wallie prototype

1 year 3 months ago

"The resolution of the wallpaper is wrong; please take away the texture you used on top of the scan immediately, including the text. The black texture basically covers the whole picture underneath, and looks messy and effortless. Once the scan is easier to see, then more criticism and advice can be given. But for now, please fix the previously suggested errors."
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My first Nana wall

1 year 3 months ago

"Your wallpaper seems very dull, and has no appeal at all. The text is bothersome, as well as the transparent middle. Remove those two issues, and try adding some more brushes."
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kakashi anbu

1 year 3 months ago

"The image quality of both the scan and background is terrible.
It's suggested that you change both so that it looks as though you actually put some effort into the wallpaper."
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Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess

1 year 9 months ago

"I bought Twilight Princess for Nintendo Wii yesterday, and I must say that
both the game and the system are outstanding.
Being the Zelda fan that I am, I practically become eccentric even when I start the system.
Although I've heard that the graphics are not as well displayed on Wii as they are on the other
two competitive systems, I believe that the display is brilliant- especially on the game.
Unlike former games, Twilight Princess provides a more exact and maneuverable perspective, especially
due to the Wii's requirement of movement.

Basically, the game is phenomenal.
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Naruto

1 year 11 months ago

"Your rectangles are very jagged.
And the chibi images of kakashi and naruto would be more fitting if they were vectored."
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New wall

1 year 11 months ago

"It doesn't seem as if you vectored the girl's eyes, hair and the computer itself.
Once again, in a vector wall, EVERYTHING should be vectored. It looks much better.
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Mai-Hime: Need ideas to fill space.

1 year 11 months ago

"Adding some shadow below the chin area would help distinguish between the head and neck; without shadow the head looks demented.
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New wall

1 year 11 months ago

"Some of your circles are still jagged.
Either remove them, or clean them up.
Just as I had stated before, your character must be vectored.
Good Tutorials is a site
that provides a myriad of tutorials on Photoshop.
If you search the phrase "vector" there, then you will get numerous helpful results.
So hopefully you can learn and fix your errors.

I suggest taking the text away, it's quite large and attracts too much attention."
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ichigo mashimaro

1 year 11 months ago

"Your wallpaper is devoid of the requirements needed in a submittable wallpaper.
{ie: vectored/cleaned scan, abstract/complex background, effort of atleast an hour to as long as possible}
I highly doubt you put any effort into this.
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where did i go wrong

1 year 11 months ago

"There are extraction errors in the scan- such including ones in the bottom right corner of the character.
The character should also be vectored to improve the quality, and the text should either be fixed or removed."
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Submission #1 [feat. Digi Charat's Di Gi Charat]

1 year 11 months ago

"The background has been done very nicely.
What vexes me is alterity between the scan and background.
For a background that's dark, a scan with a light colored girl standing in front of a window doesn't match.
Especially if there's a window there.
I advise you to change the scan, or vector it in a way so that it's equivalent to the background."
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take a look, need some other eyes

1 year 11 months ago

"The sky has gotten better, although I would have used more of a sunsetting sky for that type of character.
It would reduce the disparity between the scene and the girl.
Also as I had suggested before, brushing instead of filtering the stock photo you used would also give the wallpaper a better look. Then again, take my suggestion if you please."
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FLCL wall

1 year 11 months ago

"If you are creating this wall with a humorous intent then I suggest a background with a lighter feeling.
Aside from that it would also be useful to add shadows to Haruko.

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Burst Angel Wall

1 year 11 months ago

"You should really consider fixing your signature to your username.
Unless you call yourself "Angel Lizzy," it seems like the wall isn't made by you,
but by someone else.
Vectoring the character would also help.
The grainly texture placed upon her is also quite disturbing, but that is just my opinion.
The text placed on the background, "Burst angel joe" should either be ousted or
fixed so that it's more suitable for the background.
I could give more suggestions, but I'd like to see what else is left to advise in your wall.


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New wall

1 year 11 months ago

"The scan quality is below average.
For a vector wallpaper like that, everything needs to be vectored.
A brushed background and an extracted image aren't what usually recieve appraisal.
In conclusion, the scan needs to be fixed."
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Blood+ Vector: Kai

1 year 11 months ago

"It would be much more helpful to yourself if you thought of your own
ideas for a wall rather than depended on others to think of something for you.
Please, first gather your thoughts and create your wallpaper,
and then come around to recieve judgment."
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take a look, need some other eyes

1 year 11 months ago

"The last time I looked out my window I did not notice a region
with deeply saturated looking fields and an oddly blended sky.
The character seems fine, the filter you used for the landscape scan
should be taken away. Try brushing instead.
Also, you should set the sky in a specific color with different shades and contrasts,
rather than the blue yellow/orange and the sea green you have.
So far those are the only worriments I can see.

Good luck."
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One more try

1 year 11 months ago

"The text is quite bothersome for the first one.
If you were to take it out or apply it in a more logical area that would help.
If my eyes hadn't been aching to much I would contribute more critique.
But for now that's all I can suggest.


Good luck."
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first ever wall

1 year 11 months ago

"The vector of the image came out quite genially, and for a "first ever wall" that is
quite good. However I do suggest removing the outlines from your arrows, and adding
a few other shapes or patterns to make the background a little more complex.
It's just a suggestion; whether you accept it or not is your decision.

Good luck."
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How you learn/practice your english?

2 years 3 days ago

"You should watch a lot of TV.
It helps...a lot."
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After Dying...

2 years 3 days ago

"A tree.
Yesssssss.

Or a black bear so I could kill people in New Jersey. Because this place sucks.
Rawr.

Most likely a tree though."
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A Orihime wall iam working on.

2 years 3 days ago

"Wow,
first off, it's too plain anyways.
Try adding brushes or patterns first.
And then work on the character."
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Elfen Lied Wall.

2 years 3 days ago

"

Are you trying to make the wall plain or what? whats basically what you want abstract because most abstract use vectors but yah you dunt want it and right now you know those gray sparkley dust things i dunt think that rlly helps your concept. .. . .

Hm. Plain can be abstract. =/
Whatever, I'm fine with the background.
Thanks anyways, but from what I can see, you're trying to manipulate
the whole look of the wall. I'd like it simple thanyou very much. I'm
sorry it can't be your way and all brushy and patterny and stuff.
But if other people agree to add more stuff then I'll create an alternate
version with more stuff on it. Happy now?

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