moonlight dance

2 years 5 months ago

"Nice change the last one, BUT the wall has lost a LOT OF LUMINANCE, I think now it lacks of light, I find it very very dark.

From my point of view you shoud lighten it up, and only to make a test maybe you could remove the black stroke of the character, and leave it on plain colours, may be it will mix the figure with the backround deeper.

For the "walk on water" effect, I think the problem is right under the feet, you have the floor "perfect and clear" under the feet, and there should be some ripple or distortion.

Hope it helps ;)

Regards,"
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what do you think?

2 years 5 months ago

"I like it too, but, as I always say, the photoshop brush for grass, is very old, bored, and used to the extreme...

I should try to texturize it with a retouched grass photo or something, it's really a very used resource the grass brush.

I'll try to put some dirt texture to the track field, as user told you, seems too much neat and clean to me.

Nice wall instead ^__^

Regards,"
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A gaijin in Japan

3 years 1 month ago

"One day I¡ll travel to Japan too. Nice pics, nice girls ^^"
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Room Pics

3 years 1 month ago

"Woah! nice room, I love the Fullmetal pics you have over your walls, and I love your ceiling. If were in your room I will be always looking at the top, at the ceiling XD Nice manga collection. ^^"
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Ergo wall

3 years 1 month ago

"It's a very good idea, the concept it's good and it's well worked out, just a point from my own point of view, the grass brush, I hate that brush because of it's massive use. Only that. Nice wall anyway."
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Bloodberry SMJ

3 years 1 month ago

"Wow! nice tittle and nice wall. I think you have improved it a lot with the modifications, but just a thing, from my point of view, the impressive tittle takes away some the presence of the character. I'll try to do it a bit smaller and close to the left margin instead of putting it so close to the figure. Nice wall, congratulations."
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take a look....

3 years 1 month ago

"Much better that's right, only the figure and the clock of the background are still a little bit fuzzy, very nice wall."
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Pita ten~snow in heaven

3 years 1 month ago

"The only point I see is, that she is at the top of the background, she is no composed with the background, she's outside the compistion. However nice wall ^^"
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Inuyasha

3 years 1 month ago

"Good idea nice wall, but listen, an idea... Try to give less strength to the crosscatch strokes on the background, they're a little bit noisy and fuzzy, only a little bit less, and instead of putting that green into the trees, why not to contrast more the background, making the black more blacks and so on, and left only the Inuyasha clothes in red?? This way you're centering the attention on inuyahsa and moreover I love the red in a BW composition it fits awesome..."
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A Simple wall I made

3 years 1 month ago

"An idea, why not to do it in negative?? White over black, it will give more dramaticism to the composition and will improve a lot. And you could while doing this, make some rough borders to some outlines, some lines to make it more dynamic..."
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My Final version so far, how does it look? Better?

3 years 1 month ago

"Among all images, I'll take the clean one, the 4th image, the image of Naruto is impressive and fills up the whole wall, text only will be annoying, and besides, calling Naruto a monters, it's not my idea of what Naruto is ^^U, but however I think the wall will be more beautiful and shocking with Naruto alone.

More things, the illumination, I think Naruto has a very similar amount of red and magenta than the background, so it's a little bit confusing, I'll try to make the background a bit darker and to adjust the colour schemes on Naruto himself.

Another point is the borders of Naruto, they're fuzzy and jagged, and mostly on his hair, you should try to draw a vector shape of Naruto on top of him and then transform it into selection and clean the rest to make borders cleaner.

The las point is your sign, that's personal, but I hate the "mistral" alike fonts, and I think it's doesn't fit well with the whole composition.

