Welcome to v5!

2 years 9 months ago

"Wow it looks awesome!! a little empty, but hell, it's beta version. Like the new text option buttons. layout seems a little crowded on the front page too...but hey, thanks very much!!"
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Advice Needed for Cactaur

2 years 10 months ago

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Any ideas on how I could improve this? "
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Spike Spiegel wall

2 years 10 months ago

"This is definitely ready for submission. Awesome concept with the vector, great texture, fantastic colors...awesome job!"
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Naruto Wallpaper 1024x768

2 years 10 months ago

"Eh link doesn't work...XD"
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Kingdom Hearts Wallpaper

2 years 10 months ago

"Lol, by flipping it, the text on the rock in the background image is backwards now. But it's easy cleanup. Just FYI. ^.^

The logo might be too much...Try it without, and see how it looks. You want space for icons too. Negative space, IF USED WELL, can make a wall look cooler. But I mean, if it looks too empty, by all means, keep the logo. =P

If you want to fill up that space between Sora and the background image...Keyblades? Behind big Sora, but in front of the curl texture thing in the background. I think that'll fill it up sufficiently. hmm and why the embossed name on the right? Barely noticed it at first...and it doesn't really add much. You can keep the name if you somehow integrate it with the logo...or just use the name to replace the logo altogehter.

heh i don't really do session zero anymore. But for you, ANYTHING.

^.^

good luck! i'll check this thread later. =P"
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Samurai Champloo wall

2 years 10 months ago

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critiques plz?"
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NGE vector

2 years 10 months ago

"Woah. that scan is awesome. The vector looks really nice too...the background's gonna be vectored right? er lol yeah it's not gonna fit the vector. You could try a cliff thing, staring out to sea kinda thing. I'm feeling empty space...

^.^"
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Kula Diamond second attempt

2 years 10 months ago

"So is the only difference the texture? I think the first one looks better...The texture on the background is nice, but the same texture on the characters may be a little excessive...you lose all the details of the textures. Also, the text...consider a blockier text...check out dafont.com and see if there's anything that might fit it better. one that comes to mind is a font called chocolate something...ehh check it out. "
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Shakugan no Shana Wall (Closed!)

2 years 10 months ago

"I think 30% fits the whole feel of the background better...where did you find that texture for the bg, btw? Did you make it? how??! LOVE the texture. GREAT job with that. The vectored bamboo looks really nice too...Frankly, I liked the asymmetry of your first version, with the empty space on the left. Maybe try moving the character (is it card captors? o.O) and the crane over to the left side, and seeing how that looks. Also, the reflection at the bottom...are they standing in water? Besides the reflection, there's nothing to indicate that. "
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need advise before submitting

2 years 10 months ago

"Lol no, nud's isn't talking about the background, he's talking about the stars on the pants...XD hahaa funny phrase. erm yeah. I think it's becuase you tried to not make a block of black? you could accomplish the same thing with just some cloudy fog like textures, withought having to do the stars...The text could be placed better, and in a better font. Also, the guy with the blue hair is sorta just there...he's not really integrated into the wall as the yellow-haired guy. Try some textures on top of the characters. "
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Samurai Girl Wallpaper

2 years 10 months ago

"No, but you could try searching in deviant art. They usually have any sort of brush you're looking for.

The reflection of the water on her dress is a nice effect, but it'd only be there if there was a really bright sun...as such, it looks like her dres is under water too...which then, sorta makes it confusing. you know? lol I know this may not be that clear...XD

lol yeah the lily pads...and gradient effect thing in the text is also REALLY distracting...takes alot away from the background of the wall. A smoother gradient, or even just a glow around solid text might work better, imo. "
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My First Vector EVER!

2 years 10 months ago

"Sorta, yeah. but you see how crisp and sharp the outline around his eyebrows are, compared to, say, his jacket? If the entire outline could be as crisp as that, it'd be really good.

That was a really fast reply too...o.O

=P"
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Wallpaper in the making...

2 years 10 months ago

"It looks pretty grim...but it's pretty vector too. I'd suggest probably a vector grunge background...a couple vector shapes, some grunge textures on top, a little bit of texture on top of the guy...text...lol I don't know the character, so can't help you out there. It's a nice vector though, great job. but umm yeah. retro grunge ftw. Also, consider having less of his head in the wall, since it's just a giant mass of gray. "
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New Year Wall preview~[Closed]

2 years 10 months ago

"Ohh kyute. Looks like some text would be nice though...not sure why, it just seems like it needs it. ALthough I can't find anywhere you would place it...eh, just a thought, try it out and see if it's legitimate. Vector looks good, background is nice...but yeah it needs a little something. meh. good job!"
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Calintz wallpaper...suggestions?

2 years 10 months ago

"The stock is unclear, and definitely needs to be cleaned up. If you don't know where, just look at her fingers on the left side, and the crazy color gradiations on her leg. Definitely needs to be cleaned up. The moon in the background looks kinda wierd, see if you can't replace that with anything else...or just try blending it into the background more. The only texture you have on the wall is the glow thing around her, and a couple cloud things...try expanding that in the background and maybe less of it around her. "
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First Wallie [need some feedback]

2 years 10 months ago

"See if you can blend the stock image into the background a little more...maybe put some grunge on top of her or something, so she looks more like part of the wall than so far apart from it. About the emptiness...i think it's good. If you put too much stuff there, I'm afraid it might look too busy. You could try some textures...maybe some text. Don't overdo it though, too much and it'll look too crowded. "
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My First Vector EVER!

2 years 10 months ago

"Is it just me or do the lines look really thick? Everything looks really nice except for the lines...maybe try doing the outlines at the higher res, so when scaled back down, they look cleaner? But yeah, everything looks nice except for the outlines. Nice job with your first vector!"
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[Melancholy of Suzumiya Haruhi] 2 version/crit please!

2 years 11 months ago

"So you think without the black castle thing'd be better? just the rays? "
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[Melancholy of Suzumiya Haruhi] 2 version/crit please!

2 years 11 months ago

"Okay so it got rejected...but i don't know what to add. Any suggestions? "
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[Melancholy of Suzumiya Haruhi] 2 version/crit please!

2 years 11 months ago

"Uhh...thanks...^.^"
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