Hai~!!

1 year 11 months ago

"You need some way to differentiate the photos from each other...either by adding shadows, or strokes, or something. Some of the pictures look a little lq, a little grainy, especially the one on the bottom. The text looks kinda...meh. You can definitely find better fonts on dafont.com...that'll look more like handwriting. Cuz I mean, no one's handwriting actually LOOKS like that. ^.^ The background is definitely too plain...a couple shapes on a gradient is really meeeeh. "
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Wallpaper

1 year 11 months ago

"It's REALLY small...could you upload a bigger version? The texture on the background looks really nice, but like lau said, the cutting aroudn the wings is really jagged...the stock looks pretty low quality too. Should probably try to clean it up a bit...You could probably find a more fitting font for the text too...the font right now is sorta frivolous...not really matching with the aura of the bg. "
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Need Help~!!!

1 year 11 months ago

"Loool that's cute. Don't forget your signature. The stock looks like it MAY be blurry...can you upload a bigger version? Is it vectored?? Also..that's alot of yellow. And I guess there's not much you can do about it...It's almost searing in its brightness though...i.e., it's REALLY bright. XD haha oh well. nice job!"
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Naruto Wall

1 year 11 months ago

"Much better than the original...much more interesting background. Is there some way to get rid of their names and come up with a title for the wall across the whole thing? Like Team whatever number team they are: InoShikaChou. Or something. The stock itself seems really saturated too...The background is nice, although you should probably find some way to integrate the photo idea into the background so it looks like actual photos, not just something plastered on a wood bg. Nice job so far though!!"
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Cowboy Funk...whats wrong with it???

1 year 11 months ago

"Ooo nice concept. The background idea is especially nice...but it's really pixellated and blurry. Also, it looks a little plixellated around Spike's hair...it's pretty nice to be vectored though...I know it's a lot of work to be demanded, but if you want this to look as clean as it can, then you should probably vector everything. It's a crapload of work i know, but for it to look really good...good luck mate!"
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Urahara Wall - Updated with Text

2 years 2 days ago

"Wow. I really like it. Love the texture. The texture's frickin amazing.

I agree about the text. Although if you DO...don't make it too big. The lower left is already so busy that the assymetry might be a good thing. eh see for yourself. ^.^

Urahara's coat seems really really black though...try putting some texture or light brushing on top of it to make it less a block of black. Nice job!"
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a wallpaper

2 years 2 days ago

"Deviantart.com

Is the concept her coming out of the mirror?? Maybe make the mirror bigger so it's clearer...and yeah, the bg looks really plain. You should try putting some more texture on it. Find some way to bring the focus to the girl more...maybe by adding lighting or something. "
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Suzumiya Haruhi -

2 years 2 days ago

"Well lol, since you haven't put on textures/shadings/highlights yet, it's kinda hard tocomment...Haruhih already looks a little dark...Also, that tree on the far right is DEFINITELY not vectored. Are you planning to do something with it? lol not saying it looks bad, just sorta wierd how some things have a bit of texture/pixellation and other don't. Awesome vector work though. I'm jealous of your eyes...=____= I wish I could vector eyes. XXD Oh, are you gonna put an outline around Haruhi's pants?? "
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My First Wall, Ideas and Critiques Wanted

2 years 2 days ago

"Probably masive grunge...consider duplicating the stock and smudging it, and blending it to get more splashes of colors. Grunge vector might work also, but for what you've established here, grunge seems to be the way to go. ^.^"
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Kingdom Hearts Sora menu

2 years 2 days ago

"I like the concept...but first I'll answer your questions.

If you use photoshop, a softer brush are the brushes that aren't as hard around the edges as the default brushes. If you scroll down in Basic Brushes, you should see them. I don't think the problem is that it's nice and clean--it's that the complexity of the stock and every other element basically makes us think that the bg is going to be similarly complex...but it's not. XD

You don't have to find other images, you could easily clean up the logo by a) vectoring or b) smudging/blurring stuff. Also, the New Game stuff looks a bit pixellated...you could probably just type that out. XD Nice concept though. "
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Looking for Suggestions and Opinions

2 years 2 days ago

"Lol yeah where does the scan end and where does your work begin?? o.O There's random outlines around her legs...and it seems like the left side is alot blurrier/pixelly than the right side. huh? o.o But yeah, consider making her smaller, since she's so frickin huge. XD"
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My First Wall, Ideas and Critiques Wanted

2 years 2 days ago

"Extraction=cutting out of image from whatever background it was in previously. i.e. there shouldn't be any jagged lines, and it should look like the image was originally part of YOUR background, and not shoddily taken from somewhere else. And it's REALY pixellated towards the bottom of the cosplayer. Consider cleaning that up. There's tutorials about cleaning up images so you shouldn't have a problem with that. Background looks a little plain too. Consider adding splashes of color or more grunge brushes.

