Kingdom heart wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"Hmm...the photo looks pretty good now =D I'd stick with one focus of text, so either you get rid of 'friends forever' or 'Kingdom hearts'. The bg looks a lot better, but you can still do a few more adjustments. Right now, the colours have a hard edge to them. Since the bg is in the far distance, try blurring it a little. Second, the extraction of the char need a bit more work =P I still see parts of the char where you haven't erased. I also see the texture that you had from your previous wall...why don't you just drag the char you cut earlier on there? It's gradually becoming better, so keep it up!"
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Reika Wall

4 years 2 months ago

"Hey, that's actually pretty good! If you apply the text properly, I'm sure it'll work. Personally, Reika looks like an angel with all those feathers =P Maybe you can elaborate on the feel by adjusting some lights? I'd also like to see the origin of the feathers =P"
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Kingdom Hearts

4 years 2 months ago

"This took a while to edit...anyways, here's the WIP so far: http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/3298/brilliance6fi.jpg I totally changed the bg as nuni suggested and tried to level it all out as gid said. =P I added some text and hopefully, it doesn't degrade the wall... I also added a few more textures, thus the colour variation. Feel free to comment! I want this to be one of my better walls after a load of crappy ones =/ btw, I intended the wings to look like fairy dust XD

(now in the gallery)"
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Soul Calibur Wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"I see your attempt at extracting the pic, at it looks fine! Great job! The borders don't really seem to fit with the overall wall; in other words, they clash with the green and red in the wall =P I believe you can remove them and the wall will look even better =D"
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Kingdom heart wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"You still have 'friends' wrong XD hmm...sorry if you feel offended by my following criticism =P First of all, it's best to only have one focus, meaning only the photo or only the char standing in the water. Secondly, your texture doesn't really word, once again, back to the focus thing. Thirdly, the bg's okay...but it has to be smaller and further apart from the char to have the perspective make sense. Finally, the text doesn't really match... you can go to www.dafonts.com to find more fonts =D"
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Kingdom Hearts

4 years 2 months ago

"Well, this is a quickly done wall, but hopefully, it's effective. Okay, here's my WIP: http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/8585/brilliance2bt.jpg I'm having with the bg and the wings... The lighting is all messed up so I need help there T_T I also want opinions on whether I should apply text or not. Basically, I need help on the whole wall =D Thanks guys!"
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CAT POW-A

4 years 2 months ago

"I think you're missing more lighting...the bg seems a bit too plain. In other words, it's too flat. You can try using a gradient to colour the buildings instead of using a fill. The dots in the sky is too...umm...can't find that word, but I think it'll be a tad more appealing if you enlarge the dots =p"
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(Gundam SEED D) Help with ideas to fix this wall

4 years 2 months ago

"Same with the previous two comments, but with some minor additions. I can barely see the words 'Back on the' XD I'd make it clearer so that one doesn't have to stare at that place for 10 seconds before seeing it =X Keep it up! ;)"
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Suggestions/ Help with my Panorama Wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"Hmm...that's a nice concept, but it'll be incredibly and unimaginably (however you spell that word =/) hard. You might have realized this already, but the scale of the wall is way too small. One you can you change that is by recreating a whole new bg with all the chars in it... The text is also a bit weird...I can't tell whether it's a glow or a bevel =P Good luck with this wall! =D"
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Oh geez, I'm walling again.

4 years 2 months ago

"Hey...come on, you've made awesome walls. Those ideas are yours! As long as you're able to portray your idea clearly and with skill in your wall, anyone will approve it ;D"
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Kingdom heart wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"Hmm...that's a nice attempt =D First of all, the texture doesn't work...esp how it clashes with the photograph. I'd prefer the photo to remain white and glossy =) Second, spelling errors =.= It's spelt 'Friends Forever' =X It'll also look better if you add a bg =D"
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Oh geez, I'm walling again.

