fayt-star ocean need help & advice ☻-updated

3 years 2 months ago

"The one without texture looks alot nicer...mainly because you can actually see the character. In the one with texture, there's way too much stuff over it to determine where your focus us. In the one without texture, it's nice in that the character is clear and in focus. I'd suggest making it a little bigger, but other than that, nice job combining all those pics. ^.^"
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[Bleach] Hitsugaya Wall

3 years 2 months ago

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Alright, so I reduced that contrast a bit...added a little reddish tinge to everything, to tone down the blue. Sharpened it a bit, snce the grunge was getting blurry. which was wierd...o.O"
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Let's Protect the World Together

3 years 2 months ago

"I prefer the first one. The second one, with the moon, looks really wierd. That's an issue in the second one too...everything is all anime and cel shaded, and then you have really reaslitic moon/stars. I'd suggest duplicating it, blurring it, and somehow blending that. The soft focus on the grass is nice, but it looks like you just used the grass brush. Lighting's wierd too, how the side opposite the moon is really bright. XXDD"
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[Bleach] Hitsugaya Wall

3 years 2 months ago

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whooo FINALLY found a color that works. XD

sooo I tried fixing up the grunge and the wierd gray spots in the corner...C&C?

@asa: how do you vector eyes and facial features?? cuz you know, one crooked thing and it looks totally wierd...XXD"
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Fma wall redo

3 years 2 months ago

"It's wierd how the vector of Ed is jagged...is it really a vector?? o.O The font for "Rewrite" is waaaay too curly... you can barely read it. Definitely find something less scripty. The star things are kinda random too...like, they don't really match the rest of the wall, OR the concept of "rewrite." It's way better than the first one you had though. XD"
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Help 1st wallpaper ichigo bleach

3 years 2 months ago

"Umm yup, your sig doesn't match...the quality of Ichigo and of Rukia's drawing is pretty low quality too. I'd suggest vectoring it, since it shouldn't be that hard. The drop shadow you put in the thought bubbles don't really work either, since your wall's not one of those clean and simple ones. So I'd suggest some texture, or instead of doing ellipses, maybe bubbles or something. Also, an outline around "Baka" would be good too. ^.^"
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berserk wall

3 years 2 months ago

"The background is kinda wierd...looks like a picture you took and made red. Not liking how the whole thing is so red and whatnot...try putting some other colors on there. Also, the grass looks REALLY untextured, compared to the background or the character himself. Should probably apply some texture over the grass to make it look more realistic. And since it looks like the sky is totally red...why is the grass still green? eh...change the background. XD"
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Final Fantasy Wallpaper

3 years 2 months ago

"Lol that's a GOOD thing. ^.^

Your walla is nice, but it's really simplistic...there's not much texture or use of other colors in your wall. You should try mixing in some red/orange since it matches the hair. Also, try to have some way to bring your eye TO the main character, like brushing stuff that LEADS your eye to her. =P"
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Wallpaper.. is it of quality?

3 years 2 months ago

"Wooow that is really pretty good. ^.^

if you make the signature a little smaller...haha eh really minor detail. haha looks awesome! love the texture and the flow. =P"
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[Bleach] Hitsugaya Wall

3 years 2 months ago

"Yeah this is the first time i've posted it. ^^;;

ah see those vector issues. thanks. =P

and lol i edited the first post while you were posting that...made the red text less scripty, fixed the outline around his hair...umm but "texture thingy" you mean...the grunge brushing? Also not quite sure what you mean by "it's overly...obvious as to what it might have originally looked like." Is that a bad thing? lol could you maybe clarify that??

XP"
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[Bleach] Hitsugaya Wall

3 years 2 months ago

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The red text, I liked since it broke the monochrominity of the wall, and gave it a bit of red...don't know if I should complement that with red splatters or something, since it kinda looks wierd too...comments/critiques? "
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fruits basket again ^_^

3 years 2 months ago

"Lol i thought your sig was actually text pertinent to the content of the wall. XXDD The texture in the bg is nice, but the texture on top of their faces doesn't look as good, should probably be minimized, so that their faces stand out more. Lens flare doesn't really work...lighting effect is good though, so consider just brushing over with white and blending it. Butterflies is good, but the border is kinda wierd. Especially the right side. consider making the border smaller...nothing wrong with white space. =P"
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Gundam Seed Destiny wallpaper

3 years 2 months ago

"Haha awww cute!! Yeah I agree about the font...just something less blocky would work...not a script font, probably though. ^.^

uhhmmm the top most cloud looks really angular compared to the other ones...character should be a little bigger so you get more focus to her...other than that, it's great. Nice job!"
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Saber Fate/Stay Night

3 years 2 months ago

"Wait what do you mean by "sink back into the wallpaper"?? Like...a bevel/emboss? I think that's what you're talking about...just play around with a bunch of text effects.

