Need help on wall

2 years 11 months ago

"Oh yeah sorry about that. I always make the assumption that walls like this are made in photoshop...which is obviously not the case. sorry. XD

Anyways, yeah, that's what I meant. I totally get what you're going for...the dots could totally work, the white bars, maybe not so much...hmm I don't know if this will work, but can you try layering a duplicate of the background below the character, and then rotating it a bit, to give it a sense of vertigo and crazy near-death ness? try it out, see how it looks. It may render any other random texture unnecessary....^.^"
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[Melancholy of Suzumiya Haruhi] 2 version/crit please!

2 years 11 months ago

"Yeah, i know what you mean...*sigh* oh well. Besides the scan though...how's everything else?

A meeting? In those poses? XD haha"
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Need help on wall

2 years 11 months ago

"It looks REALLY REALLY good. Asides from some possibly dodging of the hair, I really don't know what to suggest. The character seems really contrasted and dark compared to everything else, which I suppose is the point, but it makes all the colors blend together into one dark mass. Nonetheless, this is amazing. Great texture in the background, awesome concept, great execution. Nice job!"
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Need Help with Wall

2 years 11 months ago

"Rukia herself is also too pixellated...did you take it directly from the manga? It's way too pixelly...it's simple enough that you should be able to vector it too. Thebackground, as a pure, bright yellow is kinda wierd...consider a dragon or something in the background. The yellow really is too bright...and it's probably too simple to pass. Good luck. "
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[Melancholy of Suzumiya Haruhi] 2 version/crit please!

2 years 11 months ago

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crit please! Also, I can't decide which version I like more. The only difference is the gradient overlain. I'm sort of leaning towards the one sans gradient...but eh. *shrug* advice? "
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Uma and Liru wallpaper (Magical Pokaan)

3 years 2 days ago

"Lol definitely best version...lol the leaves seem more like they're spazzing than flying through the wind. Are the clouds...from a photograph? Doesn't really fit with the whole mangaka thing the vector has... o.O Nice vectoring...you don't have to keep the eyebrows, btw...feel free to get rid of them. XD umm yeah good luck. "
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Eureka 7 concept

3 years 2 days ago

"LOl at the pattern in the waves. XD haha really nice concept though. Renton's definitely got too much blue...mess with the levels for him. But other than that, it looks really good. nice job!"
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Oban Star Racers wall

3 years 2 days ago

"You can upload it on imageshack so it keep sthe resolution...

It's nice, but the difference in contrast between the character and the background is too similar...you think you could up the contrast in the background, maybe? If you could add some effects...it might be too simple a concept to get accepted in the gallery...i mean, after all, you just overlayed a character screenshot on another. "
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my first try with wallpapers >__<

3 years 2 days ago

"Very simply...and lol at the text. the font definitely needs to be fixed. The pictures are good except for the top one, which seems way too low res compared to everything else. If you could find someway to spice up the left side, it'd be better. Right now, the focus is kinda lost between the large, monotone picture, and the smaller, bright pics on the right. Find some way to incorporate the pictures on the left into the background better. "
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tamber by SN4X (not compleat just asking a few questions)

3 years 2 days ago

"Woah. Is that a flat horizon line? Also...it's really small, so I can't be sure, but from what I can see, the characters have extraction issues. There's a faint white bordering both characters...definitely should check that out. and lool the clouds look silly. sorry. but they do. XD Texture needed on the grass, clean up needed on the characters. See if you can't make the characters interact more with the bg more...RIght now, they're not even casting shadows on the grass. But yeah...umm see if you can't make them interact more together. Sky needs more texture too...try random effects and blending them to see what they give you. good luck. ^.^"
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Bamboo Resort

3 years 2 days ago

"The wood grain texture def needs some work. If it's a counter, you can definitely add texture and shadows on it to make it less like that. Also, decide on a place for the light to be coming in. It's shining on the left side of her face, so the shadows on the vase and everything should correspond. Also, about the vase...is it a painting or an actual vase? Cuz the flower in it looks like a painting...also the shadows don't match the light on her face. Is the bamboo thing a screen? The brown could definitely use some texture instead of being just a flat brown. But yeah...fix the counter wood and the screen and the light. "
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lOVELY kABUki

3 years 2 days ago

"Really nice glow overall. The text definitely needs some work though...doesn't really flow with the rest of the wall. Consider some random effects, like an outer glow or gradient inside the text...maybe a different font too. Check out dafont.com. The hair doesn't look that clear too...Everything is kinda blurry cuz of the glow, but the hair is REALLY blurry...as if you did a median filter on it for too much or something. The background is nice, although the hearts thing...is that a brush? Vary it up a little so it doesn't look so over-repeated. But yeah, nice job!"
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Carnelian wallpaper

3 years 2 days ago

"Looks really nice...it'd be nice if the character were higher contrast compared to the background so she stands out more...but other than that, it looks really good. Nice job with the texture in the background and everything. ^.^"
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GSD - Meer Campbell and Gilbert Dullindal

