paper stars origami

4 years 2 weeks ago

"Those braided things look really nice, do you have a wire inside them to keep their shape? I myself play with ribbons sometimes, you can make a neat looking rose out of appropriately coloured ribbons. And who doesn't love a guy who sews! Hahahaha, you rock, eso!"
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paper stars origami

4 years 2 weeks ago

"Show us those pics eso! I had no idea you were a handycrafts kinda guy XD"
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Trying to make a come back..

4 years 1 month ago

"Maybe cut out a tilted rectangle and fill in the outside with black, maybe add line corner edges and a center viewfinder cross and circle would suggest a camera's pov through the viewfinder?"
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FMP! TSR Wall.

4 years 1 month ago

"I suggest that you use another texture that is not so grainy on the character, or lose the texture on the character altogether. Also maybe you could move the character to the center? Unless there is something hidden in the shadows to balance the character on the left?"
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Screencaps

4 years 1 month ago

"If you mean how to screencap, the question has already been answered in this thread
http://www.animepaper.net/forum/posts.php?tid=6049

Tris, I keep seeing this question being asked again and again, maybe you could add it to the sticky first stop?"
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Mao Zedong

4 years 1 month ago

"If you wish to let others know about Mao Zedong, a much better way would be to do a short summary (not too long), and maybe link to some websites with some commentary about what they contain and is worth looking at. To initiate discussion, perhaps you could also state some of your own opinions and perhaps pose some open questions. Simply cutting and pasting a series of quotes and extracts without any commentary doesn't promote interaction, which is what the forum is all about. "
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Tokko Wallpaper WiP

4 years 1 month ago

"Looking good! Only thing is the font? Maybe lighten the background behind the font so you can see it better?"
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Tokko Wallpaper WiP

4 years 1 month ago

"I think it may be better to have the rain all in one direction? Right now it looks like it's falling in two directions... "
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Tokko Wallpaper WiP

4 years 1 month ago

"There's a good rain tutorial here. As for making her wet, how about cutting out some of her hair so it looks flatter and stuck to her head?"
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Aria

4 years 1 month ago

"I've wanted to get my hands on it ever since I read this review. Since it compared it to Yokohama shopping log which is another weird but strangely compelling manga I like, I've been looking around for Aria. Apparently, Aria is a sequel to Aqua, another manga. Anyone has any information about Aqua? "
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Has anyone heard of this anime ?

4 years 1 month ago

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It seems to be some kind of weird

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amalgam involving clones, a strange phenomenon that disables electronics, psychic powers, and a conspiracy. I for one was not amused with the "I'm pregnant with a strange baby of unknown origin" which is going to cause me to go into a cocoon and will probably eat me from inside out. @.@ What did amuse me was the use of physics terms (or at least an attempt to) when the characters tried to talk scientific-speak. Otherwise, in my personal opinion this seems to be a bad bad mesh of some good ideas. "
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First ever made

4 years 1 month ago

"I suggest that you create a background to fill the white space, perhaps some pattern or scenery? As far as the font goes, I prefer the smaller version. "
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FMA wall - graf

4 years 1 month ago

"

I think the glowing symbol clashes quite badly with the sporty styled character. May I suggest you convert the symbol into graffitti-style? Dripping spray paint style?.

That's what I was going for originally, but it looked kinda naff.

o.O; Hmm... if you go for grafitti styled text instead? And give up the symbol? There are lots of nice graffiti styled backgrounds at thespook at deviantart like this."
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my 1st WP what you think?

4 years 1 month ago

"I personally think there are too many repeated characters, Kakashi and Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke are shown twice, and Kakashi in the same side view. I recommend removing the central three characters and the Kakashi above it, and just leaving the two teams and their mentors on the side. To fill in the space in the middle, how about some yin-yang symbol or something similar? "
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FMA wall - graf

4 years 1 month ago

"I think the glowing symbol clashes quite badly with the sporty styled character. May I suggest you convert the symbol into graffitti-style? Dripping spray paint style? Maybe make it bigger and move it to the center, then the character placed in the center. I think that would suit the style of the scan better. There is also a nice symbol that Dioma used in her Lust wall here.
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Help making pillars

4 years 2 months ago

"If you have CS2, I suggest using transform->warp on a texture to get that curved effect. There was a thread on Rays of light not too long ago in here, maybe the lighting tips in there will be useful. Note that if your pillars are shiny or metallic they will have reflections in them. Also don't forget that your pillars will cast shadows depending on your light source. "
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Nana wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"I'll vote for #1 too, maybe with Nana's skin tone a little less bluish though. Elegant scriptlike text would look nice. Positioning is fine. "
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Utena wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"From what I can see, I would say it's too empty ><; Personally I think centering the charecters, and placing them in a flower field of pink, beige and purple flowers would look nice. Maybe some translucent patterned/embroidered fabric flying across would look nice."
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Hana Yori Dango

4 years 2 months ago

"Ah, it looks much less repetive now. The font looks a little strangely placed, perhaps shifting it to the right and a bit lower would look better?"
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Anime Worlds - Which Would You Live In?

4 years 2 months ago

"The anime world I would most like to live in is the Card Captor Sakura world. ><; Why? Because I found it so sweet to the point of being unrealistic, even with the weird CLAMP fetishes of having very young girls paired with middle aged men and yaoi. The people are so seemingly perfectly kind and selfless, especially Sakura's family. What appeals to me is how their household is run and the atmosphere of it. Nobody complains about having to do the chores, and everyone is responsible and considerate. @.@ It doesn't hurt that everyone seems to be multi-talented too, Sakura's father for example who can cook, clean, sew and still be a university professor at the same time. After encountering so many inconsiderate and thoughtless people, it would be really nice if I could live in a world populated with sweet and caring ccs characters. "
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CAT POW-A

4 years 2 months ago

"May I suggest you lower the opacity of the speedlines? Maybe now all you need is the Meow! text returned but this time black with a white outline to match the character? Somehow I think that the white outline is rather thick and could be done without, but that's up to you. XD"
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Kiddy Grade

4 years 2 months ago

"May I suggest you shift the character to a more central position? And perhaps move them further up a bit, so we can see more of the reflection in the water below? Also, the spiral sparkle thing looks cut off on the right hand side, maybe you can fix that? Maybe changing the blending mode of the spiral sparkles to overlay or soft light would make it look better? Similarly for the font? I think a black blurred stroke/glow blending mode soft light with 50% opacity with white text 100% opacity blending mode soft light may look nice. "
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My new wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"This looks fine except that maybe you could have added more birds to the left? If not, then perhaps remove the birds altogether, because at the moment it looks rather crowded around the character. "
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Full Metal Alchemist

4 years 2 months ago

"Perhaps by tracing the background, you can get rid of the bubbles and words? I also suggest that you don't overlay the character in front over the background. "
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