Saber needs to be cleaned up alot...she's very blurry/pixelly right now. Use those tutorials in the Vectorness group. It'd be alot more awesome if you could find someway to incorporate the two border elements into the screenshot of Saber...and lol yeah definitely clean up Saber first. XD "
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ichigo mashimaro

3 years 2 months ago

"Heeh VEERRY cute. ^.^ Vector's very clean, very simple and nice...the clouds loook really good, awesome text. Only thing i'd suggest is probably a thin stroke around the flying petals so they don't all blend into each other. But other than that, it's a VERY nice wall. ^.^"
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FMA wall

3 years 2 months ago

"Imageshack is good for hosting photos. That version you uploaded seems kinda small...resized?

Is that a guitar, a bird, and a butterflies' silouhettes? Really random...The lyrics in the background are nice, but them being so big makes it hard to differentiate Ed and the rest of the bg. Usually, long texts aren't good for text, unless they're purely decorative, but that'd involve formatting it. Should probably put the text behind Ed anyways. Umm yeah, so the silouhette is really wierd. Should probably find some other stuff to silouhette. XD"
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Gungrave wallpaper

3 years 2 months ago

"Don't really understand the flying glass...or the really bright part above the gun. I would've guessed that was part of the broken glass, but nothing else matches it...The background is also sorta simple and repetitive...should probably find someway to spice it up a bit with some variety. Vector looks good, the grunge on the blood is really wierd. Don't really understand where the blood's coming from either...XD haha eh "
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Kyo Wallpaper

3 years 2 months ago

"The texture of the purple bg is nice, but the cross-hatching in the blue bubbles looks really wierd, since there's no parallel anywhere else. The retro circles at either corner look good, but there needs to be some sort of focus, since the cat doesn't really stand out as much as the line of circles or the circles. So I'd suggest either making it bigger, or somehow rearranging the circles to converge on the cat. ^.^"
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Mistakes

3 years 2 months ago

"No, Zazou is saying that you should make your sig LESS hidden...

Both scans on the right and left need to be cleaned up...the one on the left needs to be extracted better, definitely. Same for the big one in the background. I think three stocks may be too much too...and if you DO use three, should have them all be similar brithnesses...like the one on the right is really gray...>.<

The background's really nice though. If you cleaned up those scans, it should look pretty nice. "
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Final Fantasy X-2 Paine

3 years 2 months ago

"Do you use photoshop? If you do, just go into Image>>Adjustments>>Hue/Saturation and just play with the Saturation slider.

It might, or might not work...lol I'll leave that to your own judgment, since you kinda know what you want and pretty much know what you're doing...^.^

Hm...iono...lol they both have their merits...it's hard to pick one. The white one is really clean and simpler...butit makes the puzzle pieces look really random...the gray background fits with the puzzle pieces better, but it makes it look kinda wierd...since gray's the most neutral color ever...

I'd suggest the white one, and then rotating the picture of Paine so that in the puzzle pieces, she's slightly rotated, so that it's not oriented the same way as the other Paine. I think...=____=

I don't know what I'm saying. Just ignore me. >.<

hahaha"
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Vectoring problems again....

3 years 2 months ago

"Haha yeah that's fine! ^.^

May want to center his name more...also, I'd suggest blurring his picture more, since right now, it seems to be hovering between sort of in focus, and sort of blurry...Also, the text goes from charp and crisp to really blurry...Why is that? What was wrong with having it all sharp/blurry? "
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Help please?

3 years 2 months ago

"Histugaya needs to be cleaned up...there's like, splotches of red on his outfit, and there are random extraction issues around him...it's an interesting tech concept, but the left ide looks kinda empty. You could argue function over form, but I think there's a way to eliminate all that empty space while still preserving it's function. Maybe by expanding the square thing, and having the brushing less concentrated as it gets towards the left. The tech background is nice though. "
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Fantasy fanatic only...

3 years 2 months ago

"13 hours ago....

I think you forgot to link it. "
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Advent Children wallpaper

3 years 2 months ago

"http://www.tutorialized.com/tutorial/Twirls-Light/10164

And just make it not as bright. ^.^

The concept's nice, but if there were someway you could make the emblem smaller, and so that it doesn't overlap his goggles, I think it'd make it alot better...cuz right now, it makes his eyes look really wierd, with that think overlapping it...nice job though! don't forget your sig. =P"
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