shakeyourlegson

I hate how things categorized as "indie rock" are almost always on major labels. Isn't that an oxymoron?

The wall looks great expect for the "Green" Raito.. so whats the big idea with it?

a major problem with this wallpaper is that everything is detached from one another. there is the bg, which you didn't really make because it's a crop of a death note calender scan (plus some texture overlay of sorts). there is the foreground image, which isn't perfectly extracted...and i actually recognize that the others don't seem to: that "green floating thing" is the blade of his scythe. except somehow you extracted out the middle that connects the staff Light is holding to the blade. =/ you'll have to go back and redo the extraction as you want to keep things intact. and the last element would be the text.

i don't see any interaction between bg, scan, and text. they are just there. everybody was telling that your wall is flat but it's not so much that as there isn't a strong sense of bonded connection between your elements. (why does this bg connect and reflect the foreground? how does the character fit into the bg and yet not "disappear" into it? is the text nicely visible yet not distracting? does the text summarize the idea behind the wall? asking yourself questions like these help.) sure the images are all from death note and the text is green, like your scan. but physically, nothing ties them together, thus giving that undesirable "cut and paste" feel. walling requires you to develop a sense of relation between everything, rather than just putting something there because "the paper needed something off to the left". everything must be in a wall for not only a compositional/balance reason, but also for a relevance/aesthetic reason.

no depth, the colors are pretty much dead

the picture on the left looks glued on, shouldn't be there, the cutout needs to be improved too

the text needs improving, that just comes down to your eye-for-design