right section. But right now, it's too empty for us to tell you what we would like to see.

For now though, this is currently a failure in my eyes."
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Need help with this wallpaper!

1 year 5 months ago

"Well, a couple of comments here. First of all, the wallpaper looks stunning and beautiful at first sight. That's the problem though, it only looks good at first sight. As you study the wallpaper, you can see a few technical errors on it.

1. The wings. They are supposed to be extended from the back to the front, but the extension looks awkward, and doesn't use the same texture as the wings portrayed in the scan.

2. Sumomo and Chii's face have been whitened too much. It's kind of a distraction, and does not allow us to appreciate the scan much, due to lack of color.

3. I don't know if it's me, or the wallpaper, but it appears to me that the Chii, artificial angel text is not centered. Could be the height of Chii, or the color gradient, but it doesn't seem to be positioned in the center for me.

Overall, though, it's a good wallpaper. But, excuse my forwardness, I believe that your past work is better compared to this one. Keep it up though, we can expect great things from you."
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need help on code Geass wallpaper

1 year 5 months ago

"A couple of comments:

1. You spelled it right here, but wrong in the wallpaper xD
Code Geass, not Code Gease.

2. There's a discrepancy in the textures used in the background. Notice, from left to right, that it started as a clean texture, and it started to have noise on it, and then it went clean again. All the area surrounding the picture has noise.

3. The scan's pretty clean, and very good. The thing is, the background doesn't flow into the scan, and viceversa. I just can't imagine the combination. The background's pretty cliche too. I can't tell you what kind of background to have, or what kind of elements you are missing, because this is all up to you, because it's your wallpaper.

But, overall, it's not a bad wallpaper. It's a good start, and you can improve. Keep it on."
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Bankai!!! Make's you wonder??

1 year 5 months ago

"Lol, heavy spoiler xD
More like an inaccurate assumption.

I've already read the latest chapter, which is 266, and that hasn't happened. In fact, her ex-vice-captain, Kaien, isn't really the Arrancar that was fighting Rukia, but instead, an Arrancar that copies the shape and techniques of people it kills. So, you are WAY wrong ;D"
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Format C:\

1 year 5 months ago

"I haven't had to format C:\ for a while, mostly because there hasn't been anything that has made me do so. A simple defrag, and cleaning the PC with some tools regularly has kept mine running in an optimum shape. But do tell us why do you want to format yours. Maybe we can help you out, you know."
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Tenjo Tenge Wallpaper

1 year 5 months ago

"Everything's good, except the most important part: the scans. Do you plan to releasing this with scans of that resolution? Because both are very shabby and pixelated. All you need to do is fix the scans, and you are done."
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Is it ready ?

1 year 5 months ago

"Umm... that's not a vector :<
The quality is too poor, and the proportions are kind of irregular. It's a good beginning though, keep it up ;D"
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LA2

1 year 5 months ago

"The logo's perfect now, but there's a big bird in front of the letter A, lol. And, it might be your vision of geometry, but still, the angle still bothers me. That's just how I feel."
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the girliest wall ever!!!!!!!!!

1 year 5 months ago

"True, the background is perfect now. You can remove the candy pieces, and... bah, I'll leave it up to you."
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bleach / curbani

1 year 5 months ago

"The blood smudges are a red too bright, the text should carry a more appropriate font, and the credits... well, can't you fit them in 1 line instead of a block?"
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Hi everyone

1 year 5 months ago

"Haha, welcome to the community. See you already donated, thanks for supporting it ;D"
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Second Wallpaper submission / Naruto / by curbani

1 year 5 months ago

"It's a good beginning, but don't even think of releasing this as a wallpaper >_>
There's an excessive amount of space not used, which isn't good at all. But, it's good for now, keep working on it."
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Field Of Battle

1 year 5 months ago

"It's a... poor wallpaper. All that was done here was slap in a logo and a scan, over a seemingly mosaic or brushed wallpaper, with a weird texture, and that's it. The elements do not flow together, and it's just plain weird. Don't know what else I can say, but start over again."
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What Do You Want to Be When You Grow Up?

1 year 5 months ago

"What do I want to be when I grow up? But but... I'm already grown up D:
Anyway, I want to be a software engineer :O
Cool, eh? xD"
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She secretly loves you

1 year 5 months ago

"It's not bad, it's incomplete. They are 2 different things. You are on the good path, currently, you've like 30% of the wallpaper done. Now you need a background, more elements, and maybe some text. It's just a matter of creativity for you to keep going on."
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Hello Everyone!

1 year 5 months ago

"Haha, ambitious ;D
Well, welcome to our community, man, hope you enjoy your stay here ;D"
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My first wallpaper / Bleach / by curbani

1 year 5 months ago

"There are many things you should do here:

Make the background scan more noticeable, clean the boxed scan, and that bleach text shouldn't be blurred. It also looks very empty, so please, add some more elements. You've got something good going on, just try to tamper more with it, and don't leave it so empty."
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LA2

1 year 5 months ago

"Everything looks pretty, but the positioning is not good. For example, the butterfly in the hands of the human looks just like a copy/paste. It must flow into the scan, not stand out like it does now. Also, the background is too tilted to the back. You should lift it up a bit, since right now, it looks like the world is being sucked down. The Lineage 2 logo, being right next to the scan, shows us a big difference in quality that's noticed right away. Either find a scan with a quality compared to the logo's, or move the logo away."
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Tsukihime

1 year 5 months ago

"My opinion regarding this wallpaper is the following:

Remove the Arcueid Brunestud text, and place it in a more understandable format. Because people haven't watched Shingetsutan Tsukihime, they might confuse her name, or just think what you wrote there is pure babbling. Also, the black border on the bottom looks all slashed. Clean up both borders, remove the text, and you'll have 70% of the wallpaper done already. You've just gotta add some more elements to it, and you're done."
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Need help!

1 year 5 months ago

"Actually, you are on a VERY good path. Currently, you've finished 75% of the wallpaper, you shouldn't change anything else. What you need to do is add more items to the right side, for example, the Fate/Stay Night logo, or something to fill that space. But, you are doing a GREAT job right now, it's all perfect. Well, everything except that Servant Saber text on the bottom right corner. Either change the font, or use something else instead of it, because it looks kind of ugly."
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the girliest wall ever!!!!!!!!!

1 year 5 months ago

"I agree with those who say that the background is too white. Plus, the elements in the wallpaper are just... repeated >_>
You've only got 2 candy designs, and putting that on a white background makes that fact very noticeable, not appealing at all. The only item I liked about the wallpaper is the candy-bordered Yashiru."
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Music while sleeping

1 year 5 months ago

"Haha, you people are my type of people ;D
What's better than having electronica music, and DragonForce when going to sleep? ;D"
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Dejavu?

1 year 5 months ago

"Man, I get experiences of deja-vu every couple of times a week, and it's common stuff. Don't worry about it, it's just a sensation. Although, I've had deja-vus about things that I know have happened to me in the past. I believe in the paranormal, which is why I know that certain deja-vus aren't, but instead, they did happen to you before."
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Hy I am new here ^^

1 year 5 months ago

"Vodka > Beer ;D

Welcome here, man ;D"
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