xxxHoLIC Wallpaper

2 years 2 months ago

"Nice scan but the edge seems too much blurry and gray. Why don't vectoring the girls ?
and the colors could be a little more birght, don't you?

Anyway it's a good wall ;)"
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First vector ever

2 years 2 months ago

"Ok thanks for your comments

Here the second version :


Hope you like it, i find it really nicer !
Anything else need to be improved ?"
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new wall need help

2 years 2 months ago

"Love the background!But why don't make the chara all black ?!"
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First vector ever

2 years 2 months ago

"Here's my last work :


It's my first vector so the edge are not pefect... I'll work again to correct them.
Please give feedback and say what should be improved !"
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Second try-Neon Genesis Evangelion

2 years 2 months ago

"I like much the second !
But.. ermm.. don't like the text, maybe it could be uppersized and why don't using golowing effect to make the edge softer.
Maybe you should work on the backgournd too, it seem to realistic.. not wallpaperistic !
I've seen ~omfgman giving a tiny tuto here for another guy which got the same effect on his wall ;)

(sorry for my english, hope you understand me..)"
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Uh, my first time.

2 years 2 months ago

"There is no sig !
And why did you cut the texte on the botton ? Remove it or make it full-viewed ;)"
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Starting off

2 years 2 months ago

"Nice idea...
Don't forget to add your sig ;)

I think the corner (of the too walls) is not enough visible.. a little ray (in gray) would make it more visible and will help the perspective.
I would remove the thingies too, and if you succeed in vectoring a chara lookin at these pictures, it would be really great !
And more definition is alway nicer if you can ;)"
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Renew Wallie

2 years 2 months ago

"Don't like how berseker and archer are transparent (we can see the moon under them).
And The text could be more visible (as light as the sig would be great)

I agree with mohanad, the backgournd seems too real. Try to apply a filter which make it rendering such as a drawning...

Good luck !"
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First Wallpaper

2 years 2 months ago

"Nice idea!Why don't adding something on the table such as a bouquet ? Don't know what could be added on the background... maybe a simple/striped pattern to make it looklike wallpaper .."
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First Shot At Wallpaper

2 years 2 months ago

"Don't like much the multiple chara too, I think you should remove the left Chara and work on the second
Good luck ;)"
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Fate/Stay Night >> Rin-chan & Archer!!!

2 years 2 months ago

"Errrmm, don't like the lighting ray, it mask their faces and it isn't the same direction as the global movement of the chara. (hum.. hope you understand me..) It would better start from bottom-left to go to the right side of the wall.

I like much the second too.
Why not putting the lettering on the second wall?"
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It's back again!

2 years 2 months ago

"Hi!
Ohh! Maybe I could see my favourite chara on the APbanner!Sure, I would try submit one !

http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/3862/karinban8ro.jpg"
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Breath of Fire wallpaper

2 years 2 months ago

"I think the scan could be cleaned more to fit the quality of the background.
And maybe you should work on the vectoring to make it as fine as the one the scan..
Like much the concept"
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Air wallpaper...PLEASE HELP!!!

2 years 2 months ago

"Good work I love the composition (the leaves :) )
Maybe the main character might be upper sized : so she could fit the space under the leaves no?
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Riza Wall

2 years 2 months ago

"I love the vectoring, the render is perfect...mmmm really cute, great work !
I love it !"
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Shana ^^

2 years 2 months ago

"Really nice vector but I don't like much the text too..."
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FAte Stay Night wall

2 years 2 months ago

"Very simple composition... but look really nice !
Love the text :)"
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Karin Wall

2 years 2 months ago

"I've tried your solutions and more other ones, but still no result...
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Karin Wall

2 years 2 months ago

"Snif :

Submission Rejection Notification - sent by %trismugistus to ~Goten
Sent 2 hours ago
You have been fined 100 points:

The wallpaper you have uploaded does not meet the quality standards set by our guide. Please post your wallpaper in the session zero forum for feedback on how to improve your wall by other wallpaper artists. The scan needs cleanign it's covered in jpeg artifacts.

Either that or save the wall better - use save for web in photoshop and set the quality bar to about 70%.



errmmm i'm not sure but i submitted my wall on this forum no? and i export it in jpeg 80%
erf..."
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Karin Wall

2 years 2 months ago

"I think this too... I post !"
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Karin Wall

2 years 2 months ago

"Grrrr I wouldn't heard of cream one more time today !
oooppss.. sorry !

I've just tried this other background :


Nicer than the circles no ?"
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First wallpaper

2 years 2 months ago

"It look better than the first!Just clean the edge of the scans and it'll be nice !
good luck ;)"
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Karin Wall

2 years 2 months ago

"Thanks for all your comments !
I think you were right ~SmOkEONE I've removed the picture and i find it really better

I'm working on the cream (^^) but still no good result...

here is the result :
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My first wall...

2 years 2 months ago

"I like the first of the new ones but why don't trying apply an effect on the photography such as palette knife or something else ?
And what about removing the transparency on the two characters ?!"
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Mugen wall!

2 years 2 months ago

"I like the new text : good job!;)
That's a great wall, I hope you'll play again like this !"
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