Sephironoth

I liked the bg...but you can vector Shikamaru =b it will be better
But its very nice...

What those Example words mean? o.o

asa01

the character's rather grainy so work on that. and you also need to adjust the perspective because it's off as it is, creating a kinda funny look when you try to figure it all out. good job on the wood-y-ness of the wood though ^^ and un-blurring the bg a bit doesn't hurt, though i suppose it's up to you as to how blurred you want the bg to be.

now is the blood on a window through which you are seeing everything or is it on the floor? because it looks odd either way. and it's okay to not have the watermark-ish "examples" written across your wall. because that makes it easy to view the wall and not get distracted by the giant words. ^^; anyway, good job and good luck.

FrenchKirby

Aha ;) nice idea ;p

The wood texture is really good, but... it's the same on the floor and on the ceiling :S
and the floor is too much in the top of your wall, or maybe it's a table? if it's not, where does ure character walk? :p his legs are cut? :p
ther is lil prob of extraction on the nose :)

The wood of the wall in the background is really too blury :S ... in fact, everything is blurry :S
you should work on it :)


good luck !

infinityrulz

OMG! Beautiful! You made the wood texture and background by yourself?? It's impressive! That background is awesome! The character to the right needs some work though. It's grainy.