The image is awesome, I like it a lot, waiting to see it finished ^^"
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FLCL wall

3 years 1 month ago

"Another point I see, is that it seems to much vertical lines in the composition, if I were you I'll try to rotate a little bit one film strip, it will be more dynamic, as I told, I see the composition a bit static, but I like the wall."
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My first wallpaper-editted

3 years 1 month ago

"Ok let's see, for a first wall it's a very good work, but from my point of view and my opinion it has some mistakes. To start with the border of the figures team it's a little bit fuzzy and blurred, you should try to cut them in a clear way. In the middle of the team it seems to be some scan trash, like a doubled paper mark or so, so you should try to clean it too, too easy with the clone stamp, give it a try ;) You should adjust the contrast too, I think the team will look better if they're more contrasted, I mean, the blacks more blacks. I like a lot the star faded background but from my opinion, the worst part of your wall is the text in the middle of the group and the foreground stars. I'll delete the stars, and change the typo of the team name into another that fits better on the composition, and I'll place it or at the top or at the bottom corners of the screen, or simply leave it aside and leave the drawing alone.

Well just some opinions, I like the wall ^^"
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Ok, Second Wall in AP ^^U

3 years 1 month ago

"Nicel wall! however, dont't know if it's my problem but I see the lines very fuzzy, so is not a vector isn't?? If it's not a vector and is not only my problem you should consider vectoring the character or redrawing it in photoshop. The background is nice, but the text dissapears on the background as long as it has the same coulour, I would reccomend you to change the stroke of the text for a white one instead of the light-violet. And keep an eye on that fuzzy lines if they really are. Just an opinion, once more nice wall ;)"
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Death Note

3 years 1 month ago

"The best well-drawn manga, and the best plot I ever read, all it's logical, nothing escapes to reason, and it's superb and very interesting. "
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do you think america can make better anime than japan?

3 years 1 month ago

"There only could be anime in Japan, for a reason, Anime made outside of Japan will not be anime as it is. So simple. America has great animation series, and good comics too, but so much different than Japan. So if you are asking if it would be better, the answer is no, it will be different."
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~Ichigo~vs~naruto~vs~monkey the lufy~

3 years 1 month ago

"Lufy, with no discussion for me, first of all I like the manga and anime series more than the others, his charisma and strong will makes him my favourite."
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Nana anyone?

3 years 1 month ago

"As someone I found the manga boring too. I think we're losing something because the manga is a best-seller and the anime is a prime time show, and it generated a massive reaction on japan, and is starting to spread to the whole world, but I don't like it..."
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Best Shinigami On Bleach

3 years 1 month ago

"I like Hitsugaya and Ichigo. I think Ichigo is a very round character, that Tite has given him a very strong and detailed personality. And Hitsugaya has a very impressive character for a boy at his age and an impressive design, more than Ichigo."
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What manga do you think is the most well-drawn?

3 years 1 month ago

"I love the drawing of DeathNote, I think is one of the most detailed drawing I ever saw. It's drawn in detail, the computers, fornutre and expressions, the dramaticism on the expressions is awesome. If you mix it with the impressive plot you'll have a number one manga to read, let's see how's the anime that is airing this days..."
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FMA Anyone ?

3 years 1 month ago

"So, the manga is different from the anime?? ... first notice, the manga will be published here in Spain at the end of this month, I will buy it for sure, the anime is my favourite anime ever!"
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2nd try...another theme!XD

3 years 1 month ago

"I like a lot this wall, I love azumanga and that wall has the "feeling" of Azumanga Daioh ^^ As told you should redraw the charas and try to vector them, they look a little bit fuzzy, and you should adjust a little bit the colours, and, as long as they're facing the sun, may be you could adjuts the ilumination to make a harder contrast caused by the sun light..."
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A project I did, Turned into wall, opinions?

3 years 1 month ago

"The link works fine for me, I think you should put more detail on the vector drawing, maybe your image base it's not so high quality to draw from... "
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zz pls say sumthing...

3 years 1 month ago

"Like the idea too, but the black zones must be more clear, I'll only left your sign there and more little. You should sharpen the black shape because the borders are a litlle bit fuzzy, maybe you should redraw them."
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A Simple wall I made

3 years 1 month ago

"I like the idea too, it's original, but the only point I see is that the lines are a little bit blurry, maybe you could redraw them. And maybe instead of making it more lively, you should give dramaticism to it with more black... more contrast... only an opinion ;)"
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