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Black and white at it's best with a dash of red to keep things interesting.
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°Bernouli
46 minutes ago
Go get some candy to suck on, swordy. It helps me when my throat hurts, if it's any consellation =)
`swordfish-II
1 hour ago
My throught is killing me damm it >.>
~LenasLover
1 hour 6 minutes ago
Yeah..
$Crunchbite
1 hour 9 minutes ago
D: I would hate to live somewhere with tornados. Crawl spaces are awesome if you are a kid :3
~LenasLover
1 hour 11 minutes ago
Hmm.. not sure. The house doesn't have one. Just crawl space. Great since we have tornados frequuently. lol..
$Crunchbite
1 hour 12 minutes ago
XD why not?
~LenasLover
1 hour 14 minutes ago
I have no basement.
°Bernouli
1 hour 21 minutes ago
Ah, there's too much crap in ours to do anything like that.
$Crunchbite
1 hour 25 minutes ago
Ive been here for a while... We just finished the basement last year so i claimed it for now.
°Bernouli
1 hour 28 minutes ago
Hurro
Fate Stay Night
3 months 3 weeks ago
"Hmmmm, the wallpaper is good now, although I think the vectored saber still stands out too much when compared to the background (too much clarity difference probably, happens to vectors often). You might just want to blur her a little.Another small thing about the vector is some white wool lining of her cape looks a little too sharp."
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First Vector (Needing Critiques)
3 months 3 weeks ago
"First off, it's a pretty well done vector. Besides what Danalm has pointed out, below are a little nitpicks that I find. Just ignore them if you wish :)I assume you use the vector shape layer method to do it, since there's much varying thickness and sharp edges in the vector. It's just a good practice to remember while having varying thickness makes a picture look good, there needs to be some sort of consistency with the thickness as well, that is the thickness shouldn't vary by too much. The more noticeable case that I find are the thickness of the outlines of her hair. Some are really thick (top hair part) and some are so thin you can barely see it (bottom most hair part). Same applies for her clothes as well. Some are very thick when compared to others.
More about the hair. As a whole, it looks fine. But I think the circular part of her hair (especially the bottom right and left part (our perspective) of the circular hair) might need more outlines. Take the second left most strand (part of the circular hair) for example. There's like a hole in the hair, the hole's fine but it looks weird without any outlines going to and from the hole. Same for the bottom right circular hair, where another small bunch-strand of hair split from away from the main circle.
You might just wanna add some outlines to show how it joins/split.
I see that you like using gradient colours :D Not a bad thing, I use quite a bit myself, but just make sure you don't overuse too much, cuz they tend give a 3d feel, which might be a good thing depending your intention. The shadows on her clothes, in my very humble opinion, has a wee bit much gradient on, but that's just my purely my view.
And lastly, I think since you've gone through all the effort to vector it, just make a background for it. This way you can get more reviews and appreciations :)"
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First Vector (Needing Critiques)
4 months 2 days ago
"No higher resolution? It'd be easier to see if you can upload higher than 1024x768..."View
Need help!! Is this acceptable? AR Tonelico Wallpapers
4 months 2 days ago
"As a fan of Ar Tonelico, I think it'd be better to pick a better image =/"View
What do you guys think?
4 months 1 week ago
"The clouds are alright, but I find the moon thing behind... too stiff and out of place. Probably just me."View
Handmade Wallpaper...
4 months 1 week ago
"You said handmade, and by looking at the picture, I take it that you used physical pencils and stuff to sketch/colour the image."View