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2 years 9 months ago

"I only did grunge because it was requested. x_x Don't kill me for it. D:

Alrighty, about making the eye rounder...I'm not sure if it's necessary, sure eyes are round, but if I do more...wouldn't it look more like his eye's gonna pop out? o_O I dunno, but the spherize and the warp's just not working for me. =3 I was thinking the circles/shadows would make it round enough. I unno, but spherizing a circle won't do much, and spherizing the sharingan makes it look odd. Appreciate the suggestion though. :P (I didn't just say this, I actually tried it. XD)

As for JTsang's opinion:
White Lines
No White Lines"
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2 years 9 months ago

"Bleh. I moved it off to center now. x_x I didn't do it before, because I didn't want to redraw the sharingan. XD

Revised with Sharingan behind

JTsang's and Furikuu's comments contradict each other. *lost* Anyone else want to move the sharingan up front? Because if I move it behind, it makes the sharingan look more like a pupil. =\

Grunge? o.O

And I just realised, it doesn't matter if I move the black thing behind the white lines or not, just matters if I put the transparent white line behind. o_O But that's supposed to make the shine of the outside of the eye, so I guess I'll have to bring that up front."
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Evangelion, Rei Wallpaper

2 years 9 months ago

"Paintings usually don't go well with vectors. X_X I suggest you stick with vectoring, as it looks awesome so far. =P"
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2 years 9 months ago

" Revised again

Hm. Moved the sharingan symbol thingy up front, but still behind the white circle for depth. =3 (Tell me if I should put the black sharingan symbol thingy on top of it. =X)"
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2 years 9 months ago

" V2.3 -Revised-

Added some more shadows, and fixed some hair. :P"
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2 years 9 months ago

"@Furikuu
No, it's not misplaced lol. I think it's just an optical illusion then, since I vectored over the orginal picture. :S

Thanks JTsang for the suggestion of keeping it vectored. =P

Version 2

I think now, the problem would be the lines on the eyes, so...if I kept the original (I wasn't sure if it'll still count as vectored if I did this, so I redid them using lines only), it'll look like this:

Version 2 of Version 2 o_O

[EDIT]
Version 3 of Version 2

Tell me which one's better, please. X3

Also might help if someone would give me ideas on what to add. HK and I both feel as if something's missing on the black side, but we couldn't decide on what it was. :\
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Gunslinger Girl wallpaper

2 years 10 months ago

"Not bad, but with just a quick glance, the violin looks like it's floating. =\

I would also thinking of putting less and larger pictures, just so that people don't have to focus on more. Don't add text on the pictures unless it looks like an autograph/scribble by someone. Also change the background to a table or something. That's about it, I really like the text though. :P"
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2 years 10 months ago

"OMG! Thanks Nuni! 33 I was looking for a guide like that. ^_^;

Revised #2

Hope it's a lot better now =X"
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2 years 10 months ago

" Revised.

Erm, the eye should be a bit fixed. =\"
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2 years 10 months ago

"Lol, the other eye is closed, because it's crying. (Over the loss of his best friend in order to obtain the mangekyou sharingan. He didn't actually cry, but he was crying inside, therefore, the tears are red [blood]) :P

My little explanation there, was supposed to be typed when I submit it. Still deciding on the final touches, so not gonna submit yet. :P"
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2 years 10 months ago

"Lol, I never thought of it as a guessing game. I thought the line on his face was a good enough hint. =\

-As for this smokey effect it was so that it looked more like an eye. It's not all vectored because I wanted to stress the focus on the eye, so I made they "depth" in it. =3"
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2 years 10 months ago

" Clickk.

Well, this one's a vector done by me, all the photoshopping was on the eye, since it's the main attraction of them wall. :) Tell me if something's just shouting "CHANGE ME!" or if you spot any minor errors. X3

~Thanks."
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eri

2 years 10 months ago

"That's pretty good, though either you messed the scan up, or you need a better one. +_+"
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Please tell me...

2 years 10 months ago

"Erm, yes you have to buy Photoshop, unless you want to download the illegal version for free, which I'm sure most of us did. XD Photoshop costs well over $100 USD, so that's why a lot of us downloaded it."
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have i well extract my scan ?

2 years 10 months ago

"A bit choppy, but barely noticable. Should be fine after you resize it. ;D (Except those little things on her hair..w/e they are o_O)"
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Tsubasa

2 years 10 months ago

"Well, my personal opinion is that you have to start all over again if you want this approved. First, the scan is very bad for making a scenic wall with, so I suggest you re-cg your scan, you change the wall completely.

I'd say changing the wall completely will be a better choice. With this scan, you might as well make a wall that's an art style, since the lines are thick and black. You could also try a techno or grungey wall. *shrug* All I can say is that scan doesn't fit at all with a scene."
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WIP

2 years 10 months ago

"That's why you use pentool instead of lasso. =X

There isn't anything else to say about an iPod wall. Usually, iPod wall's extracting should be PERFECT since it's the only thing on the wall.

Hm...I might suggest a gradient background just to see how it looks like, I'm not sure if it'll turn out better or not, but you should try it, might look good, you never know."
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Second Attempt

2 years 10 months ago

"If your scan is that big, I suggest you keeping the background more simple. Take out the white moon on top, and as puppychow said, change the font. The way you did this background make this wall look like it's supposed to be done in silhouette, so I think you might want to do something with the lighting.

Also, the scan doesn't fit in with a scenic wall, to make it do that will take a lot of skill and time. Good luck. ;D"
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Suggestions for Xmas paper?

2 years 10 months ago

"Hmmm...colors are a bit dull. Add an overlay/soft light layer of the picture and Gaussian blur it by 2 pixels. Should give it more life. ;)"
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WIP

2 years 10 months ago

"Erm, I must be blind. x_x

Where's the iPod?"
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Which one should I do?

2 years 10 months ago

"Well, I have a couple questions for this one:

1. The grass, I've been told that it looked too Photoshopped, and apparently, I have no idea how to fix that. XD
2. The sky looks odd, I'll be fixing the clouds and manually making them this time, so any crit for the sky can wait until the next post.
3. The buildings. If I were to not put the buildings (because it just looks odd now o.o), what else can I put? Or if I can make the buildings not look odd anymore, how? x_X

Also any other ideas on what wall to make with that scan would be nice, since I know nothing about the anime (Shingetsusan Tsukihime), I didn't know what to do. o_o


PS: I made some further adjustments, and it just looked worse, so I'll post a revised edition when I'm comfortable with it. XD"
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[Cowboy Bebop: Knocking on Heaven's Door] wallpaper

2 years 10 months ago

"Oh, and one more thing...

I think the cursor, for the aiming, the horizontal lign is a bit slanted. Not sure, but it seem like it. =\"
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こにちは

2 years 10 months ago

"You might want to change the title. I think it's supposed to be in no other language than English. =\

Anyways, Welcome to AP. :)"
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[Cowboy Bebop: Knocking on Heaven's Door] wallpaper

2 years 10 months ago

"Oh well, keep them and blend them in a bit more. X_x""
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[Cowboy Bebop: Knocking on Heaven's Door] wallpaper

2 years 10 months ago

"Hmm, I like the text. You could make the blood behind him more liquid-like, so it looks more like blood. Maybe take out the butterflies, too. =\ Nice wall, though. XD"
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