I don't know if there's a place to submit walls of cosplayers...cuz I haven't seen any walls of cosplayers at all. o.O"
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wish on a star

2 years 2 days ago

"WAAAAY too many stars. Look into the sky and see if you see that many stars. If you do, you need to get out of the building. Ditto what panda said about the water horizon line. The texture on the water is nice though. See if you can't apply a similar texture on the grass, since it looks a little plain right now. And why is the foreground grass white?? Extraction around the hair/nose needs to be worked on. "
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GOOD? GREAT? AWESOMEEEE?

2 years 2 days ago

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muffinator

Haha, just kidding, it's horrible
I'm working on this wallpaper..

haha with that strikeout, it reads "I'm on this wallpaper." Which doesn't make much sense. XXDDDD

Her hair looks wierd cut out like that...how it's all smooth and everything...while the rest of her is totally grunged up and whatnot. It'd be nice if the tree silouhette wasn't completely black too, so you could give it a bit of texture. It's a nice concept though. I think a litle bit of text would be good...something serif-y or slight script..Nice job!"
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Angel

2 years 2 days ago

"The signature should probably be your screen name on AP...lol that's what they mean. XD

The bg looks very nice...Although it's wierd how the entire bg is textured, but the girl in front isn't. So I'd suggest either making her textured a bit, or making the bg cleaner. Yeah the text is definitely wierd. I think it's mostly how you have it bolded. Try making clouds in the sky and incorporating the text into the clouds. Random suggestion. I don't know if it'd actually work. XD But yeah, it looks good! um...there's also this random brown spot on the tree...what is it? XXD "
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Devil May Cry Collaborative WP

2 years 2 days ago

"I wouldn't say it's read for submission. What's with all the red? It makes nothing in the wall stand out at all. And could you plleeeeasseee just upload it and post a link/thumbnail, instead of the whole thing? =____=

The quality of the images used are sorta iffy...Similarly, while the sense of depth is good, there's very little texture on the actual "ground." There's no shadows or anything either, so it just looks like they're floating there. But hey, at least you have a horizon line. But yeah, there's some cutting issues around some of the Dante's, and they definitely need to be of a higher quality. "
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Neko Girl Wallpaper - Pink

2 years 2 days ago

"I think what he's referring to is the quality of the drawing itself. The vectoring is nice, but take a look around the gallery--it's a little sub par. Sorry, I wish there was a nicer way of saying it. XD

That said, the bg looks a little plain. Considering how you totally vectored the image, try vectoring a background too. It'd make the image blend more into the bg. The text...is sorta wierd...once you change the background, see what else would work better.

And no, if your submission gets denied, they don't tell you why. They tell you to bring it into SZ and havs us tell you why. XD"
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need help onepiece walls

2 years 2 days ago

"Probably the second one...Although hmm...The stroke around her doesn't work, in terms of blending her into the bg. The quality of the scan isn't bad, but the background is so plain and repetitive that it sorta gets boring. If you could find some way to spice up the bg a bit, it'd be alot better. Also, the text needs work...find some way to incorporate it INTO the bg instead of on top of it. The rain needs more texture. Go onto Deviantart and search for rain tutorials to make the rain look more realistic. I'd also suggest some sort of haze towards the bottom, just for texture. good luck!"
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A3...

2 years 2 days ago

"Oh lol i thought it was just me. XXDD"
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Angel

2 years 6 days ago

"Hmm wow that looks pretty nice. The line running across the entire wall looks kinda wierd...would there be any better way to distinguish the two seasons from each other? It's a really nice concept...annnd don't forget your sig. ^.^ "
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[Bleach] Hitsugaya Wall

2 years 6 days ago

"Ah...2400 is frickin huge. my photoshop is already freezing like mad on me. XD haha ah good idea...thanks for the advice!! "
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[Bleach] Hitsugaya Wall

2 years 1 week ago

"Hmm thanks for the comments guys.

I have a question...when vectoring in Photoshop, and you're tracing lineart...I'm stroking the paths to get the outline, but it comes out sorta jagged...is there any way to make the lines smoother??

*sigh*

like...around his forehead...his hair line is pissing me off, since it makes the whole thing look lq. =___=

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V for Vendetta wallpaper(vector style)

2 years 1 week ago

"The texture and everything is awesome...but you know that you can't submit here, right?? you know, being ANIMEpaper.net...XD

doesn't make this wall any less awesome though. Great texture...awesome vectoring. ^.^"
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