3 years 2 days ago

"Wow. Hella grunge/abstract/fractal madness. There's so much going on...and yet, there's not enough. The characters shouldn't be the same color as the background since the focus becomes totally not on them but on the rest of the wall. Can the characters be some other color? Also, try to think of some way of making the background more engaging...i.e. if you look in the gallery, there's almost no wallpapers that are simply characters on a abrushed background. Try to integrate your characters in the wall more. That said, nice extraction...a little fuzziness around the legs, but nothing major. "
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Basilisk Wallpaper

3 years 2 days ago

"Is the top his hair or a mountain? Definitely too much black...try spicing it up with more colors. Don't be afriad to experiment with random colors, like blue and green. The cross is a nice touch, but I don't know if it belongs in the midle of his face...at first glance, I thought it was a horribly misshapen nose. Also, upload it onto imageshack, not photobucket. That way, it's not so small. The moon in the corner is also really random...it doesn't seem to add anything to the wall at all, so I wouldn't recommend keeping it. Since the eyes are so integral to the wall, I'd suggest making them the focus of the wall, and not the cross. The eyes are scary as hell, and all the stuff in the background take away from the scariness. "
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Death Note. Simple

3 years 2 days ago

"Nice vectoring, but the shadows on his shirt look WAY too ripply to actually be shadows...It looks more like a bad acid trip than shadows on a shirt. Extraction definitely better, although there's still stuff next to his hand where it looks fuzzy...The text for "L" doesn't really add much to the wall...and in a sense, it's not even necessary. If you want to keep it there, you can get rid of the wierd white stripe in the background and replace it with the L, but as of now, the "L" doesn't do anything for the wall. "
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Please check out my background and give it to me straight...

3 years 2 days ago

"Don't mean to sound mean...but is that it? Is there gonna be something in the foreground at all? Or is it just the sun on a hill with a flag? Seems really really sparse, imo...lool but yeah seriously, try to make it more interesting...The colors are too bright for a wall with nothing there. "
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Naru Nanao wall....

3 years 2 days ago

"Lol hawt. Did you vector it? Cuz it doesn't look as clean as everything else. The fact that the floor, the wall, and everything are all vectored makes the things that aren't vectored really stand out. As for the random cutting issues...top of her head is the only place i can see it. It's wierd, and I can't quite place my finger on it, but the scan and the background don't really work together as well as it should...I'm not sure why, or how to fix it, but just keep that in mind. The pillow on the left is really wierd too...what's up with the shape? I mean, the right pillow looks fine, but the left pillow is really wierd. Also, at the corner of the wall, towards the bottom, theere's a wierd brushing thing going on..."
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new walll, need help

3 years 2 days ago

"You can barely see the characters. While it may be argued that it's artistic, the fact that they blend into the background almost seamlessly isn't. The way the white thing is cut off so abruptly detracts alot from the wallpaper, and the random pink dots are really confusing...what are they? flowers that got the contrast upped too much? On the same note, it's way too high contrast. You definitely need to rework this. Make it easier to tell where/what everything is, and to make it less bright. Also, if you could somehow integrate the text into the wall better, it'd work alot better too. Good luck. "
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Loveless - Kio Wall

3 years 2 days ago

"Nice vectoring. ^.^ That said, there's a couple places that could be smoothed out, i.e. the top of the hair, the neko ears, etc. The sheer number of retro circles you managed to fit on it is mind-boggling...you think you can have fewer, bigger circles? The number you have is ridiculous, to be frank. The definitions on her apron is wierd too...I'll assume it has something to do with whatever series it's from. If you couuld make it go along the same direction as the apron though, it'd be alot better. The multiple shadows is nice, althought it'd be nice if it showed up on the black part above the head too. That said, nice vectoring. Just a little tweaking is all that's needed. ^.^"
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Naruto Wall

3 years 2 days ago

"You think you could upload it onto imageshack or something? It's really small...

What's with the mottled look on Naruto? It could be shadows, except there's nothing to give it a shadow. Also, be careful when using fan art, even if it's just someone else coloring it...make sure you ask for their permission before using it. The grass lacks depth and texture. I can see sorta the texture you tried to give it, and I applaud it, however, don't forget to play with the highlights and the shadows the grass is bound to have. The concept is sorta wierd too...Gaara and Naruto chilling in a field? lol whatever. Nice clouds, but the wierd ripply like stuff in the sky is really wierd..."
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Revised Hellish Beauty.

3 years 4 weeks ago

"Did you seriously just copy/paste my post??"
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beautiful girl part 2!

3 years 4 weeks ago

"First or second. The second's really bright. It's wierd, since the background gives a nice texture, and you can sorta tell you used a snowflake brush for it...Eh I like it. The texture is nice. Nice job!"
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Bleach - Bounto, Kariya and Yoshino Wallpaper

3 years 4 weeks ago

"Ooo very nice. I'd suggest some more dramatic lighting...try playing around with the extract filter thing. There's some extraction problems around Kariya too, especially around the hands. Love the hazy smoke though. Great concept. ^.^"
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