4 years 2 months ago

"...come on...that's so vague XD I seriously can't give any comments until I've seen more elements in your WIP If all I see are scribbles, of course I'd say it's sh*t. I'd say you'd have to work on it more before you get any real constructive criticism =P"
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Kyuubi

4 years 2 months ago

"Well, this is a poorly grunged wall T-T As you can see from my previous works, I'm no good at grunge. Anyways, here's the WIP: http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/1005/narutofierce8wm.jpg I really need help and assistance on the bg T-T I had all the char, fire, etc. before I realized that whatever bg I thought of wasn't going to fit. So you guys can either help me on this bg or suggest a new one T-T I really need help...T-T I'd really appreciate it if you guys can lend a hand =P Thanks!"
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Takeshi Okazaki

4 years 2 months ago

"I agree with the scan part...but I'll have to correct people once again. The scan is NOT poorly extracted, I just left the blue on his hair thinking that I can somehow tone it with the bg T_T It seems quite obviously I can't =X I'll probably change the scan or redraw it some way...."
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Takeshi Okazaki

4 years 2 months ago

"Phew...finally did something with this scan. Mind you, the whole WIP was done from scratch except for the char T-T Well, here it is: http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/433/pain1cy.jpg Specifically, I need help on the lighting and the sky... I don't know how to make it more vibrant and lively...maybe you guys can suggest some colours, techniques, etc? Not only am I looking for advice on the sky, but I'm looking for comment for everything. Thanks guys!"
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Bleach vs. Naruto Wallpapers

4 years 2 months ago

"I believe this post doesn't belong in Session Zero... Try posting this in another thread ;D
Anyways, I'll attempt to answer your Q. The reason for this change is probably a trend, like in any anime. The pop art in Bleach just seems a lot more interesting to play around with than Naruto's random style. Naruto gives us too many varieties, one can portray Sasuke as a dark, ruthless character meanwhile another can portray him as a lonely and pitiful character. When one walls Naruto, it is hard to carry the message across because of all the feelings the anime gives the viewers (at least for me XD) Bleach is easier because it is basically straightforward and easy to express. Besides, Bleach scans pwnz Naruto scans =X"
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Gundam- Strike-Freedom*Need some tips*

4 years 2 months ago

"This goes for every wall, there's no definite 'good' text for a char or w/e. The text varies on the mood of your wall. Personally, I prefer the text you used in your second version over your first version because it has that tech feeling. You can browse through www.dafonts.com for more fonts =D"
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LOVELESS Wallpaper

4 years 2 months ago

"Well, I understand the concept you're trying to portray, but unfortunately, it's not very effective... First of all, your text is weird... Before you fix your text, you should make a bg. Seeing the wall as it is now, the char looks rahter like it is poor quality instead of grunged. I suggest making a bg or something to show that it IS grunged or make it obvious that it's grunged. Afterwards, you can fool around with the text to fit it with the wall. Good luck with your wall!"
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Kingdom Hearts

4 years 2 months ago

"Hmm...thanks for the comments guys! Well, here it is so far: http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/9727/kingdomhearts2pz.jpg I added a lot more ligthing because I found that it was more effective than my original idea. I jazzed up the text a bit, places a swirl of light around Disney castle and that's about it... I'm still open for criticism, so keep it coming!"
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what do you think of this

4 years 2 months ago

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take out the words, make it bigger and replace it with strike freedom or lacus

Someone obviously haven't read the posts by Tris in Session Zero. Comment on the wall, not on what you think the waller should do. If that's the case, why don't you make a wall of your own with Strike Freedom or Lacus?

Anyways....I totally agree with Tris. The bg is too bland and the image of Justice is poor. The text looks too plain. I'd suggest looking through some other walls and learn from how the artist applied effects to their bg and text.
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Kingdom Hearts

4 years 2 months ago

"Sigh...it was a total of 4 attempts at this wall until I came up with this T_T Well, here it is: http://img273.imageshack.us/img273/6195/kingdomhearts0tq.jpg I'm having a lot of trouble with the text, bg, and the moon. Feel free to say anything about this wall because I really need it =D"
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Need HELp

4 years 2 months ago

"Hmm...maybe you can try vectoring it? It's the best way =P"
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FEATHERSS!

4 years 2 months ago

"Usually, wallers make and draw their own feathers, or we copy some images of feathers and change it in a way so that they look like wings =P"
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Sayoko needs your input

4 years 2 months ago

"Omg...you never cease to amaze me XD That's excellent! NOW SUBMIT IT SO I CAN FAVE *drools* Before you do that, put your signature =D"
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