w00tazn

Lol hot.

luna

You just don't know that if I were to continue drawing/finishing them, they would look bad, lol.

hagane28

I think that the colouring it´s good, and vector skills are good too, but i think that you need to take care of character´s proportions, but it´s a good job ^^ still can be improved

Ryuu

Gun control DOES NOT WORK, plain and simple.

TertiusViducius

I'd say its not perfect but to put something as specific as not "professionally good"? I'd say thats a wee bit off there. I know I can be tactless at times but that kinda hits the mark right there. I'm pretty sure by all the comments I read here most people got what you said Machdude but be more careful... There are those that would flame ye for that. Besides, I have seen "proffessional" work that isn't in any way as good as this therefore that is indeed a biased statement there.

I agree with you however it isn't perfect and yes Artist I see that you see that as well. But I would like to throw in a small critique question here. In what way does the title have anything to do with the picture? I know its pretty subjective but the picture sends out a "relax" message more than a "breath" message. You even had here close her eyes and seem more meditative. Its really subjective so it isn't really that big. I'm kinda after the picture title relation here so its best to hear what the artist had in mind for it to get it answered. Oh, perhaps someone out there might say "relax" incurrs "breathing" my immediate response to that is - Those are two different things and represent each other differently. You can say they go together but you cannot say its the same thing. Kinda tactless myself right now aren't I but my curiosity got the better of me. I post this because the act of breathing here does not seem to be in focus because its not the apparent thing going on by means of the message the picture conveys. A very subjective point but it is something considered in competitions.

Ryuu

Get this:

The state of Virginia allows legally held Concealed Weapons on to school campuses, but Virginia Tech was the only school to deny this right to its students. Guess where the shooting occurred? In this "gun-free zone".

Oregon and Utah allow Concealed Weapon on to school campuses. Guess what? No school shootings there.

The truth about gun control is that "gun-free zones" are an invitation for criminals. The criminals themselves state that it's not the police they fear, but it is the armed citizen that they do fear.

If there were one responsible student or falcuty member with a Concealed Carry in that dorm, the shooting would have a drastically lower bodycount.

I'm just going to ignore any anti-gun arguments after this. Because this is the cold hard truth. And anti-gunners ignore the cold hard truth. Those who ignore the cold hard truth are ignorant fools, and as such, there's no point in arguing with them.

Machdude

I have to say. Its too clean.

Machdude

Althoguh you have potential, the characters all seem to follow the same model. They end up looking too much like each other. They also look kind of stubby, subtracting from the epic factor. While you have some level of skill, I can't say that its at the level where people can enjoy it at older ages. Its just to chibi. I find that if you can slim them down and make the head smaller, you can get a slightly more realistic approach. Your not the first one to actually go into chibi style though. Its just that there are too many new people who jump on the bandwagon.