"Good day.
My last original anime art wallpaper was rejected by it´s realism.
I have to ask: Which are the patterns to follow for allowing anime styled wallpapers?
There are hundreds of anime and manga. They can be cartoonish [Like Trigun and Mirumo de Pon], or rather realistic [For example: Afro Samurai or Vagabond]. So realistic, that I cannot longer know what can be anime or another art style.
Can you tell me if my rejected wall, in comparison to the realistic anime I mentioned above, is anime styled enough for being accepted in the gallery?
My last wall is realistic too and very similar to the rejected one.
And it has been accepted.
I would want that my recent wall was in the gallery.
Please tell me if there is any possible problem with my wallpaper, for I could do something about it and for it could be accepted.
"Fine, Gabychan. I´ll give you my constructive critique.
You´re idea is good and the vector work too.
From my taste, I would choose the reddish one. The gray one is too much cold.
But:
1)The shading of the wall perimeter, rests visibility to your vector work of the birds: The wings of the birds are blended to the background. Doing that, you loose the vector impression.
2)You have to put the cross behind the birds. Similar reason to the shadow perimeter: It ruins your vector work. The cross traces intercept the vector ones, and it gives to it an overcharged look.
3)The light ray of the left side is more bright than the other.
4)The text work and the font it´s not the best for your piece: Words with their shadow effect seem to be floating in the center of the wall not belonging to it.
And you have writted a long segment. If you notice, the purple flag is a good place for writting the text. But you writted some words that go below the flag. That gives the impression of a tittle that left without heading, or words that are out of place.
5)The butterfly looks a little bit tridimensional. It doesn´t match very good with your nate vector.
What I can suggest for you to improve your wall:
1)Paint the top part of the bird of a lighter color, blending a little in the extremes for balancing the dark and light.
2)You can contour the letters with the trace color of the vector and just a pixel thin [If they´re going to be light yellow]. It helps to make the words more attached to the other work.
3)Replace the cross behind the birds.
4)Fix the words for they could see more structured. Giving all words their own place, everything you wanted.
That´s just from my view.
Anyways, I hope this is helpful for you.
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5 months 2 weeks ago
"EDITTING:Never mind...
...Kalico just me said to me.
Forget about it.
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Realism.
5 months 4 weeks ago
"Good day.My last original anime art wallpaper was rejected by it´s realism.
I have to ask: Which are the patterns to follow for allowing anime styled wallpapers?
There are hundreds of anime and manga. They can be cartoonish [Like Trigun and Mirumo de Pon], or rather realistic [For example: Afro Samurai or Vagabond]. So realistic, that I cannot longer know what can be anime or another art style.
Can you tell me if my rejected wall, in comparison to the realistic anime I mentioned above, is anime styled enough for being accepted in the gallery?
My last wall is realistic too and very similar to the rejected one.
And it has been accepted.
Last accepted wall:
Rejected wall:
You found my egg.
I would want that my recent wall was in the gallery.
Please tell me if there is any possible problem with my wallpaper, for I could do something about it and for it could be accepted.
Thanks for reading.
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The Mind Game
6 months 1 week ago
"Fine, Gabychan. I´ll give you my constructive critique.You´re idea is good and the vector work too.
From my taste, I would choose the reddish one. The gray one is too much cold.
But:
1)The shading of the wall perimeter, rests visibility to your vector work of the birds: The wings of the birds are blended to the background. Doing that, you loose the vector impression.
2)You have to put the cross behind the birds. Similar reason to the shadow perimeter: It ruins your vector work. The cross traces intercept the vector ones, and it gives to it an overcharged look.
3)The light ray of the left side is more bright than the other.
4)The text work and the font it´s not the best for your piece: Words with their shadow effect seem to be floating in the center of the wall not belonging to it.
And you have writted a long segment. If you notice, the purple flag is a good place for writting the text. But you writted some words that go below the flag. That gives the impression of a tittle that left without heading, or words that are out of place.
5)The butterfly looks a little bit tridimensional. It doesn´t match very good with your nate vector.
What I can suggest for you to improve your wall:
1)Paint the top part of the bird of a lighter color, blending a little in the extremes for balancing the dark and light.
2)You can contour the letters with the trace color of the vector and just a pixel thin [If they´re going to be light yellow]. It helps to make the words more attached to the other work.
3)Replace the cross behind the birds.
4)Fix the words for they could see more structured. Giving all words their own place, everything you wanted.
That´s just from my view.
Anyways, I hope this is helpful for you.
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