ab-angel

I, ab-angel (Alden Bunag), will be at your service. Don't worry about me sacrificing time, it's not like I study or anything, lol, well, I don't really have to study anyways, my classes are pretty easy so far. I'll help you write your story, aye mate! Also, if you'd let me, I'd like to make some highly detailed drawings of some of your characters, preferrably Cirrus.

BeyondSpectrality

Haha, I know your last comment doesn't pertain to anything I said but I say now that organization and compiling full ideas is hard...I want to do a futuristic novel trilogy and I have the whole idea and even some of it written but when it comes to the whole idea I'm just bleank on the ins outs and in betweens ;/

Or I just start drawing zombies and get side-tracked *dies*.

ab-angel

Damn! If I had your skills my manga would've been on it's third volume by now! Although I only have the first volume written up and only the 1st chapter of the second volume ^^.

EEEHHHH! I WANT TO LEARN HOW TO DO THAT!! lol

If your manga even does get published, hook me up! lol, don't worry, I'll pay.

If you ever need help with writing, I'll be of service!

ellunatica

O______O;; wow. your art is just amazing. the manga panel also looks very clean and neat! but in the full body picture of cirrus, i think the body and the legs are too short compared to everything else. other than that... good luck with your manga! it's looking really good!

ab-angel

Ahh, well, I tried to make as much sense of it as I could, while trying to figure it out myself :P

Oh and what do you think of the names I gave him and her?

OOO! New character!

Is he evil? If he is, what a cute bad guy, lol. He looks like one of those characters that doesn't age.

In the year 2130 B.C.E, robots were mass produced in order to become "slaves" for the humans. However, by 2140 B.C.E, robots began to attack humans and take over cities and town. In order to counter this, one man, Professor (blah) proposed the transformation from humans to cyborgs, so that people can protect themselves. With having the intelligence of a human, and the calculating and analyzing power of a robot, they would once again florish and take control over the robots. However, the government, does not approve of the Professor's proposal and takes necessary action in order to prevent him from going further with his idea. What they didn't know was that the Professor already created a prototype cyborg that he planned to use it as an experiment to gather more human subjects to work with and hopefully turn into cyborgs. He programmed this cyborg, Sosuke (sorry, first name that popped into my head when I looked at him again) to neutralize humans, but one of the professor's assistants secretly overrides the main program with a sub program which would crash the main program if it ever activated.
During "Sosuke's" first test run, the army was able to intercept him and destroy him. Although he wasn't harmed in the process, the override program was activated causing "Sosuke" to fall off from a high area and becomes damaged. The army assumed that "Sosuke" was eliminated, so they proceeded to the Professor's company building.
The next day, "Rina" (yet again, first name that popped into my mind) found "Sosuke" and brought him to her home. "Sosuke," accepting her hospitality, stayed at her house. As he is watching the news, he sees the report of yesterday's events. As "Rina" came home with the repairs, he quickly turned off the TV.
Instead of purely neutralizing humans, every night his main program inside of him became active, causing him to go off on a killing spree. Soon, he met yet another cyborg like him, in which he forms a friendship with. The "night time fun" being their main activity together. Since the override chip was damaged, it takes about 6 hours for it to detect "Sosuke's" actions. When it does sense it, it makes him feel ill, causing him to go home without another thought.
One week later, "Sosuke's" injuries are nearly recovered. "Rina" then invitesd her dad over, which turned out to be the Professor's assisstant! He revealed to "Sosuke" and "Rina" what the Professor is planning to do, and reconfigurated "Sosuke's" main program with an alternative program in which this time, it "kills robots".

ab-angel

Aw, where's the awesome looking characters?

ab-angel

You've inspired me to take one last crack at designing my characters. I already made 5 attempts and I thought that I was satisfied with the fifth one, but now that I look at it, I have to do it one last time.

MapleSky

ahh sugoi~~i like your sketches.
how long did it take you to draw these images?

PANDAgirl

Hey, I really love your concept sketches :] I really think your future Manga might be a success (if the story is good as well).

Do you have their colors planned out as well? If so, can we see a colored piece?

ab-angel

By chance can you help me out? I'm not very good when it comes to drawing weapons and I just need to draw a staff for my character. You think you could make a quick sketch for me? I'll send you the picture.

Eliah - 15
Ash - 13
Finn - 16

I'd love to write a story on this, but I'll see what more you come up with. I noticed that you like drawing guys, I do too. It's rare when I draw a female anime character.