Erementar Gerad

4 years 1 month ago

"What the...this wall seems to be a mix of diff PS things, but not very well blended =P Personally, I don't think scan lines really fit this wall, so you can lose it. The bg is okay, but a bit on the pixelated side, try touching it up a bit more to make it umm...better? XDDD The glow around the chars seem a bit awkward...you can loosen it up a bit because it looks like it's strangling the chars =P The text also seems out of place, you can simply jazz it up a bit more to resolve that prob. OTher than that, it's not bad! =D"
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Trinity Blood

4 years 1 month ago

"Wow...that's one dark wall...I love it =) I suggest adding more elements and things in your wallpaper so that it's not so plain. Besides that, I really love the feel. Personally, my interpretation of the wall is taht the girl's an angel, so maybe try expanding that idea by adding some outer glow? Great job, keep up the good work!"
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Ugetsu Hakua Imperia

4 years 2 months ago

"Oooh...it seems to be trying to glow, but I think you're holding some of that 'glow' by using a glossy floor or w/e it is =P You may want to concentrate some lights here and there to make it more exciting =P No offense, but try and make something different >_< The galleries in AP are filled with walls like that =P"
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Bleach Wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"LMAO! I know you are ^^ jkjk. If you really want to submit that, you'd have to show more technique XDXD You can try vectoring and fool around with the colours to make it comical. Second, no profanity =X Besides that, I love it. Simply funny and entertaining >_<"
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Vectorage

4 years 2 months ago

"Just simply outline the places you want to colour, but instead of having a line fill, have a colour fill."
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First wall I feel good enough about posting here

4 years 2 months ago

"Hmm...the idea is actually really good, but htere's not enough technique =P I suggest making Shinji a bit more clear and making the things in the bg like shadowy and stuff =X agh...sorry, my head's a bit fuzzy +_+"
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First Actual Wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"Woah...hmm...there's that size prob =P I suggest restarting the whole project in a larger size XD The char on the left doesn't look that bad, but I can only comment on it once the resolution is a bit bigger. I'd get rid of the shadow of the char or w/e it is =P You may also want to get rid of the text, sometimes the image itself is already self-explanatory. You can always type the text in the author's comment instead of the wall."
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Simple-ism Attempt

4 years 2 months ago

"Hmm...you can also try puttine ht etext in bubbles to make it cuter =D The background...yea, tone it down a little. Yo uamy also try applying some variation in the size of the lines. Besides those minor changes, it looks good so far!"
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Need c&c

4 years 2 months ago

"The lighting's pretty good, but the text...=P You can adjust the font to another one that fits the wall better. I'd also get rid of the stroek and the weird glow around it =/ Best option is probably making it white then changing the layer to overlay XD I dunno, you may want to play around with the text a bit more. Other than that, great start!"
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Eureka 7 wall

4 years 2 months ago

"Hmm...this looks really tech, with all the grey and all that. A tad simple, but it's fine =P The flat text and colours have a big contrast with the 3D feel of the mecha. I'd also stick with one mecha position so the viewer will know what to focus on. You can try enlarging one and making the other like a hologram XD This is probably sounding all like jibberish =P To summarize what I just said, the mecha's too 3D =/ Maybe you can get rid of the drop shadow?"
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Rose Femme Fatale

4 years 2 months ago

"LMFAO...sorry, but she looks old XD hmmm...I like the kind of clouds you did in the bg, you can expand that and make it kind of like high above the clouds or something - a 'divine' room XD The pink REALLY stands out, along with the text. I know that is probably what you intended, but maybe you can make it stand out another way? It's so bright compared to the bg, maybe you can lighten everything and just have the colour of the clothes make the char stand out =P Hope that helped...=X"
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Tokko Wallpaper WiP

4 years 2 months ago

"The bg is extremely well done O.O One major prob, the rain looks a bit weird. It just looks like a plain Photoshop filter, and we don't want that =P You may want to try blurring it and apply some concentrated rain around the char, that way, it'll look like the char is in the rain =/ hmm...you can also fool around with grunge textures for the bg to make it more expressive? =P Good luck with this wall, it's looking good~!"
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Rose Femme Fatale

4 years 2 months ago

"Maybe a lamp? A small chair or a mirror? It seems to be a girl's room, so I guess mirrors won't be odd =P"
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Shuffle!

4 years 2 months ago

"Hmm...this is interesting...I'm not really sure about the grids in the bg, maybe you can make them more comical? How you do that is up to you =P This wall isn't bad, but there's one thing I should mention: the quality of the chars =/ The chars on the far left and right seem to be a little less Q than the ones in the middle for some reason...I'm sure you can solve that prob =P Good luck!"
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Yet another Gundam SEED Destiny wall...

4 years 2 months ago

"Hmm...I dunno about texture...I liked it better without texture =/ The blur you applied + texture makes the MS in the bg really messed up in terms of distance =X Come on, add more people, workers, wires, sparks and such. IT NEEDS MORE ACTION! Just make two versions and have us vote on which one is better: texture or no texture =/"
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IntermittentMentalPrison

4 years 2 months ago

"Bg and everything looks pretty nice...I'm not too sure with a green tone O.O Looks a bit freaky for me XD You may also want to fool around with the text a bit more to fit the mood =P The umm...lightness change in the text is fine, so you can leave it be. So far, because you placed the char in a broad landscape, the text doesn't really match the wall XD"
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Crazy Azumanga Wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"Agh...my eyes T-T It's a new kind of idea and I like it, but there can be other ways to show it =P Your wall is so umm...dazzling I can't focus on the char XD I think just making a normal dotted bg or something like that will do =/"
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Familiar?

4 years 2 months ago

"I don't think this thread belongs in Session Zero...I think it'll be closed soon XD"
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Post your sexy self

4 years 2 months ago

"I still own you in terms of paperz!! XD"
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New Wallie

4 years 2 months ago

"Well, first of all, you'll have to distinguish the borders between land and water =P the colour and lighting all looks pretty good, so just add a few more improvements and it'll be perfect. The tree looks a bit weird...before you edit the tree though, edit the bg to make the tree fit in more =D Keep it going, i'm sure it'll look great!"
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Nana wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"I vote for #1 =/
No text, I think that'll just ruin the simplicity of the wall."
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